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DW_Beast


I like to read and write. Though I don't have the best grammar, I like to think that my concept for a story make up for that.

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After a reaper attack the mane six use the Elements of Harmony to save their world, but are lost to the stars for their effort. Now, nearly 51,000 years later they are awoken by Shepard to harsh universe on the edge of destruction.
Takes place after season 4.
Teen for now may bump it up later.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 34 )

SHEEEPARD!!!!! que epic trailer. this has my attention just make sure we see the shepard shuffle plz.

5412762 not sure if i could accurately describe that "dance" maybe I'll try when I get to it and post a gif under it.

dammit im a sucker for mass effect things

i would say have shepard as a infiltrator, adept or vanguard

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I think I will go with Adept my personal favorite class, plus it pay credence to why Shepard used a pistol in the opening scene.

My god I love this! I'm a bit conflicted with the pairing cause I love the MLP shippings but the chance for a mlpxme shipping is good too. Fuck it go, MLPxME pairings. Also is this gonna be ME 1 gameplay system or ME3? No offense but ME1, being a great game, sucked with its controls and gameplay systems. Seriously, I chose Vanguard and I can't use my assualt rifle because I was untrained. That is utter bullshit, I'm glad when 2 came out EA fixed the systems.

For the pairing, please MLPXME because there is not even one of the MLP only ship you love that I like! ;)

This is a great concept and I can see the start of a fantastic story, but you do have quite a few spelling errors and missing/wrong words here and there. I would recommend getting an editor or at least a proof-reader. No offence, you have a good start but to get the full potential out of this story you'll need to get those errors fixed.

Not bad, Shepard seemes a little robotic but otherwise, good job.

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Yeah, I had issues writing this a little, one I just needed to get the info out and second I wrote this when I should be asleep and did it to stave off boredom from the massive insomnia attack I am getting. I will try working on his personality in other chapters.

Trying to determine if they changed physiologically or not, the writing wasn't entirely clear here.


Edit 10-23-2015:

Tis more clear now

New Query: Will the girls retain their abilities from before or no? It would be a shame if they lost what they had before the reapers corpse removed it all from their race.

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Physiologically they will be the same for the most part after a while, but wouldn't you change a little if everyone you know and love was suddenly gone so long they were considered myths.
As far as ability goes I am going to try to keep them as the show had them, they are the only members of their race to retain their magical abilities, stuff like AJ farming won't really happen nor will all the 4th wall breaks of Pinkie but I tried to amplify an ability that each of them have that will be helpful. For instance Rainbow can still fly generate a sonic rainboom but can exceed even that speed As well as manipulate weather like she could as captain of the weather team.

Nevermind the shipping, there is more important! Why so few magic?!
They are the only being in the freaking galaxy who can do magic and yet, they act like 6 perfetly normal girls! Rainbow should be fleing a lot more because it will be more close that what she has before than walking on two legs. And she is supposed to be curious and fearless! You tell me she saw the fake sky and don't even try to touch a cloud!? I get it that they have to act more like human but you make them act like humans who have just gain magic and struggle to use it. They have it since forever and in this univers of change, it's suppose to be the only thing that haven't change to much! And the magic is one of the best thing in this kind of crossover because it's a mindfuck for the science and there is nothing more funny that see a Salarian who bugs.
I hope you understand, it's not that I find your fic the most terrible thing ever! NO, this is still good! There is just room for improuvment.

5478875 They will here starting next chapter actually, rainbow isn't flying cause till they get clothes to work with them her wings are restricted, reason Rarity is creating custom armor and I have a plan for it just wait and see.

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Woa, that must have driven Rainbow crasy! Thanks for the answer, keep the good work!

Sweet so we will get at least the second game! I would love to get more information on the modern equine and how the culture has changed in the 50000+ years.

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Yeah, I plan on doing all 3 games, and some side stories. Although since I am following the games for the main stories I will be having the side stories show modern Equestria.

I say paragon. save the Rachni. That is the best way to go in the Mass effect universe. I think the mane six being in this will be making the Mass effect series interesting

I think going Paragon is correct choice here. AJ my not take to kindly to killing an entire race even after what happened to the Changelings.

I recall your last A/N and the only thing I will say is, unless you have a reason to pair them with 'modern' equines, just keep them away.

Ok, i just finished chapters 1 to 8 and i have to admit, quite the promising story ^^
keep it up! :eeyup:

Save the Rachni Queen!:flutterrage: or fluttershy will hurt you.

oh god, if Pinkie Pie gains a proper grasp on engineering I wouldn't be surprised if she could randomly be able to make a Dreadnought class battle ship appear out of nowhere:rainbowderp:

I feel sad that spike died :'(

5759322 that will be useful if the reapers come back

I would love to see some codex entries for the modern Equis. For the level 2 powers I cannot think of any right now with out seeing what they have at level 1. Otherwise, great to have you back and looking forward to future chapters!

5759322 her name is Pinkie and you shall bend to her will as she cares naught for the 4th wall or anyone really. Also mane of holding anyone

An interesting premise thusfar, but its relatively early yet in the game, and there is much to do still at the BARE MINIMUM

Caught up and looking forward to the next chapter. I've only played me3 with maybe 5 hours logged. The story has a lot of potential and you got yourself another reader.

I do hope you continue this my old profile was Obama_69( Every time i try to login said's it doesn't exist) So i made a new one. But I do like this a good amount. If you do continue will you explain how the main six look now again. Cant really find a good description of how they look now in this story. And then d you plan on Twighlight finding spike's body( Maybe she resurrects him) and then maybe Celestia, Luna and Cadence either they talk to her through a vision or at least one of them gets resurrected. I don't know i would like something done with that. Kind of just disappointing i guess to have them just be dead. And lastly will you have shepard romance anyone in this. My two votes go for Either Tali or Twighlight. Any way hope toy see more

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