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Fe94Knight


I love the show, i love even more to see what people can make with it. I'm not a writer, i just do it for the fun of it all. If you like mine, or you don't, that's up to you. No one will stop me!

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Kind of a shame it doesn't have it's own fallout style intro but still, pretty good.
Could use some polish as far as the grammar is concerned but there's lots of potential here.

I'll be keeping an eye open for an update.

Also, did you seriously get permission from Kkat herself? OoO

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Why thank you, it's been a while since I'd written... So I am kinda rusty, but had this story in the works for a while now and wanted to share what I had so far. I know Fallout 4 (drew a lot of inspiration from it) is kinda Taboo with some fans of the series, but I enjoyed it, and wanted to give my own spin on things.

I did actually get permission from her. Reached out over a message, told her that I had an idea I wanted to run with, and she was very welcoming about it. If I can get at least one person to smile at the story, that's enough for me.

Hopefully you'll like what comes in store :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome. And yes, I can see the influences from 4 all over the chapter. Personally my only problem with that game is that I've had two different computers since it came out and it didn't run on either of them. Seriously, that games gonna be a dinosaur by the time I finally have money for a computer that'll play it.

Anyways, there's no way it's as taboo as it once was, especially with 76 to contend with.

XD it seems a bit much to go through the trouble of asking permission. If everybody did that she'd just be hounded day and night. Lol but since you did go through that trouble, you be sure to put extra care into writing this. Make Kkat proud. :twilightsmile:

Anyways, good luck. Like I said I'll be keeping an eye open for updates

Next stop; cloudy skies and mutated horrors.

Nice, another update. But do try to stagger them a bit so people are more likely to spot it in the updates tab

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I wasn't going to throw in that second chapter with it originally, but I didn't like how short the first one I posted was so I wanted to give out a little more... I'm actually working on the last few chapters now in a word document, then I have to proofread. Thank you for the tip :raritywink: wasn't sure how it actually looked on the site after an update.

Wow, no offense or anything but this is the first chapter where this felt like a proper fallout equestria book. I really enjoyed it. And I already like Tungsten. I hope he shows up again.

Lol I can't believe that steel ranger just expected them to just take off their pipbuck as if those things aren't locked on.

It's the whole reason Velvet had to trick little pip into removing hers.

Anyways, lol, I'm definitely invested now. I'll be looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.

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No offence taken! I love the feedback after all :twilightsmile:

I thought I would get flack for having him get the suit so early one... but then again, thinking back to FO4, you get your first one just the same way. To me that's where the game picked up, and I wanted Wild to get the same feeling. Hopefully you enjoy the chapters to come!

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Oh, I hadn't actually considered the power armour. I haven't played fallout 4 but I've been spoiled by enough youtube videos that I knew it gives you one pretty early on. That's probably why I didn't question it.

I don't know if that's from the game too but I think you balanced it quite a bit by making it so damaged. There's a lot of potential in adventure getting that suite fixed up to proper working order.

Lol from my experience recently it tends to be the things you least expect to get criticism on that get you the criticism.

I'm sure I'll like them just fine. :twilightsmile:

Didn't this story used to be longer?

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Oh! You might be confusing it with the other story I've been trying to update at the same time ("Bronze Tiara"?) I know you commented on that one not long ago.

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Why doesn't your comment have any words in it?

Did you make the cover art yourself?

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Sorry for the late reply! Didn't show up in my notifications. Though yes I did actually, I've had to do that for all my stories. I don't have any real art software for my computer, but I do have canvas and paintbrushes. Same thing with my profile picture.

More please? I think I'm addicted.
:fluttershysad:

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I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Still writing out some of the (last) chapters. Once those are done, then I plan on trying to upload one a week or so... don't worry, I'll still trickling a chapter or two in while I work on them. Just not wanting to get ahead of myself. Thank you for the support :raritywink:

How many chapters long will this story be?

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As of now its about 41... though as I reread/edit I might split some here and there.

:twilightsmile:
Want to remove a problematic group? Use the largest Molotov, or would it be Maretov, cocktail in history with a magical nuke as the lighter.

More? Please?

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Well done. Character isn't invincible but far from helpless nor painfully naive. Now more. Now. :rainbowdetermined2:

Oh and make Lock's end especially painful and humiliating please. Say, falling into an industrial metal shredder going about 10% max speed.

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Oh dear, that's a tough one... as I reread and listen to them in my head though...
Wildfire: Flash Sentry (I know I know, everyone hates him, but from the few lines he gets he sounds like a genuinely good colt).
Winter: gotta be Rainbow Dash... Look at her personality.
Alimite: Scootaloo, but older, duh.
Tumble: imagine AJ but without her iconic country twang.
Deacon: I can't recall any male gryphons from the show to compare to... Minus Gallus, but of course older, more gruff from the wastes.
Riff Raff: no female Diamond Dogs come to mind, but every time I read her in my head I give her a Russian accent... odd I know, but look how she talks.

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Needless to say, Lock I've had fun writing in her character :twilightsheepish: Trying to balance out the ruggedness of Power Armor with still getting his flank kicked has been tricky at times, but I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Now they just need a few nasty surprises to add to the mix. Maybe a few rounds of white phosphorus for the launchers? It does work wonders for clearing out a nest of vermin...
:trixieshiftright:

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I'm glad you're having fun with this story :rainbowlaugh:

About time Wild.

Now someone needs to make sure they find a nice big explosive to use against that ant hill. Say ... 5 Megatron? :raritywink:

.... geez. Give poor wild a break. Maybe a stash of Hydra?

Honestly, the longer I look at the cover of the fic, the more my brain breaks down.
What's wrong with his hoof, why is it turned in the opposite direction? Maybe not in the subject, but a year ago I had a dislocation of the shoulder joint and it hurts like hell. The longer I look at this, the more pain I remember. (Purely about the cover, no offense,)
And about the fic itself, well, it’s written well, I don’t see any special problems.:eeyup:

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No offence taken! Alas painting isn't my strong suit, and I had to make the cover art myself with a canvas.

Wow, intense story. Very dramatic end, unless there is meant to be any more, though I get the feeling that this is the last chapter. Kind of sad, but at least the world is a bit safer, we hope. :fluttercry:

Anyway, thanks for writing and posting, and I hope more people find this story.

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I will admit there is one more chapter to upload (probably will do that tomorrow or the day after). Either way, I'm glad ya enjoyed it so far! it's been very fun writing and hearing back from those that read it :twilightsmile:

Such a sad yet fulfilling ending for the Rouge Ranger

Ah, so in the end he made it. Yes, that seems like the right end for this story, good coin toss, lol. It was a good read, thanks for writing, and posting, the story. :pinkiehappy:

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***Spoilers to other readers***

A very lucky coin toss lol. I'm glad ya enjoyed it :ajsmug:

There were a few points where I had to toss a coin actually:

I originally wanted Winter to only be in the stable a few years, putting her closer to Wilds age, and making her a love interest... Buuuuuut that just became weird the more I wrote out their relationship :rainbowlaugh: so I thought of Alimites character.

Another would be with Tungsten. Part of me wanted to make him part of the the group after their escape. Although that seemed like it'd be a little too much firepower for his group.

Either way, I'm very satisfied with the outcome I put together, and I'm happy others think so as well.

boy wish there was a sequel, imagine wildfire making a new chapter of rangers those that want to help the wasteland like the brotherhood in fallout 3 ah I love rereading this story.

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I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it! It was a pleasure to write. It surprises me at times to see people discovering (or rediscovering) a story of mine after its been a while since it was posted. Always a joy to see, and encouragement to keep writing :twilightsmile: As for a sequel alas, I wanted to end it on this note, but not a bad idea if I get the feeling for it later on, just gotta be in the mood :raritywink: Currently trying to work on a different FoE Fic, no relation to this one, but I hope to have similar comments for that one... Whenever I do get it posted :twilightsheepish: Thank you!

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No problem, can't wait to see and read what your cooking up keep up the great work

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