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When I was young, my dad,(my hero) took me to a lake. He wanted to teach me the wonders of nature.Okay, pops. But it was seriously a beautiful lake. I will forever remember it as a memorial to him. I would visit it every day, and a wonderful surprise was there once, one that would change my life.

This is a FlashLight shipping story. If you do not like FlashLight, please do not show hate or bother those that do. Please. Have a jolly good day!^.^

*Alternate Universe because EQG never happened. ^.~

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 60 )

I find Flash Sentry eminently defensible, but there's really not a whole lot here that suggests him: this could be anypony with a hitherto-unknown backstory. I assume that this will be addressed in future chapters.

Still, there's some lyrical charm here, not entirely offset by a hoofful of jarring typos.

4929825 I plan to deepen that a bit. :3. I know, it's a bit shallow.
Thank you for that, though! :D

That was cute. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck writing it.

5071069
Thank you! :3

When's the next chapter?:unsuresweetie:

5079400 Depends a bit on my school work and band. :3

I'd say in about two weeks, especially because my band is preparing for a parade and it's getting tough. :3

Nice chapter. Thanks for the update.

Yay! :yay: can't wait for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

5108427 Your welcome:derpytongue2:
5108478 might take a while:twilightsmile: I appreciate your enthusiasm though!:pinkiehappy:

love this story:heart::rainbowkiss:
keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

5145133 Thank you! X3

Nice small chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Good luck.

Yay, when is next chapter?

5236048 almost got it, maybe by the end of this week or next week, as school is stressfull right now and my band has another band review this Saturday so yeah. :3

Nice chapter. Thanks for the update. Good luck with future chapters.

loved the chapter!
it's adorable!
keep up the good work!

That was cute. Thanks for the update. Good luck with future chapters.

LOL!!!

“Is that a...mistletoe?”

OH!!! Boom! It's there!

They both blushed. “Does this mean...?”

“No!

“Nope!”

“Bye!”

“See ya!”

Yep, that probably what I'd do if I got stuck under mistletoe with a boy. LOL!:raritywink: Keep up the good work!

Were they still little? Or old?
Anyways awesome chapter and i hope to see more!!!!

5424045
Oh no they where still lil ponies ^w^
Thank you! :3

5423269
X3 thank you

5453726
Around 12-13 years old, if you where to compare them as humans. :3

Nice idea for this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story.

Can't wait for more:pinkiehappy:

Not that the story is bad, but why did you change perspective?

5505384
Dunno kind of melted into it. 10 points for noticing though. Good eye. :3

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Nice chapter, can't wait for more...!:raritywink:

lol, where is she getting the food?:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

SO MUCH FOOD!!!:pinkiecrazy:

“Flash, sweetie,” Twilight handed him a carrot. “No your not.”

PFFT!!! LOL!!! NOW SHE'S JUST BEING MEAN!!!

Keep up the good work, I LOVE IT!!!:raritystarry:

eeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
cant wait for more:rainbowkiss:

I love your avatar. I totally ship toby and becky.

Yessss!!!! Finally!(:pinkiehappy:

Glad to see your alive. The little confirmation was nice.

Doing an awesome job so far! Keep up the good work!

(P.S. I'm so glad to know that you aren't dead! :derpytongue2:lol)

~This was a triumph.
~I'm making a note here- "Huge Success."
~It's hard to overstate my satisfaction!:yay:

5894500
no mans I am no deads

5893178
Lol thanks mate c:

5892780
Me toooo X3
Thank you

5894422 -Aperture Science!
-We do what we must, because we can.
-For the good of all of us (except the ones who are dead!):yay:

SO. SHORT. BUT. AT. LEAST. YOU. UPDATED!!! :pinkiecrazy:

5897130
SHORT. LIKE. THESE. SENTENCES. YES.
:D

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