This story is a sequel to Day Dreams of Rainbows
A few months after Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash confessed their feelings to each other, Rainbow Dash proposed marriage to Twilight. Now, everyone is getting ready for the big day. A new royal wedding is on the way, and no one could be more excited.
However, Rainbow Dash is feeling quite nervous about the whole thing. She struggles with her own fears and pre wedding jitters. Will the wedding go off without a hitch? Or is their relationship doomed to fail?
Nyx is a character made by Pen Stroke.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro. I own nothing from the franchise.
Chapters (3)
Hmm...I cannot help but wonder if four months is a little fast to go from dating to married.
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My parents got married after 6 months.
20 years later, still happily married.
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Mmm. Well, I am still single, so what do I know about romance?
Lovin' it, now give me more! *awaits the next chapter*
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It all depends on the couple. My parents only waited 3 weeks and they're still happily married.
Also since they were already good friends, they were able to skip the whole 'getting to know each other' part of dating.
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Three weeks? ...Again, what do I know about romance? It seems I still have much to learn.
Beautifully written and great character dialogues! Can't wait for the next chapter!
With how well written this, the first chapter, and first story were this will be great.
Really been enjoying reading these stories. Looking forward to seeing what happens next in the lives of the new couple and Nyx. Keep up the great work.
While the story was a good story, there were some grammatical/spelling errors in the story. Here are those grammatical/spelling errors: The definition of defiantly is an adverb that is linked to the noun defiance which is defined as "bold disobedience." It is one thing to behave badly and hope to get away with it, while the definition of definitely is without doubt (used for emphasis). The reason that I pointed that out is because of this
"And I know that she would sad if she wasn’t with you.” This should either be “And I know that she would feel sad if she wasn’t with you.” or it should be "And I know that she would be sad if she wasn’t with you.”
This should be Rainbow wasn’t expecting to hear Twilight say any of that, nor did she expect an apology from her. She felt like arguing that Twilight didn’t need to apologize to her.... because apologies is the plural of apology, while apologize is the verb form of apology.
This should be Nyx skipped ahead with her flower basket and showered petals onto the carpet.
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Yeah, sorry about all that. I have to proof read my own work. I am also not the best speller in the world, especially late at night. Also, my computer is broken. It freezes up and it acts like it tabs out of programs, but it still shows the opened program. This sometimes causes missing words and even missing sentences. I have to go back and check that every sentence has all the words that i tried to type. Sometimes, I don't notice missing words or spelling errors.
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Not if you consider the fact that both Rainbow Dash and Twilight have known each other for several years by this point. All it really takes is a few months to get used to the idea of being together as a couple.
Also, there's the fact that there are a lot of couples that have eloped and have been together for years, and there are couples that went on extensive courtships for a couple of years, only to have the marriage dissolve really quickly. Each couple is different, and this one especially so.
When I read the first story, I realized that Rainbow felt just like Twilight; however, that brash pegasus isn't used to thinking about deep feelings. Once she did, though, it wouldn't have taken her long to pop the question, and it's in her nature to be bolder than Twilight.
You know what wouldve made the ending perfect.......if after Discord caught the bouquet he 'd just turn around and given it to fluttershy.
THAT WOULDVE MADE THE STORY ALL TOGETHER!!!!!!!! Loved the story though u just got a fav and fan
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Is there gonna be a followup? I would love to read more:).