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Banana Prince


I used to write exclusively about dragons and thought unicorns were lame. Now I write about ponies. Life can be funny sometimes.

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Remember that one day you had when things suddenly stopped making sense or when nothing worked out for you?
In this short little satire of Equestria Girls, Flash Sentry (the pony, not the bland boyfriend character) is having one of those kind of days as we delve into the story that was never told.

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Comments ( 5 )

Hmmmmm... I liked it :pinkiesmile:

My first thought went straight to Lemony Snicket books on that short description.
I'll put this one aside for later.

5182521 Wow. It took me the whole week to figure out that your pic is Five Nights.

5202972 heh. Yeah. Love that game.

Ah. So that's why Twilight had her crown stolen so easily.... ^_^

The only suggestion I would make is to change all the language throughout this piece to the past tense, since you go between present and past tense a few times.

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