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I understand your confusion here...
Ok...so I am NOT crazy. I had a feeling all of this sounded a little familiar. But I have also been known to read too much into things. The author's note there at the beginning helped me to realize that, no, I am in fact not losing my mind to a moment of Deja Vu.
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Well this is a novelization after all...
5121420 ...yeah...I got that. I just didn't know that is was based on the comic, or if it was just coincidental that it was the same title. Cause when I saw the title, my thought was, "Wow, that sounds familiar...I have no idea why that sounds familiar. Seriously...why can't I remember why this all sounds familiar...OHHH...THAT'S why."
Just want to clarify, my confusion was only going on BEFORE I clicked on the link, and was busy figuring out where I had heard that title before. I had not read any of the story at that exact point in time, but knew it sounded familiar.
Get what I was saying now?
And note, never heard of you before now, so I did not know that doing novelization of comics was your thing.
Should I have figured the connection out sooner by myself? Yeah, probably. Do I have a memory that is legendary for not holding onto specific details, only bits and pieces, and thus little confusions like that are common to me? Also yeah.
...sorry...had a little bit of attitude going there...apologies...
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Well, it spoke for itself in the summary after all.
It was done by 7nights but it seemed that you have already learned.
And yes, I see where you are going with this...
Plus, I do a little freestyling now and then.
From the looks of it, it seems that this is the beginning of a meaningful relationship.
For that, I forgive you...
This is the most verbose clopfic I've ever read. Learning vocabulary can be fun!
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I know, right...? "Better than slang" is what I can say...!
5246605 It's kind of funny how you get passages like this:
And then lines like this:
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Well, it was a nice contrast to say the least when it comes to description and dialogue: it depends on what can be said about in the story.
I love the euphemism "his yard."
If that's literal then he's having sex with her small intestine, but I suppose it's less confusing than calling it "his foot."
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It's a synonym for a male genitalia...
5623563 I know that, i'm just saying it's a funny choice.
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Better than swearing in third person tense or using slang, right?
That has got to be the most pretentious way of saying "drinks" I have ever seen.
That has got to be the most pretentious way of saying "he came" I have ever seen.
That has got to be the most pretentious way of describing to chicks making out I have ever seen.
That has got to be the most pretentious way of describing two siblings fucking I have ever seen.
You are writing porn based on a cartoon about colorful ponies who solve their problems with the magic of friendship, not the next piece of classic literature that will be read for centuries. Based on the pretentiousness of this piece of shit, this is how I imagine you look. i.redditmedia.com/jXMxuoz5baPzT3uftjQzJTuZtS5IA4IxdmQ76VDbTqo.jpg?w=320&s=39fdc54334a5f1f0ee924d6e264561a4 It's like you used big, fancy words, not to add flavor to your writing, but because you knew big, fancy words, and wanted to make yourself seem very erudite. You just came off as pretentious. Notice how I keep using the word "pretentious"? It's because there's simply no other way to describe this. You remind me of these guys.
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Alright then, this is a response to a review that you had left in so long no less that involved in the usage of the word pretentious. In regards to the beverages, I'll admit that was a rookie mistake that a child could make; after all, I used to be a child. In regards to Big Mac's moment, it'd sounded a lot better in accommodation to the comic it was based on. In regards to the AppleShy scene, I'd would have been more brief than initially put. In regards to the Applecest, even that had a typo too. My intentions as to writing this clop were for the purpose of novelization: the choice of words I'd put down were to avoid the crass pitfalls for the most part; after all, the slang in this day and age is killing grammar today. The picture you had chosen obstinately defines me, save for a few traits: fifty shades darker, shorter hair, dark eyes, informal attire, a glass of tea, and asexual. The big, fancy words used were meant to retain a touch of class not to be pretentious; however, since that Family Guy clip made me laugh thanks to you, here's a clip courtesy of yours truly: