[Second Person]
[You X Dash]
After spending most of your life doing to same routine over and over again you felt like you needed a change so you bought a ticket to Ponyville. What will happen?
[A/N]
This is the rewrite of my story Your Little Adventure because I felt like doing it because the original felt like it was to fast paced
Editor: SpikeSuperme13
Cover image made by me
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Well here we go again
nice cover!
down dat rabbit hole~!
Brilliant story :) if you're in need of any OC (obviously you'll get a few of these for any further adventures), hit me up, Keep up the good work
In the cover picture, does anyone else think Dash's neck is a bit chubby.
Well bit of a Joel in that case
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Wow, I'm guessing you got a good editor! I don't see any grammatical errors here!
what about when it said stretch instead of str-
*slap*
ow!
Good job
Awesome start to the story sir!
If you ever need another OC you can use mine. 
Great chapter ya got here. I enjoyed it a lot.
Great 2nd chapter, although it seemed a little fast paced, but that can be over looked. See you next time.
Great chapter man. Though you have some grammatical and homonimical errors...wait, that's not a word.
Okay, you put "Challenge Excepted" instead of "Challenge Accepted".
Other than that, keep up the good work!
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http://youtu.be/WRu_-9MBpd4?t=54s
0:54 - 0:57 is pretty much my response
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*Sigh of relieve*
Now someone can re-write that one and take all the credit...What?
Well, the wonders have not yet left the world it seems. Happy they haven’t, I enjoyed this chapter, as did the other stories of this series that I’ve read 3 years ago.
Are you planning to continue, author?
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Yee
Why isn't there a second person tag?
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That is beacuse this story is very old, the 2nd person tag wasn’t present during that time. But it still can be added.
holy crap..... ITS ALIVE. 4 years and its actually alive
I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Now comes the following morning where we are all sh*tfaced.
Good chapter as always!
Loved the cloud part and the beginning! Always like how “we” get comfortable on a cloud, if only we really could!
Winter Hearth is a nice character, too. Can’t be a better night than that.
Ah Rarity, the always teasing fashionista. Just wait until a certain pegasus hears about this!
Oh Man, i wish this fanfic had more chapters, it's SO GOOD!