Registered on: February 23, 2012
Author's Notes: Will go through a revision to fix numerous grammar mistakes, along with an updated description.
Author's Note: This is my first fiction so please excuse it for being kinda bad
Since you became a brony, you have always dreamed of being with Rainbow Dash. How would you feel if that dream actually came true.
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holy crap grade 10? DO YOU KNOW ME?BECAME BRONY SAME WAY(I was not depression my former brony friend challenged me)
Too short, and I'm not sure that haters would want to kill an entire sentinant race of peaceful creatures. That to me seems unrealistic.
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Oh hi there XD
Also, neat story!
549563 Than you I was expecting reception to be less positive than what it is.
Meh waiting.. is boring. I want another chapter XD
This has got to be real someday. I really would love to live in Equestria.
Boring chapter, need moar now!
Man, this should be the Rapture! Instead of Heaven, it should be Equestria. That should happen on December 21. I WANT IT NAO!
Awww crap. Those guys might just get banished to the moon.
KILL 'EM!
692100 I doubt I will have them murdered. But their punishment will be severe.
Ah, finally done after about 3 1/2 hours of none stop writing its finally done. My eyes hurt. I give a huge thanks to Celestia Radio for playing nonstop, diverse music while I wrote this chapter. It's offical, Celestia Radio is my favorite radio station. Well anyway hope you like the latest chapter. I need some sleep.
Until next time everypony
-hunterz263
Wait for it.... SECOND. HA Yea! achievement unlocked *looks at others faces -->
* Sorry XD
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I really don't think this is what would happen. Celestia is FAIR.
I thought Celestia would gin kill them all
I thought Celestia would go molestia on them all
so much win
Oh my, finally got a new chapter out. Well more of a interlude but still better than nothing right? So anyway, I know this chapter is a little on the short side but hey it's a sub-chaper not a full one. Anyway I just want to tell you all that I am writing chapter 5 later today (It's 4:32 A.M. right now). Also this is related to the bully scene I put in here. I know it's a real problem, I saw it in my school all the time. That is why if you are being bullied in school for being a brony or over anything, please tell a teacher or your parents. Heck even tell me if you want to. I understand the effects of bulling because I was bullied to when I was little. So I hope you enjoyed the chapter irregardless.
Until next time everypony
-hunterz263
Dafuq? Appledash? Seriously, they're friends, not marefriends. God, if you want to do this, then fine. But don't expect any sympathy from me.
790632 You just wait.
To any and all who have posted "first" "second" or any variation of this, you must know this:
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792883 Haha, thank you for that.
No problem, I really don't like it when they do that. It's annoying.
great he dreamng with RD and he's going to get beat up by AJ just great please update soon
808889 Don't worry I am writing chapter 5 right now.
may god bless your talent in writting story like this one
808979 Is that a compliment/
yes
808997 Oh thank you than. You get an RD kiss.
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thank for the RD kiss
All of my stars...
ALL OF THEM
have a spike-stache
So when can we expect official chapter 5?
914611 Soon. I hope.
914623 If you need help, i'm always around fimfic/skype lending a helping hoof.
914648 Thanks but I think I will be better once I get chapter 5 out. I kept holding it off and do not feel like writing it. But I'm going to force myself to write the rest tonight, I'm almost there.
914658 Don't strain yourself too hard, but I wish you the best of luck.
those evil beings must to be sent to the moon twi demands it
i hereby declare this book 100% pinkie approved
956655 Next chapter should be out tomorrow. Just have to sit down and write it tonight.
And also, STEPHANO, are you a barrel.
956722 heck no! barrels suck
take this you've earned it
984965 -takes spike's mustache- Thank you good sir. And don't worry chapter 5 will be out really really really soon.
Wow, I thought this day would never come. After a month of waiting, chapter 5 is finally out.
It's big, I'm even surprised it's this large, I thought it would only be 4,000 words. 
Nope, longer. Well I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. If there is anything I learned from this, it's to never procrastinate writing. I'm sorry it took this long, oh please don't be mad at me. 
Anyway, leave your thoughts in the comments below. I can't guarantee every chapter from here on out will be this long, but we will just have to see.
I love you all for your patience, it will never happen again. I hope.
Until next time everypony
-hunterz263
This is an interesting story, please keep going. That cliffhanger is killing me.
991190 I'll probably start brainstorming tomorrow now that I'm free from that chapter.
Curse you cliffhangers
Whoa, Dash just walks right in. I'm surprised he didn't just faint away.
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