I like to read and write. Though I don't have the best grammar, I like to think that my concept for a story make up for that.
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Another in my anthros in space collection.
After living over a thousand years the mane 6 are asked by Celestia to join Star Fleet. This is their story as they venture among the stars. Takes place after season 4 show followed original timeline only everyone was an anthro.
Need a better cover pic if anyone find Anthro mane 6 in star fleet uniforms pic please let me know.
pairings:
RariTwi 
AppleDash 
Flutterpie 
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Looking forward to more
Definitely watching this story.
I like that its star trek pony crossover just not too sure about the anthro shipping part.
I shall keep watch.
Hmm, it needs a little work in grammar and pacing, but overall very promising. Very unique idea though to lead off with immortal six. I'm looking forward to more, mi amigo. Peace, Sam
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Thank you, never been good at grammar I'll AN asking for a proof reader. as far as the pacing as far as the rest of the prologue not sure how much I can slow it down but it will be in the 4th chapter when the main part of the story start.
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Wanted to do it personally wanted something a little different and haven't seen to many try anything like this with out it being a clop and never as a crossover.
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Honestly I needed a female dragon and Eragon came to mind.
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Do my best to keep it enjoyable, most of the first three chapters are really exposition trying to set up the universe so the real part will start at chapter 4.
5494050 Well, my only issue with the pacing is how amazingly fast you went into shipping mode. It just feels a little rushed. Mind you, there are far, far more heinous acts against romance here on FimFic, and you're not doing bad by any measure, it was just a little rushed. But I do like how you're approaching world building, and getting the story to a point where you have a viable space program for your alternate universe. Keep it up amigo.
I was gonna say; you have the Equinox as another ship to the Nova-Class ship Cpt. Ransom commanded in Voyager or what?! XD
And technically you should go back through and capitalise "federation" into "Federation" and swap "Star Fleet" to "Starfleet". But that's mainly me being a Trekkie and had English as one of my 'breeze through' classes back in high school.
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Yeah I did the research on the timeline, story starts around 2366 or season three of TNG, Voyager Equinox part 1 was season 5 finale while part was season 6 opener so between 2375-2376 so pretty much a decade I don't this Ransom was a captain then so I made and OC to fill it.
Thank you for the info I went back and fixed it, well other then the title I will fix that later.
5497804 S'all good mate. Timeline wise, Voyager starts basically after TNG finished, around S3/S4 of DS9, presumably right around when Worf and the other Ent-D crew would have been transferring to DS9 from the Ent-D.
Voyager got home around 2378 after the 7-year journey, and Janeway was promoted to Admiral sometime between when she got home and Nemesis which was in 2380.
addendum: I'm a wee bit of a Voyager fan, what with me dropping around $120AUD per-season for the box sets (some of them costing around $140AUD a pop), and typing this on my Nexus7 tablet. ^.^;
I'm enjoying it so far, though I have noticed the occasional bit of typography errors. If you'd like, I can offer my time to be an editor for the story.
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I would prefer a proof reader to tell me what's wrong so I can learn and not make them down the road. If you willing I would like that.
Good story so far.
And nice to meet a follow STO player. =3
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Yeah it was a great game and the only mmo I never grew tired of. I wish I could still play it but all those updates don't work well on my old PC. Being poor sucks.
5501009 I currently use a CyperPowerPC and the game works fine. I understand you can't because you computer doesn't met the new settings. But so far, the game is great. 5th Anniversary is just a few weeks away, and Already we got Delta Rising with Harry Kim, 7of9, The Doctor, Tuvok, & Neilex. =3
5500434 Well, I kinda consider the jobs of Editor and Proof-reader to be kinda interchangeable for a story with like only a writer and 1 helper.
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I'll set it up for you to view before publishing and mail you when the next chapter is ready for review, thank you.
Notice somepony missing here, twice actually? And I have to say, good work slowing down on your shipping. You have a lot of universe to fill here, so enjoy it. I trust you can knock this story out of the park mi amigo. Peace, Sam.
5502602 You know the funny thing is. I actually did write flutters into the testing one, completely forgot her in the bond conversation I will admit. But I wen t back and edited something and forgot to write it back in. Thank you for the catch I went back and added her.
Thank you I did my best to slow it down with the accelerated time line. Be kind of hard like I said to leave the conversation hanging for centuries.
The problem I have with this chapter is the teleporting spell. Your telling me a military academy wouldn't be monitoring if someone did this. Or that Twilight wouldn't be reprimanded over it. Can you imagine the security risk that would pose? Sorry don't buy it.
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Not the way I see it. First off yes she teleported but not to anywhere that is off limits or secure. Secondly while they would be able to observe it why would they worry to much about a being using a natural ability to make it to a class room she is supposed to be. She is not misusing her personal traits to hurt anyone or gather sensitive information. If she were to even try to enter a secure area that is constantly being monitored for illegal entry any how she would be arrested moments after appearing. She is also not abusing the academies equipment.
I'm unconsciously inserting my STO main into the story because of Reasons(tm). Don't stop with this! Seriously. Don't. *menaces with a spork*
I have SO many grammatical problems with this story... SO many... It took my everything not to comment on every chapter about it. Itâs a good story and I enjoy it very much but the grammatical mistakes makes it hard to read and takes the flow out of the story. Maybe flesh out a few parts as well.. it seems like itâs going by too fast and there have been several instances where Rarityâs name wasnât capitalized.
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I am planning on rewriting eventually as there is a lot I am not happy with, I just have to get myself into the mood of actually doing it. Next time I won't rely on a proofreader since I have Grammarly now and I'll let that do it's work instead.
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Ok cool. Iâm sorry if I offended you with that... honestly itâs just my biggest pet peeve and I just let it out of my system... sorry about that...
Great, just great, now youâve given me the idea to write my own MLP Star Trek crossover. Thanks a lot
I didnât mean that as an insult or anything, I havenât even read this yet but I already know itâll be a good story.