Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.
Meeting new ponies, going from one part of Canterlot to the next... and filling out tax forms. Being the social elite is a hard and somewhat lonely proposition for Fleur de Lis. Perhaps, after filing those forms she could go back and enjoy the gardens once more.
Page generated in 0.121 seconds
Total duration
1,060 users online
2,162,261 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Cute very cute. You did well. I may have to try my hand at writing a fic.
Wonderful little slice of life :)
I see potential for a sequel or a miniseries.
Fav & Like. Also put in 'Golden Slice'
One thing though: The transition between the tranquillity of the gardens with it's slower pace and Cheerilee's chipper way seemed a little bit sudden (which of course was intended).
Maybe you could have depicted the processes of Fleur adapting to the new situation a little bit more detailed to smooth that transition a bit without it loosing it's suddenness.
Aside from that it was perfect.
5560160 Oh, of course, thank you so much for the feedback. I'll edit it when I get around to it, thanks so much.
5559975 Do iiiiit.
This is an adorably excellent fic. The interaction between Fleur de Lis and Cheerilee was sweet and true to their character. (And thanks for spelling Fleur's name right. "Fleur dis Lee" doesn't look or sound as elegant.)
Good story.