I am a fifteen year old boy from Minnesota... that is pretty much it.
You thought that every relationship would last for your lifetime. But it always gets thrown back at your face. Daizy dumped you in the cold streets, and you felt the need for a drink to calm your nerves. But when you arrive at the club for a drink, you meet a lovely mare named Vinyl Scratch. Putting your other relationship behind you, you think that there is something that can really work between you two. Are you wrong?
-Second Person fic. featuring Vinyl Scratch and You.
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Looking good so far, no noticeable spelling errors. just read the 1st chapter, great leading up so far, looking like it's going to be very fast-paced :L, we'll have to see!
"You were a little surprised at how cheep the drinks were. The scenery should add a little to the price, but it was only 15 bits."
Cheep should be Cheap, but otherwise looking good.
Also, my assumptions were right, it is fast-paced, but fast-paced never hurt anyone!
Should be your lip, not you lip. But otherwise great, the speed slowed down compared to last chapter, which is great
her should be here.
Haha, the ending to this chapter was priceless. I can imagine the look on all of their faces, hah.
Somepony got in a drinking contest with Big Mac. Bad idea...
Nice work, friend! This was a good idea to change the point of view. I always have stuck to first person or third. But reading my story in this kind of view is quite interesting! I'm glad you made a reboot, and I hope that this story helps you in some way on your account. I gave up writting because I lost my feel for it after finishing Breeze of Love. But anyway, good luck with your future stories!
-HeartBeat
Top notch
Relatively good story, but the dialogue seems a bit, flat.
Why doesn't this havw more LIKES?!?!
Cause fak the couch
Cute
I don't like that he mentions her fame those few times, almost makes it sound as if that's why he's there. Almost, so no biggie.
This is a good read though. I love 2nd person stories. Glad I'm finding good fanfics after so long without reading them.
Nawh.
3021507 Awesome story Heartbeat!
Awesome reboot LightsCameraAction! I'm gonna haft to look through your other stories now, hope there are other 2nd person shipfics, you did this well.