Rewrite: Your Little Adventure

by My Only Weakness


Bandages and Measurements

“OH MY GOSH, STAR! ARE YOU OKAY!?” A voice came from above

Rolling over slightly, trying not to cause yourself any more pain, you look up to see Rainbow Dash fly towards you with a worried look on her face.

Putting your hooves under you, you push up from the ground, slowly, and groaning “I’m, I’m good”

“Here let me help you,” Dash said as she helps you back onto your hooves.

Once you were finally standing, even though your legs were a little shaky, you manage to stay upright and breath in some air to calm you down a bit.

“Ooh, your face is all cut up,” Dash said as she places a hoof under your chin to turn your face towards her so she can get a better look.

Pulling your face away from her hoof you stroke your face to see if you can feel them. You hiss as you touched one of the cuts.

“I’m so sorry!” She quickly apologies as she stays close to you since you were still a little off balanced

“It’s fine,” you say to her “I’ve survived worse”

“No! It’s not fine!” Dash yelled at you, making you jump slightly “I could have seriously injured you! And there is no way I would be able to live with that type of guilt and-“ she suddenly stops mid-sentence and her mouth gapes open. When you were about to ask what was wrong she shouts “YOUR LEG IS BLEEDING!”

Looking over to where she was pointing to you see your left hind leg and a pretty big cut on the side of it with blood dripping out and staining your fur. Shocked would be a word to describe the look on your face and the only words that came out of your mouth were “Oh yeah”

“Come on quick! We need to get you to Fluttershy!” Dash said as she grabs your front hoof and started ascending to the sky with the flap of her wings.

Flapping your wings as well you let Dash drag you through the air towards where the yellow pegasus lives. You then ask “Okay… but why Fluttershy?”

“Because she has first aid training! She’ll know what to do!” She said frantically as she continues to lead you by the hoof.

“But so do nurses” you suggest

“She lives closer, come on!” Dash replied tugging on your arm. She then starts flapping her wings fast dragging you along with her, while you flap your wings lightly.

You look back at your leg and cringe at the sight of the blood flowing out of it. The cut was as long as half of your hoof and by the amount of red coming from it, it must have been pretty deep.

Not before long you and Dash arrived at a small cottage on the outside of Ponyville. As you’re flying over to it you spot many different types of animals all running around, being feed and other stuff that animals do. You both reach the ground in front of the door, but you keep your injured hind leg from touching the ground.

Knocking on the door fast and loudly Dash yells “FLUTTERSHY! WE NEED YOUR HELP!”, slightly scaring some of the animals behind you.

Even after yelling Dash continues to bang on the door. Looking behind you watch all the animals run off scared from Dash’s loud voice, you chuckle slightly and then look back down at your leg and cringe yet again at the sight of it. The blood from your leg has Almost reached down to your hoof and about to drip onto the ground. Not wanting to disgust yourself by looking at your wound to turn back to Dash who was still knocking. You then notice that Dash was still holding your hoof in hers.

Just as you were about to ask Dash a question the wooden door suddenly opened with a long pink maned pegasus standing there with a worried look on her face.

“W-What’s wrong, Rainbow Dash?” she asked with a soft uneasy tone in her voice

“StarGazer cut his leg! And it’s bleeding pretty bad” Dash explains, to which Fluttershy gasped “I was hoping you could maybe help with your first aid thingy!”

“O-Okay! I’ll be right back!” She then turned around and galloped back into her house, leaving you and Dash outside.

Dash, probably not realizing, was still holding onto your hoof and started gripping it tighter. She then turns towards you and asked: “How are you holding up?”

Raising one eyebrow at her you say “I’m fine. It’s just a cut, nothing to make a big deal out of”

“I know. But you had a nasty landing!” Dash proclaims, squeezing your hoof harder “And you slid across the grass! So maybe some dirt and some other stuff could have got in your cut and you could get an infection” she continued while stepping closer to you “It’s better to be safe than sorry!”

Deciding not to argue with her you just agree with her and say “Yeah I guess you’re right… you can let go of the hoof now by the way”

Confused Dash looks down at her hoof to see she was still holding on to yours. Blushes she lets go and say “S-sorry, I just got a little worried”

Chuckling you say back to her “I could tell”

Soon Fluttershy comes back, hovering in the air, carrying a green box with a plus sign on it in one hoof and a cup of water with a rag init in the other. She looks at you and then your cut on your leg and say, in her soft voice “Ohh that looks bad. Could you please sit up against that fence, StarGazer… if you don’t mind”

Looking over to where she meant you nod and trot over to it, while still trying to keep your injured leg off the ground. As you reach the fence you turn back around to lean up against it and slide down into a sitting position and extending your two hind legs out, again keeping the injured one off the ground.

Fluttershy than comes over and sits beside your cut leg and places both the water and the first aid kit on the ground. While Dash trots over and sits by your other leg. Bring the rag out of the cup Fluttershy dabs the cloth around your wound, cleaning your fur. Once she's done that she then rinses the red coloured water off the cloth onto the grass and then dips it back into the jug. The yellow pegasus than places the wet rag on your cut cleaning it out, to which you try and hold in your pain.

Once she was done with cleaning your cut she then opens up the first aid kit and pulled out an antibiotic ointment tube. She then grabbed a cotton ball and drips some of the ointment onto it. Before she began dabbing the cotton ball onto your injury she looked at you and said “Sorry, this might sting a bit”

“Ahh it’s fine” You reassure her “I’m from Fillydelphia! We’re tough as nails!”

Fluttershy giggled at your comment while Dash just simply smiles and rolls her eye. Suddenly a massive sting shot through your body as the yellow pegasus places the cotton ball on your cut. The sting was so bad that it made you hiss and cry out “Ahhh!”

“I’m sorry!” Fluttershy instantly says after your short burst of pain “I should have told you I was about to place it on your cut”

“Thought you were tough as nails?” Dash chuckles, mocking you

“Yeah… well…” you start, embarrassed by your confident statement being throw out the window “that one stung.. a lot. I wasn’t expecting it!” you try to defend yourself but all the girls did was giggle at you.

When Fluttershy was done rubbing the antibiotic on your cut she then pulled out a roll of bandage and started unraveling it. She then started to wrap it around your leg until you could no longer see the wound. When your leg was covered she took off the end and tied it up with a nice looking bow… but a bow really? That's what she uses to keep the bandages from falling off your leg? She does know you’re a guy right?

When she was done tieing the bow on your leg she then gives you a smile while closing her eyes and says “All done”

“Thank you, Fluttershy,” You say to her and start to stand up on your hoofs again, as so do the girls as well. Looking back down to your leg you finally set it down to the ground and it doesn’t hurt... Well, it does a little bit but you can deal with it. As you look back at your leg you can’t help notice how the bow sticks out like a sore hoof, feeling embarrassed you look back at Fluttershy again and say “I really appreciate it... But did you really have to tie a bow on the bandage?”

Confused, Fluttershy looks down at your leg and realized what you mean, blushing she explains “sorry, I’m so used to be bandaging up cute little animals with bows that I kinda did it without realizing”

“What’s wrong with it, Star?” Dash said smirking at you “Is this bow going to affect your masculinity?”, she continued teasing you.

“Yes as a matter of fact!” You say turning towards her “Do I look like a cute little animal to you?”

Dash pauses for a moment tapping her hoof on her chin trying to think of an answer. She then looks back at you and says “You’ve got me in a box here!”, you tilt your head in confusion, she then explains “If I say no, then it’ll sound like I’m being mean! And if I say yes then you’ll end up teasing me cause I called you cute!”

Laughing at her answer you respond by saying “Yeah I guess you right”

The sounds of soft giggling came from behind you. Slightly confused by the sound you turn back around to see Fluttershy cover her mouth with her hooves whilst she laughs. You’re not the only one though, Dash trots over to your side to look at Fluttershy as well. With the yellow mare still giggling into her hooves, you and Dash exchange confused glances at one another wondering what’s she laughing at.

“Are you okay, Fluttershy?” Dash asks stepping closer to her friend

Finished with her giggle fit the pink-maned mare look back at the two of you and says “Ohh you two are two sides of the same bit”

Sharing another confused glance with Dash she turns back to Fluttershy and says “And what do you mean by that?”

Giggling once more Fluttershy explained “You two are one in the same. It’s like you’re made for each other”

You and Dash suddenly start blushing at that comment. Made more each other? Is she being serious? Sharing another awkward glance at Dash, still both blushing.

“T-Thanks… I-I guess” you stutter out, which makes Fluttershy giggle once again.

Nothing but silence falls upon this conversation making the three of your stand around all awkward. You scratch your face in response to this awkwardness only to hiss in pain again, which makes the two mares look over at you. Touching your cheek again with the tip of your hoof you pull it away and look at it to see a small amount of blood.

“Oh ew” is the only response you had to the sight of the red stain

“Did you just open a cut on your face?!” Dash said turning towards you, clearly annoyed

“Not on purpose,” you say to her, then putting your hoof back to your cheek to stop the blood from showing

Sighing in response Dash looks over to Fluttershy and asks “Could you sort him out again, please?”

Giggling once the shy pegasus nods and walk over to her first aid kit again.

Walking… well limping down the dirt path, as your bandages up leg still hurt slightly whenever you put a little pressure on it, you trot back to Ponyville. But one thing is on your mind… the bow on the end of your bandage sticks out! And it’s pretty embarrassing, to say the least. Look back at your leg and scrunch up your face as you think of all the comments that you might get from passersby.

“Still worrying about the bow?” Dash asks as she trots alongside you.

You’ve told Dash before that she didn’t need to help you to get back home. But she keeps saying that she feels responsible for you falling off the cloud and getting your leg and face all cut up.

“Yeah” you respond “I know for sure that someone is going to make fun of it” you then look back at the bandage again.

“Either that or they’re going to ask what happened” Dash giggles at her own answers “But I think the band-aid on your face is probably the first thing that ponies will notice”

Bring your hoof back to your cheek to touch the plaster on your face only to have your hoof smacked back down by the sky blue mare. Looking back over to Dash, who was annoyed with you yet again, she says “Stop touching it!”

“I’m sorry!” You apologize to her “It’s just so irritating!” You continue while stomping your hooves on the ground in frustration

“You can take it off later” She replies “Just leave it on for now so it can heal”

“Geez, what are you, my mum?”

“Feels like it since I’m looking after your dumbass” Dash said jokingly

“You’re the one who’s insisting on looking after my dumbass”

“You're dumbass just can’t be trusted by yourself. You might take off your bandages on if you’re left alone” Dash continues and nudges you a little

Pausing to think of a way to respond to her comment the blue mare lightly pushes you and says “You took too long for a comeback I win!”

You try and think of something you can say back to her but nothing comes to your mind. You’re usually really good with comeback and retaliation but your mind has just gone blank. It seems like Dash might be getting better than you with silly comments

Signing in defeat you look over at the Rainbow mare, who which is smiling back at you due to her ‘win’ over you, and say “Yeah alright”, to which her smile gets bigger… and honestly, you can’t help but think how cute it is. “But I’ll get another point soon”

Dash’s smile fades to a confused look and asks “Point? What point?”

“You know… leaving either other speechless. Like, I got you twice today, once during practicing and the other when we were on the cloud” you explain to her “So it’s 2-1 to me! Cause I’m the alpha!”

Rolling her eyes at you once again, a sight that you’ve come to know well, she looks back to you and says “Don’t start that alpha thing again. That’s how you got hurt in the first place” she ends with giggles

“Nice to know you think my pain is funny” you jest at her

“It wasn’t at first!” Dash defends herself “But now you’re all fine now. So looking back it’s pretty funny” she smiled ending with another cute giggle

Laughing with the Rainbowed maned mare you finally trot into the Ponyville and start making your way down the town center.

As you’re chatting with Dash a posh elegant voice calls out “Hello, my darlings!”

Looking in front of where you’re walking you see a white unicorn with a purple curly mane trotting gracefully towards the two of you

“Hey, Rarity! How are you doing?” Rainbow greets her friend, while you just smile at the unicorn as she trots closer

“I’m doing fine thank you” The white mare respond to the blue pegasus.

Once Rarity stops in front of the two of you her eyes look over at you and her happy expression changes to a shocked “Oh my StarGazer! What happened to you?! Your face is all cut up!”

Before you could answer her question Rainbow Dash nudges you and says “See I told you that would be the first thing ponies would notice” to which you chuckle and nod at her

“First thing?” Rarity questions, you and Dash then point down to you're banged up leg which causes the white unicorn to gasp and then repeats and her earlier question “What in Equestria happened to you?”

You then casually explain to her “Well I lost my footing and fell from a cloud”, which caused her to gasp “And since my reactions were a little late I didn’t have time extended my wings at the right time for a proper landing. So I hit the ground, slid across the grass… and I believe I must have cut my leg on a rock or a branch as I was sliding”

Gasping again Rarity gets close to you and say “Oh you poor thing! You’re not in any pain are you?”

“No not at all,” you say calmly “Dash took me over to Fluttershy's and she fixed me right up! Hense Fluttershys signature bow on it”

“Well, that’s delightful to hear that you’re alright. You had me worried for a second thinking it might have been something far worse”, you respond to her comment with a chuckle, she then gets closer to you again making some heat come up to your cheeks as her face was almost touching yours “Please promise me you’ll be more careful next time! I don’t know what I would do if something bad ever happened to a sweet cult like you”

Still blushing from her beautiful face so close to yours you stutter out “O-Okay I will”, to which she responds with a giggle and a smile. Her face still being close to yours you start blushing harder and harder to which she must have noticed since Rarity lets out another giggle

“Alright, Rarity. You can back up now” Dash said, unamused

Backing away from you, The white unicorn turns toward her friend and said “What’s wrong? I was only making sure that he was okay”

“But did you have to get so close to him that your faces were almost touching?” Rainbow explains to her, trying to act like she doesn’t care that much

“I was only checking on him, dear. I don’t understand why you’re getting all huffy about it-“ Rarity suddenly cuts herself off with an excited gasp, which worries you and Dash slightly, and then continues saying “Are you two an item!?”

Another sudden rush of heat comes to your face, as well as Dash. The rainbow maned mare then shouts “N-NO!”, which causes some ponies to turn and look in your direction

“W-We’re not an item!” You stutter out to the white unicorn

“Really?” Rarity asked, raising an eyebrow in suspicion “Then how come you two have been spending so much time together?”

“We’ve been training for the race!” Dash answers back

“I know that. But I’m not talking about when you’re not training” Rarity responded with a small smirk on her face “I’m talking about your off time”, you exchange a confused glance with the blue pegasus, Rarity than continues “You and Rainbow Dash spent the afternoon laying on a cloud together, did you not?”, sharing a worried look with Rainbow and than turn back to with three diamonds cutie marked unicorn and nod, Rarity than says “And If I recall what I saw. I saw you, StarGazer, laying on top of Dash”, her smirk then turned into a full-fledged grin, “And if my memory deserves me, you two were looking passionately into one another’s eyes!”

Blushing hard yet again you try and think of away you could get out of this. You can even see Dash struggling to think of an excuse. Rarity’s starts pressing on waiting for both you and Dash to give her an explanation “Well?”

Thinking on your hooves you than say “Hold on.. you were watching us?”

“Don’t try and change the subject, StarGazer!” Rarity responded, completely knocking your question away

“We were just talking!” Dash shouted yet again “Why does everyone think me and Star are ‘made for each other’ it’s starting to get under my skin!”, Dash finishes crossing her arms in anger

A little shocked from Rainbow Dash's yelling Rarity recoils, probably from guilt from making her friend lose her temper. Sighing the white unicorn than apologies to the both of you “I’m sorry, dear. I shouldn’t have pressed on, knowing that it made you both uncomfortable”

“It’s fine” Dash huffed, but still with a slight blush on her face “Just.. please stop asking stuff like that”

“I promise you will never hear another peep out of me” She promises, even moving a hoof across her mouth making the zip sign “Though the two of you do look cute together,” Rarity said with a giggle at the end, Both you and Dash just roll your eyes at that comment.

You then ask Rarity again “So were you watching us when we were on the cloud?”

“I won’t say watching. I was actually coming by to talk to you both, but then I saw the two of you happily on that cloud and thought I would leave you to it” She explained

“So what was it you wanted?” Asked Dash

“Well I needed some help with some clothes”, To which Dash groaned at “And I wanted you two, since you’re both pegasus, to be my measurements”, and Dash groaned louder “But since that was a couple of hours ago, I’m all done with the clothes”

Breathing a sigh of relief, The blue mare nudges you and says “Looks like we dodged a bullet”, which you chuckle in response

“But however..”, Dash groans once again, but this time only louder and longer “I do need to take one measurement from you, StarGazer”

Your ears perk up from her calling your name and you ask “Which measurement?”

“You’re wings” Rarity responds “I don’t have the correct numbers for male wings, surprisingly enough” ending the statement with another giggle “But if you’re busy there would be no need to worry”

Thinking it over for a couple of seconds you then say to white unicorn “I’m not busy. I can do it”, you then notice the shocked look on Dash’s face

“Oh thank you!” Rarity beamed “You’re a true lifesaver”, in which you chuckle “Come on, let’s get to my shop,” she said before turning around a trotting away

You follow Rarity to her shop, but you notice there was one pair of hoofsteps missing. Stopping and turning around you see Rainbow Dash flying away.

“Dash!” You call out to her. She turns around to you and you ask her “You not coming with?”

“What? And be bored out of my mind? No thanks” she answered you “Plus I want to practice more on that wing trick!” pausing for a moment she taps her hoof on her chin and says “We really need to come up with a name for that technique”, you chuckled and nod your head at her response “Anyway I’ll see you later! And don’t moan about being bored, Rarity absolutely hates that!”, once she said goodbye she flew off with incredible speed.

Chuckling once again you turn back around and gallop and catch up white coated mare.

As you stand in the Carousel Boutique Rarity had asked you to stand as perfectly still as possible and extend your wings while she measures them. Your eyes look around the clothes shop and all you could see was well made and stunning dresses all hung up nicely. As you look around you notice a couple of dresses in a style that you know that your sister and your mother would like.

As your thinking to yourself Rarity snaps your attention when she says “I must say, StarGazer. You have some mighty fine wings!” She compliments you “But I guess that comes with being a racer huh”

Chuckling at her comment you respond “Yeah! Got keep these strong to go faster”

“So is racing all you wanted to do as a young colt?” Rarity asks, wrapping the tape measure around the base of your wing

“Pretty much” you answer “I remember my Dad once got front row tickets to a racing show. So he took me there as a ‘Father-son bonding’” you air quote, which made Rarity giggle “And you know since I’m his only pegasus son he thought I’d enjoy. And he was right!”

Giggling once again she then asked, “So what made you want to race?”

“Well just watching those ponies going so fast really amazed me. But the one pony who really inspired me to race was a stallion by the name of Jet Stream”

“Ah, he must have been a big inspiration to you than, since how fast you’ve become,” Rarity says, then taking another measurement of the length of your wing

“Totally! He one of my favorite racers of all time! He once came up to me after a show I attended and shook my hoof! That literally meant the world to me” you say excitedly as you remember that day as if it was yesterday

“I can imagine so,” the white unicorn said happily and then requested “Could you just retract your wings for me”, to which you follow her orders and do so. Then bring the tape measure back up to your wings and measures the length “Do you have another favorite racer?”

“A mare by the name of Rare Flame comes to mind. She is awesome! She was given the nickname 'Blazing Bird' because of how fast she is! even as her own team called the Blazing Chicks!” You start getting excited again as you actually haven’t thought about Rare Flame in quite a long time

“The Blazing Chicks?” Rarity questions

“The Blazing Chicks!” You repeat “You’ve never heard of The Blazing Chicks before? They’re world famous!”

“Star…” the fashion pony begins “You are aware that I’m not the type of mare who keeps up to date with racing stuff right?”

Lowering your ears in embarrassment you say “Oh yeah… sorry”

“No need to worry” Rarity accepted your apology and then wrap her tape measure around your wing again “So tell me more about Rare Flame? She sound pretty amazing”

“Ahh she is!” you start blushing as you admit to Rarity “I sort of had a crush on her when I was a teenager”, to which She giggled at “She's just so fast that you could just bearly see her! it's truly incredible! And plus she’s so hot dude! She got a big butt as well” you eyes widen as you just realized you said that out loud, quickly covering your mouth you look back at Rarity and say “I’m so sorry! I didn’t mean to say that perverted comment out loud!”

Rarity’s face goes from shock to a smile as she says “It’s fine, Star. There no need to worry, you obviously must feel comfortable with me if you said that out loud” she explains, still smiling

Taking your hoof away from your mouth you smile back at her and starch the back of your neck and look away, trying to hide your blush and still remains on your face “Y-Yeah... I guess I do feel comfortable around you”

As you turn back to the white unicorn but your suddenly taken back as Rarity as moved closer to you have you almost bumped noses.

Blushing at the slight of Rarity staring at you with her half-closed eyes she then said to you “So… you like mares with big butts do you?”

Gulping and sweating nervously from that question you try to avoid eye contact with her and stutter out “Y-Yeah I-I guess”

“Well…” she said slowly “What do you think of my butt?”

Gulping again you work up to courage to look at her only to see that she’s swaying her hips from left to right, teasing you with its hypnotic swaying motion. You haven’t really noticed until now how much of a sizeable rump Rarity actually has. She continues to sway her hips back and forth waiting for you to answer as she keeps her big blue eyes locked on you, even shooting you a cheeky grin.

Swallowing the lump in your throat you manage to say “I-I think you have a very nice bottom, R-Rarity”, ending with a nervous smile

“Is it as big as you like it?” She pressed on, swaying faster which made her flank jiggle slightly, which made you sweat more than before

As you try to contain yourself and trying not to make your wings POMF'ing out in a wingboner like fashion and mumbled “Y-Y-Yes, very”

Her face gets even more closer to yours were you could feel her hot breath on your nose. Her half shut eyes stare right into your soul making your legs feel like jelly. You just can’t help but think of how gorgeous she really is, her perfectly shaped face, her perfect blue eyes, those perfectly long eyelashes, that perfect smile, that perfectly curled mane, that perfectly shaped body, and her perfect sized plot.

But you’re suddenly taken out of your thought of as she pulls away from you and bursts into laughter. Confused and a tiny bit offended you stand there as the white unicorn continues to let out her laugh to the point where there were tears forming in her eyes.

A couple of minutes passed and she finally calmed down as she wipes the tears away and giggles to you “I’m so sorry Darling! But I just couldn’t resist, the look on your face was priceless”

Still as confused as ever you question “Hold on… what?! You were just teasing me?!”

“Oh come on, dear” Rarity said, as she got the final tear from her eye “You didn’t really think you and I would do something sexual did you?”

“I secretly hoped” you whispered to yourself and stare at the floor

Looking back up at Rarity you give her a look of disapproval and disappointment.

Once she saw the look on your face she giggles again and trots back to you while saying “Oh don’t give me that look, StarGazer. You know I said a while back you’re not the type of colt I’d go for” in which you nod slightly “But if it makes you feel any better I think you’re an amazing cute stallion and any mare would be lucky to have you” she compliments you and puts her soft hoof under your chin, giving it a small stroke

Sighing to the fact that you let yourself get fooled her this mare you decided it would be best just the laugh it off and forget about it. So you just chuckle and say “Thank you”

“Now!” The white unicorn begins, changing the subject “I’ve got all the measurements I need” she then walks over to her desk, in which you try to avoid looking at her butt as she goes, she uses her magic to write down, what you assume, the measurements she took. Then turning back to you and said: “You’re free to go!”

Smiling at her you hop off the podium and start to trot towards the shop door. She thanked you for taking the time out of your day to help her which you told her that it was no problem and you were happy to help. As you open the door and got ready to leave Rarity stopped you by saying one more thing

“Oh, and StarGazer!” She called. Looking back at her she then said “And thank you for the comments about my behind” she then finished her statement with a cheeky wink

Instead of getting all embarrassed you just chuckled and said back “Anytime”