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hunterz263


Registered on: February 23, 2012

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Twilight Sparkle has always been meant for something great ever since cracking the secret to Starswirl the Bearded's spell. Now it is the time to figure out and see what her destiny truly is.

Author's Note: Inspired by this song. I also recommend you listen to it while reading.

Submission to EQD: Failed. [Gosh there was a lot of errors that I did not even know could be errors]

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It has been forever since I have done anything like this! I am sooo excited that I managed to get something out, everypony! :pinkiehappy:

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! Thank you all so much for being patient with my lack of ideas and lack of work flow. I am so glad I managed to push this out with a song! My first song inspired story!

I hope you all like it because this is the first story I wrote to make me tear up a little.

Hope you all comment and enjoy it. :heart:

--hunterz263

Really good job! So sad though. And Twilight never saw her friends that morning
:pinkiegasp::fluttershysad::applejackunsure::rainbowderp::raritycry:

So... magic lasts forever as in she's immortal? Immune to death? :rainbowderp:

At first I was like-

NO!!! NOT LUNA JNKAN,ENVRENBV,NERVB,VRBEK!!! :raritydespair:

Then I was like-

WHY DOES MAGIC LAST FOREVER? DAMN YOU TWILIGHT JNKJNBAKBVBV!!! :flutterrage:

Lol

Well, damn. That was surprisingly powerful for a 2k fic.

I love it. Well done.

~Skeeter the Lurker

2780047

Well... no, she is not immortal either. Consider it like this: The Alicorns have a cycle every, oh, two-thousand years or so. Within that time, they must find replacements to lead the nation of Equestria for the next time period. Twilight will have to do the same now.

2780216

Thank you so much. Before I posted this thing, I was sort of losing confidence as to how sad it would be, or if it was cliche or not. I guess I was wrong.

2780561

Very much so. One normally sees it as Celestia going before Luna.

Not the other way around.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2779884

And she will never live the same life again. It is open to interpretation what happens, but it is a sad situation completely. Destiny sucks...

2780567

Luna has always been the weaker of the sisters. Youth does not alwats mean you are the strongest. My grandfather died about six year ago and he was about five year younger than my grandmother. (Who is still alive today)

2780574

Oh, trust me, I know.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2780163

Did I give you the feels :unsuresweetie:

2780581

Well then... thank you for reading and the favorite. Feel free to watch or something, I don't know.

2780568>> and her friends don't even know
What is Pinkie gunna do :pinkiegasp:

2780686

I... don't know actually.

2780699 errmmm something like this

:pinkiegasp: WHERE'S TWILIGHT
:rainbowderp: no idea
:duck: I haven't seen her at all today darling. She didnt even show up at our meeting
:pinkiegasp:EHHHH WHERE HAS SHE GONE?!?!?!?
:applejackunsure: No idea
:moustache: *Poof*
:pinkiegasp: a letter from twilight
:ajsmug: it's says The Princesses are gone...:pinkiegasp:... And now twilight is ruler of Equestria
:pinkiegasp: * Pinkie drinks glass of water and spits it out* FFFFTFTFTFTTTTTT

2780726

That sounds about right to me. Eh, I won't make a side-story to this... or... hm...

2780728 Pretty Accurate
Sorry I forgot fluttershy in there
:fluttershysad: Oh No

2780728, Like your avatar image:rainbowlaugh:

2780770

Hahaha, maybe I should have you write me a side-story to this.

2780773

Thank you. Everyone seems to like it.

2780775 OMFG YOU WOULD?!

2780836

Probably. I got nothing and you seem to have ideas. But, one thing required: Watch. :raritywink:

So good but sad :fluttershbad: Really really excellent job. I loves it :raritycry::raritydespair: It's just amazing. I'm not gonna egg you on for a sequel, but I think it would be like 1000 years in the future or more and she's teaching two colts; Moonlight and Sunlight. I don't know, those are really generic names but you get the point. Whatever you do, this fic was fantastic :pinkiehappy:

2785166

That's not a bad episodic-thing now... Hm... :duck:

>Is banished to the moon
>Returns after a thousand years
>Dies three years later

Why does Luna always get the short end of the stick in these kinds of stories?

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