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I love the show, i love even more to see what people can make with it. I'm not a writer, i just do it for the fun of it all. If you like mine, or you don't, that's up to you. No one will stop me!
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I'm really liking this story and hope to see more chapters soon. I really like how you characterize all the princesses and it should be interesting to see how Twilight deals with this new development...also Dislestia babies!
5258299 I appreciate the comment! As for updating chapters, I'll try to do what I can when I can. Work schedule is a mess, as always, and it can be difficult to get a good internet connection to do so. Thank you though!
It could be worse. Meh.
Very interesting concept for a story. I hope more updates follow. Good luck. I'm putting a bit of faith in you, so I'm favoriting your story.
5267744 I appreciate the faith, thank you.
Loved the new chapters and can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for the new chapters. These are intense. Thanks for submitting them.
Cadence: as much as I enjoy trolling Twilight, it's getting ridiculous. You're not being coy nor subtle. Love goddess or not, maybe you should have somepony else Captain this ship. Like P Pie.
Twilight: are you kidding? How many guards from the Crystal Empire do you know aside from you-know-who? Use that delicious brain of yours.
5293302 I'm not trying to make a super awesome, stupendously amazing ship between these two. I typed this out over the course of a few months to take my mind off work, and because I think its a cute ship, plus it was fun. If you don't like it, oh well I can live with that, you can't please everyone after all. Then again if I get even just one person to go, "I enjoyed that," it was worth it to put it on the site to have everyone else scrutinize.
Nice job with this chapter. I love how Spike and Rarity are more of a couple in this story. Also it's funny to see Twilight struggle to figure out who is this guard. Great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Awesome!! Great chapter. That was a nice touch having Flash start to wonder. I loved this chapter. Thanks for writing it.
Nice idea. I'm glad though Flash is with Twilight. That way he can avoid that battle. Thanks for the update.
5308615 Not a problem at all! I'm the only person actually that is going through the story to edit and fix things, so the updates may not come all that fast, but ill try my best to get some at least weekly or every other week (don't hold me to that please)
Wow. You sure update fast.
5310765 chapters are already done. Just a matter of editing the best I can... And finding an internet connection to post.
Twi has her own personal Knight/Champion now. Heres hoping king sombra isn't too hard for twi and flash to lay the smackdown onto.
Before reading: I'm going to assume this story is good, but has dislikes because of the Flash Sentry figure, so I'll give it a read anyway.
5359210 by all means, feel free to assume what you'd like. this is the first story I posted up here, and I knew full well many people don't like Flash. though I didn't type it out to impress anypony. I did it to take mind off work, because I like the ship, and it was fun for him. if you like though, then great!
I'm finding the level of paranoia created by the discovery of the changling far less than I would expect.
You basically had an enemy agent found inside the seat of government's household...and then you go out for dinner.....
Think of what happens in the real world when some drunk stumbles over the whitehouse fence. There's a total lockdown and security reviews up the kazoo.
The basically two line conversation Flash and Shinning had about possible other changlings, seems weak. I would think anti changling spells would be project number one in the magical research department. (not sure they need any new ones, Twilight was able to forcefully change morphed changlings back to their insect form in their fight in Canterlot Wedding) Every employee entering and exiting castle on business would have to pass a blood test and be screened six ways before allowed near the royals. etc etc
Plus, I didn't spot any references to the guard killed by Sombra. Sombra left before hiding the body, (and hiding bodies is not that easy a thing in general) So there should have been some comments about finding a dead guard in a random part of the castle no where near where the Changling was.
Also one last nitpick that bothered me.
Canterlot Wedding occurred as the season two closer, before the Crystal Empire returned. How would Shinning propose at that Restaurant if they were already married?
5363253 I am finding your lack of faith in ponies disturbing... you like it, you don't. Didn't make this story to please anyone, so I didn't knit pick the details (seeing as lord know how many people bend the show on this sitesite in their own stories). As for why the body wasn't hidden, That's covered in a later chapter being explained away. I'm not a writer (obviously), I'm someone who has bouts of too much time on their hands... Nuff said.
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"I'm not a writer (obviously), I'm someone who has bouts of too much time on their hands... Nuff said."
Man, you write better than I do! And I'm actually trying to make a good story for me and a couple friends!
You're definitely a writer. Maybe not in job, but you're definitely skilled enough.
I'm LOVING the story! Keep it up!
5363478 I plan on keeping it up, good luck with your story! I may have a hiccup here and there (more than I care to admit). I do this to take mind off work, i like the show, and because its fun. But even if one person says "I liked that", then its worth posting a story or two. Thank you
DON'T SAY THAT!
5419749 But That's the fun part!
5446736 Meh, you can't win them all. Can ya.
Bravo another great Chapter. I really enjoy reading your story so far, but one thing buggs me. Is there a reason why you write 'Applejack' 'Apple jack'?
Next chapter plz
5450575 I actually don't have a solid reason. My computer kept correcting me over and over again and wouldn't remember "Applejack" as a word in its dictionary. So honestly I just rolled with it.
5450615 Thanks, good to know.
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5419749 TRUE DAT!
moar.
cuz if no moar, i cri.
When the hole thang gonna finish so I don t read bits and pieces off it don't wanna be left hanging
5463386 good news is, the story itself is done and written. bad new is it needs editing, and I'm the only one doing that job... so how long, I can't say. But it will get there eventually.
Why did you write a story with Flash Sentry in it?
No one likes him.
5468682 Because even the underdog has a story.
A. I like the pairing
B. Another brilliant chapter. Please keep up the good work.
5468750 Okay, I'll give you a like for that
Finally!
Please write more! :D
Loving the story, keep it up!
Best Flashlight story yet. Keep up the work
5480013 Thank you for that
I'm trying to get the chapters up as best I can, but work is work, and internet connection here on base isn't always the best.
Yus. moar.
Meow. moar!
Caught it as soon as the one pony said Griff xd
Okay. Someone's just signed their execution order. Which describes that their death shall be in a very interesting fashion over an extended period of time lasting no less than eternity.
Woah. :<