Rainbow Dash was trying to help Twilight control her flying abilities, but after a long session of trying, they decided to stop for the day. The sun was setting, and the scene was romantic, and the two friends sat together, discussing Twilight's new title of 'Princess'. Twilight had felt feelings towards Rainbow Dash for a while, but contained them, keeping her true emotions hidden from the world, but the setting, and the peaceful atmosphere, did nothing but help to push Twilight to confess, and so she does...
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Cool story bro. Seriously, it was really cute!
Cute story, too short, but cute.
The pacing was a bit too fast for my taste, but i will still leave a like because of the general atmosphere in this story
Hnnng!!
*kplomp*
*dies of cuteness induced heart attack*
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*Squee* Again, thanks to everyone who commented! Honestly I will definetly aim to make this a longer, and detailed story, but it will probably have to wait for now...
awwwwwwwww, i actually loved the story mate, it was cute and shot. an amazing story to get back into reading fanficts. i really did loved it. it reminds me of a school anime when a girl is about to tell how much they love they main guy. hahhah, anyways, keep up the good work . cant wait to read more.
5119686 You are so sweet! Thank you so much!!! I'm really happy it was the one that you started with!
even though it was a little short I still loved it and it was freakin cuuuuute
This was well written, but too short. It would work very well as an scene from a longer FF.
You could whrite a very good story around this scene, if you want to.
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I think I may work on something like that, thanks in advance for any ideas I might have! :3
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I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it. Knowing other people apart from me like my stories/shots/whatever I write, makes me feel really happy!
Eh.