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WhiteFur


19, a Computer Science major, and a pegaSister!!

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Twilight had always been the one to save the day, but what happens when she is the one in need of saving. The Changeling queen is back and out for revenge.

Twilight is just adjusting to her duties as the princess of friendship, and what that really means, but she is not just that with her special talent being magic her hands are always full. Then when Flash sentry is assigned as not just one of her new guards, but her personal guard, things change. Just as the two realize their true feelings for each other the changeling queen comes and kidnaps twilight. But she’s not interested in feeding, she out for revenge. Can Flash and the other elements of harmony get to her in time?

Thank you to TheNewBionicBrony for being my editor!!

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 27 )

Why do I get the feeling that Twilight will say 'Guten take me now!'?

If you're disliking this story because it's a Twilight-Flash shipping, calmly ponder this: there is no true real reason to hate it. There isn't anything that is truly hurting you or the characters. It was a fun little tidbit in the movie. Before you go and hate on a story because of its topic, at least read it.
After all, if you didn't do that, I'm sure half of you would never have even watched this show.

First date: success!

More plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:applecry:

Doesn't the Crystal Heart make like a hate repelling blast or disguising spells that cancel each other out?

5676467 in my story id say the the crystal heart protcts the kingdom and the crystal ponies but twilight is not a crystal pony and the queen only want to punish twilight so the heart doesnt protect her

I can't wait to read happens next

Green and black castle funny:twilightblush:

When is the next chapter coming out? I wanna read more!

Oh this story is soooo good! :raritystarry: can't want for more!

As I reach the throne room, all the elements are sitting in their thrones.

...
I...
I don't...
Never mind.

Comment posted by theoldenbrony deleted Aug 31st, 2015

OmO I'd hug the story for being so great but i can't physically do that :rainbowderp: ... so i'll hug my laptop :moustache:... for now.... :pinkiecrazy: :moustache:

Just the description man............ Imma read dis!!!

This... I am a bit confused on this part ,but whatever.

Flashlight forever! !:twilightsmile:

Awesome! I kinda hoped that changeling were not going part of the story. The basic storyline you have is great.

Please update soon

Cuando vas a actualizar :unsuresweetie:

My interest is peaked. Also FIRST!!!!!!!!!!

I have a bad feeling about this. Now if only the author would finish the story.

Okay, there are a couple things I have to get off my chest. One main thing, to be specific.



To the changing sc-- spy,

I completely understand the respect and pride you have for serving your queen, and admire your sense of taking chances. But I will make one thing very clear....

LEAVE TWILIGHT AND FLASH THE F**K ALONE YOU PIECE OF SHAPE-SHIFTING SCUM!! IF YOU EVEN DARE TO ENTERTAIN THE THOUGHT OF KIDNAPPING TWILIGHT, I WILL TAKE YOU BY THE TAIL, ESCORT YOU PERSONALLY TO TATARUS, AND ENJOY WATCHING YOU BURN!!!!


*pants* Ah, sorry. Much better. Where was I again? Oh yeah! Loving the story and ranting my head off. I do not have issues. None whatsoever. Nope. Not me. Ahem. Yeah..... I'm going to read the next chapter. It's only three in the morning and I might be sleep-deprived but I don't care wheee :pinkiecrazy:

......... Next..... Chapter......

Hmm..... It seems you did not heed my warning.....

*cricks neck and knuckles* Welp, time for me to go work!

*looks at author*

Do me a favor and ignore the screams would ya?

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