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The ScapeGoat


God I am in love with Rainbow Dash

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“Dash, would you go out with me?” A pondering anon muttered to his best friend. Which shattered her world, two times over. One from actually asking the question, two from realizing that’s not exactly what he meant.

It’s time for this lonely anon to get out into the dating scene and meet the strange STRANGE ponies equestria has to offer.

Currently under re-writing


A Dash x Anonymous Fic

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

Ooooh, a Dash X Anom story? Sweetness!

Awesome first chapter. :rainbowkiss:

Very Nice!

Also congrats on making your first story!

Congrats on your first story. Its building up to be great!
One word of advice, dont worry about likes etc; write what you want to write, then you know atleast one person will like it :) though judging by the bar, you dont have to worry about it (little jealous cause this reads better then mine lol)
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Something for later to read ^^

The story is complete and interesting, the rhetoric is subtle, and the paragraphs are well organized. I think your article is well written

I like this story so far! I can't wait to see how the Singles Party goes.:rainbowlaugh:

Keep it up I'm excited for the next chapter

Comment posted by Kshlerin deleted Aug 28th, 2021

Looking forward to the singles pparty :) keep it up!

Hope another chapter comes out soon

Cries waiting for more

This is a nice little story, updates coming soon?

Rainbow takes one last look at the lake and sighs again. “...or if that awesome pony would want her back.”

Rainbow scuffs the ground, drawing little circles in it. "A-anon, am I ugly?"

"Where's this coming from, Rainbow?"

"It's just, of all the single stallions and of all the time I've lived in Ponyville, not one of them has asked me out."

"What about Fluttershy's brother?" Anon asked, and then briefly chuckled, fully knowing Rainbow's opinion on the matter.

"Please, I want a stallion, not some insecure colt that has to convince himself of his self worth constantly, day after day."

"Well ... Have you ever asked any of the single stallions if they'd want to date you? Sometimes it's a matter of knowing the choice is available. How can they go after somepony if they don't know that pony is even available or interested?"

" ... A-anon! I'm Rainbow Dash! I'm too awesome to do unawesome stuff like that!"

"This is just a thought, but have you considered that your utilization of awesomeness in reference to yourself hasn't maybe created a barrier between you and other ponies? It's one thing to be confident. It's quite another to assault ponies using awesomeness like a shield to bash their faces in."

"Is that why no stallions want to date me?"

"Rainbow, If you look in a mirror, acknowledging all of your flaws and shortcomings," He held his hand up in a stopping hand sign. "And before you try to hide behind your barrier of awesomeness, you do have your flaws. Do you truly love yourself? Because if the answer is no, then I would suggest learning to love yourself, before you can succeed in loving someone else."

I finally found your comment and checked out this story. I love it! This is a unique premise that I haven't seen explored before. I hope you finish writing it some day!

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Thanks Man, you keep up the good work too.

Glad you got back into it can’t wait:pinkiehappy:

La parte de los recuerdos me tocó, los HIE siempre se saltan esas partes diciendo que son excluidos de la sociedad y pintan a Equestria como el paraíso. Yo en el mio también trato de mostrar lo que se deja atrás.

The premise is good. I look forward to seeing the world you produce.

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