Dagnabbit, why do so few emoticon sets have a proper "building, seething rage" icon?
I'm... I'm going to assume that you haven't read Trixie's Magic Bit yet. For that reason alone, I will allow you to continue breathing, so do not contradict me. I'm not normally a Twixie fanboy, but with these two... it'll be heartbreaking if Trixie gets broken up with Twi, at least if it's not something that is *willingly* entered into by both.
Though I wonder if Twi herself has enough Lulamoon in her to trip Luna's triggers....
1058890 You might be surprised what she does have in her bag. She's given plenty of hints about it. In the evening when they stop for the night, almost there, that's when you find out what's in Rarity's bag.
Thanks for givin' me something to read, folks- not that many chapters left, and I'm working to see everything tied up neatly (in a manner of speaking). It's gonna be fun to get to the bits that have had to be worked out for weeks in advance- those are exciting- but it'll be tough when it's all over and everypony goes away (apart from passers-by)
Well, this is all getting gloriously screwed up now. So looking forward to the girls finding out who really abducted Trixie. And god, am I loving Trixie at the moment.
I'm a little surprised Luna joined Rarity on the villain list (to the extent the Trixieverse stuff has villains), but it's working really well - you've given her such an alien, abhorrent worldview. I'm a little worried she's already gone over the moral event horizon, though.
EDIT: Oh, side note - odds Rainbow's actually preggers to Mac, seeing as AJ had been molesting her wings like crazy all that morning? As far as I recall, you haven't specified just how close in proximity the wingplay needs to be to copulation to time everything properly...
Won't happen, at least the Celestia part. Her role in this story is basically to run a protest picket at the edge of Ponyville with signs like 'DICKFILLIES, WHY??!' and 'LOVING PONIES DON'T HIT EACH OTHER WITH STICKS'.
1059050 You're not paying close enough attention to pegasus thinking. Fluttershy is going to be pregnant by PINKIE, with an assist from Big Macintosh. So...
1060826 I look forward to her explaining this distinction to AJ. Should be good for a screaming match or two.
I should go back and reconfirm for myself just to what extent AJ gets the whole wings thing. I recall Dash at least partly explaining it to her, but it's been a while.
EDIT: Passing fancy - we've had no real indication how the wings thing impacts on pegasus colts. Would be funny if they shoot blanks without an appropriate amount of wingplay first. "Awww, baby, we don't need that condom. Just don't touch the wings, we'll be good. ... Baby? Awww, c'mon, I ain't tryin' to put one over on you! It's my biology, is al- Baby! Ah shit, this is what I get for dating ground-pounders."
"Awww, baby, we don't need that condom. Just don't touch the wings, we'll be good. ... Baby? Awww, c'mon, I ain't tryin' to put one over on you! It's my biology, is al- Baby! Ah shit, this is what I get for dating ground-pounders."
Once again, Trixie steals the feels here, although the inevitable fight was pretty heartwrenching too. I so desperately want to see RD and AJ get back together, and Rarity really needs for the lesson she should have gotten from what she did to Big Mac to sink in, but I know its gonna be painful. The bit with Pinkie and Flutters made me feel warm and fuzzy though.
OH god yes, finally Rarity and AJ are having a serious fight. Judging by how you have both their characters structured, they aren't going to reconcile. YES!
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Nope. At this rate I'll get to that reveal before anyone works out exactly how I gave it away....
Eeyup, I knew Applejack and Rarity was a bad combo
aaaargh, that was agonizing to read. Applejaaaaack D:
Less Applejack, and more Rarity. Girl, you have *got* to learn some restraint!
...
No, Rarity. No, that does *not* mean tie Applejack up and put a ball gag in her muzzle next time.
...
Yes, I do realize that you probably already have all the equipment in your bag. WHY ARE YOU THE PONY I'M HAVING TO SAY THIS TOO?!?
1036900
Dagnabbit, why do so few emoticon sets have a proper "building, seething rage" icon?
I'm... I'm going to assume that you haven't read Trixie's Magic Bit yet. For that reason alone, I will allow you to continue breathing, so do not contradict me. I'm not normally a Twixie fanboy, but with these two... it'll be heartbreaking if Trixie gets broken up with Twi, at least if it's not something that is *willingly* entered into by both.
Though I wonder if Twi herself has enough Lulamoon in her to trip Luna's triggers....
1058890
You might be surprised what she does have in her bag. She's given plenty of hints about it. In the evening when they stop for the night, almost there, that's when you find out what's in Rarity's bag.
Thanks for givin' me something to read, folks- not that many chapters left, and I'm working to see everything tied up neatly (in a manner of speaking). It's gonna be fun to get to the bits that have had to be worked out for weeks in advance- those are exciting- but it'll be tough when it's all over and everypony goes away (apart from passers-by)
Well, this is all getting gloriously screwed up now. So looking forward to the girls finding out who really abducted Trixie. And god, am I loving Trixie at the moment.
I'm a little surprised Luna joined Rarity on the villain list (to the extent the Trixieverse stuff has villains), but it's working really well - you've given her such an alien, abhorrent worldview. I'm a little worried she's already gone over the moral event horizon, though.
EDIT: Oh, side note - odds Rainbow's actually preggers to Mac, seeing as AJ had been molesting her wings like crazy all that morning? As far as I recall, you haven't specified just how close in proximity the wingplay needs to be to copulation to time everything properly...
.1036900
Won't happen, at least the Celestia part. Her role in this story is basically to run a protest picket at the edge of Ponyville with signs like 'DICKFILLIES, WHY??!' and 'LOVING PONIES DON'T HIT EACH OTHER WITH STICKS'.
1059050
You're not paying close enough attention to pegasus thinking. Fluttershy is going to be pregnant by PINKIE, with an assist from Big Macintosh. So...
I feel i must add: as much as i hate seeing rarijack together and enjoy the thought of the imminent break... That scene was unbelievable hot.
1060826
I look forward to her explaining this distinction to AJ. Should be good for a screaming match or two.
I should go back and reconfirm for myself just to what extent AJ gets the whole wings thing. I recall Dash at least partly explaining it to her, but it's been a while.
EDIT: Passing fancy - we've had no real indication how the wings thing impacts on pegasus colts. Would be funny if they shoot blanks without an appropriate amount of wingplay first.
"Awww, baby, we don't need that condom. Just don't touch the wings, we'll be good. ... Baby? Awww, c'mon, I ain't tryin' to put one over on you! It's my biology, is al- Baby! Ah shit, this is what I get for dating ground-pounders."
1061468
ALL she knows is, it's a massive erogenous zone for Dashie- and one Dash is inexplicably ashamed of.
It's a sore point for Dash and seemingly totally irrelevant to a lesbian relationship, so there's never been any reason to explain more to AJ...
1061468
Once again, Trixie steals the feels here, although the inevitable fight was pretty heartwrenching too. I so desperately want to see RD and AJ get back together, and Rarity really needs for the lesson she should have gotten from what she did to Big Mac to sink in, but I know its gonna be painful.
The bit with Pinkie and Flutters made me feel warm and fuzzy though.
1058992
A second magic bit, for a threesome with Rainbow Dash.
Calling it now.
OH god yes, finally Rarity and AJ are having a serious fight. Judging by how you have both their characters structured, they aren't going to reconcile. YES!
1080049
Is it bad that I want this? My feels want Applejack and Rainbow back together...
This chapter pretty much sums up how I feel about RariJack as a ship in general: dating, yes; staying together, no.
I want AppleDash back too. RariJack was a nice change and all, but they just don't click as easily. And I wonder how far LunXie will go...
RariJack pales in comparison to the greatness of AppleDash. Down to the last few chapters now.
So much proper grammar and spelling! For me it is the cherry, on top of an amazing story. Also poor RD...