Awwwwwwwww, Dashie ! Stop doing this to yourself! This irresponsible shit isn't gonna end well! At least with all the other's in Ponyville there was something behind it, some kind of mutual affection. Now you're just fucking things wildly to try to make the pain go away, without actually returning any of that affection. It's become nothing but sex, and sex without affection is, to me, an atrocity. Well, not really. But having sex just for the sake of having it is selfish, imo. I don't know where I'm going with this. Damnit, Dash!
And holy buck, that part with the om nom on the Rainbow dick will give me nightmares about that movie Teeth.
Never before have I even ever considered reading anything to do with a dick going up a dude's ass and never would I ever consider reading anything to do with Griffons getting it on.
Yet I've done both of these things with this fic and you wrote it so well that I didn't mind reading it. Can't believe I've only just found this, I need to be more vigilant in the future!
Can't wait to see where you go with this, as I've said before your Twixie is some of my favourite Twixie ever.
Great Googily Yoonow. That was some seriously rough trade there. And some interesting worldbuilding with the griffons. I really liked the worldbuilding.
Actually, this story is rough trade. That scene with Gilda? That is what you are doing... to us.
562187 Time to flee back to Ponyville and be comforted! I'll get going on the next chapter. I took a day to rest up, drained my creative battery real hard with 'Caterwaul'. SOOO much new world an' foreshadowin'... They really do love Dashie. It comes at a steep price for a pony, though.
One thing though... How come you no longer write a small teaser with each chapter update? I really enjoyed those and I'm sad to see them gone. There was something special about checking out Trixie's and get a little taste of what you were in for, whilst knowing that if you missed the update the next teaser would have taken its place, and you would never know what funny, amazing or mischievous words Applejinx had used to describe the chapter with.
563284 No reason, other than "I have to remember to edit the story desc before making the actual chapter that's the update, or it won't run the updated desc on the front page when it updates, which it doesn't anyway because I can no longer get ANY update on the front page that way, or indeed in any sort of 'popular stories' list, or the features... whereupon I until I am tired and then go and write more"
But since it's for no reason, I can also start doing it again for no reason, and I will. Din't know ya cared since nopony said nothin'
Well, that Griffon sex was pretty hardcore stuff right there. Hopefully Dash is going to be alright after getting sliced like that. And AJ is going to get mad again because Dash took the bit. Hopefully she didn't forget after ravaging Gilda.
This story is amazing
Methinks Rainbow may have just bitted more than she can chew - and I'm thinking Gilda's gonna be mighty hard to swallow.
That was unexpected, but pleasantly so! Something tells me Gilda's going to be a hell of a hoof full!
Oh shit. Going back to your ex for sneersex? Oh RD!
Holy shit! Scarred face now?
Awwwwwwwww, Dashie ! Stop doing this to yourself! This irresponsible shit isn't gonna end well! At least with all the other's in Ponyville there was something behind it, some kind of mutual affection. Now you're just fucking things wildly to try to make the pain go away, without actually returning any of that affection. It's become nothing but sex, and sex without affection is, to me, an atrocity. Well, not really. But having sex just for the sake of having it is selfish, imo. I don't know where I'm going with this. Damnit, Dash!
And holy buck, that part with the om nom on the Rainbow dick will give me nightmares about that movie Teeth.
All a sign of your great writing, Applejinx.
I should've gotten some sleep...
O' course I didn't. But in a way, I'm glad. You do good work, AJ. As long as you get Jackie and Dash together by the end, I'll be happy.
This is how much I like your writing.
Never before have I even ever considered reading anything to do with a dick going up a dude's ass and never would I ever consider reading anything to do with Griffons getting it on.
Yet I've done both of these things with this fic and you wrote it so well that I didn't mind reading it. Can't believe I've only just found this, I need to be more vigilant in the future!
Can't wait to see where you go with this, as I've said before your Twixie is some of my favourite Twixie ever.
Great Googily Yoonow. That was some seriously rough trade there. And some interesting worldbuilding with the griffons. I really liked the worldbuilding.
Actually, this story is rough trade. That scene with Gilda? That is what you are doing... to us.
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Time to flee back to Ponyville and be comforted! I'll get going on the next chapter. I took a day to rest up, drained my creative battery real hard with 'Caterwaul'. SOOO much new world an' foreshadowin'...
They really do love Dashie. It comes at a steep price for a pony, though.
As always an amazing chapter :)
One thing though... How come you no longer write a small teaser with each chapter update? I really enjoyed those and I'm sad to see them gone. There was something special about checking out Trixie's and get a little taste of what you were in for, whilst knowing that if you missed the update the next teaser would have taken its place, and you would never know what funny, amazing or mischievous words Applejinx had used to describe the chapter with.
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No reason, other than "I have to remember to edit the story desc before making the actual chapter that's the update, or it won't run the updated desc on the front page when it updates, which it doesn't anyway because I can no longer get ANY update on the front page that way, or indeed in any sort of 'popular stories' list, or the features...
whereupon I until I am tired and then go and write more"
But since it's for no reason, I can also start doing it again for no reason, and I will. Din't know ya cared since nopony said nothin'
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Oh but I do! Guess it's time to speak up.
Hey! Hey Dashie!
Watch out for the ones with long nails!
Re-reading this. Still don't know what the fuck the insult 'diamondhead' is about O.o
And wee now get griffin sex. Sweet.
Well, that Griffon sex was pretty hardcore stuff right there. Hopefully Dash is going to be alright after getting sliced like that. And AJ is going to get mad again because Dash took the bit. Hopefully she didn't forget after ravaging Gilda.
This chapter makes all the feels come out. Not reading it
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You have to read the bit with Applejack hiding the feather under her pillow. It's super important.
…you can skip Rainbow preening that one feather back into place. 'cos OW