HOW CAN YOUR WRITE ABOUT PONIES BEING FUTANARIS AND FUCKING EACH OTHER AND MAKE IT SUCH A GOOD THING?! DAMN! Seriously, ether you're too good at it or i'm crazy.
That was... what comes after awesome? Rarity, apparently, and all over the walls at that.
I am in awe. The descriptive passages, the clever and fun banter, the teasing joyfulness of it all. You made me care, deeply, about Applejack and Dash, freaked me out with regard to Rarity, and now I can't imagine Applejack and Rarity apart. I sit here wondering 'how do you do that?' and I cannot tell. You seem to be able to paint in colors I didn't know existed, and it isn't just novelty - your pictures are pretty as can be.
You truly have a gift. In this chapter, you managed to run through such a gamut of emotional states for me, a proper banquet of feelings.
I feel ashamed that I cannot detail the moments for you, but at least I can say this much.
now applejack is with rarity... while it was very well done and you have valid points about them both being work-a-holics but something inherent in the relationship seems to grate awkwardly. Even if you took everyone else out of the picture, I feel like there is a fatal incompatibility with them even though it's theoretically plausible with Applejack's character development, maybe Rarity will have to deal with the same thing Applejack did for twilight or something, IDK for sure...
Then you have to figure dash isn't going to like that the only pony she gave her wings to is pairing up with rarity not to mention her most recent outrage/misunderstanding with her friends and I still think Gilda might come looking for round two with dash.
Anyway, I suppose you'll answer that later after you catch up with Twixie and maybe a note on Luna's spying but that's more of a guess at what you might do next. Keep up your great work buddy!
Thanks for not pelting me with commas and hyphens this time! LOL
Dammit, I'm totally rooting for Rainbow and Applejack all the way, but this last chapter has me rooting for Rarity as well. DAMN YOU AND YOUR AWESOME WRITING! If you can't find a way to resolve this with everyone being happy then I'm going to go crazy!
As always, love your character interactions, but I'm kinda befuddled by the "large dong = best sex ever" logic at play in the Rainbow x Mac, Rainbow x Gilda, and Rarity x Applejack chapters. Especially in this last scene, there's fun interplay between Applejack and Rarara... and then the massive dick comes out, and your two characters are just kinda standing on either end it, shifting a bit to accommodate. There's a bit more at play, but it feels passive rather than erotic, and belies the explosive orgasm. I'm more interested in Applejack's first sexual experience feeling like a full-on mare than in INCOMING DICKERNAUT
647074 Because she's the element of loyalty, and is following everyones orders in the end. I just hate how everyone's making it so stupidly complicated.
Guess someone finally have gotten Rarity to change for liking stallions only to liking mares as well. But if rarijack is now a thing, how will Rainbow Dash explain what actually happened between her and Big Macintosh, so that she and Apple Jack and Rarity and Big Macintosh can get back together again ?
Oh Dashie, you poor, poor mare. Why can't you see that everything you want is right in front of you?
HOW CAN YOUR WRITE ABOUT PONIES BEING FUTANARIS AND FUCKING EACH OTHER AND MAKE IT SUCH A GOOD THING?! DAMN!
Seriously, ether you're too good at it or i'm crazy.
Rarity nearly splitting Applejack in half....
That's it. Story's over. I'm not sure if that can ever be topped!
That was... what comes after awesome? Rarity, apparently, and all over the walls at that.
I am in awe. The descriptive passages, the clever and fun banter, the teasing joyfulness of it all. You made me care, deeply, about Applejack and Dash, freaked me out with regard to Rarity, and now I can't imagine Applejack and Rarity apart. I sit here wondering 'how do you do that?' and I cannot tell. You seem to be able to paint in colors I didn't know existed, and it isn't just novelty - your pictures are pretty as can be.
You truly have a gift. In this chapter, you managed to run through such a gamut of emotional states for me, a proper banquet of feelings.
I feel ashamed that I cannot detail the moments for you, but at least I can say this much.
now applejack is with rarity... while it was very well done and you have valid points about them both being work-a-holics but something inherent in the relationship seems to grate awkwardly. Even if you took everyone else out of the picture, I feel like there is a fatal incompatibility with them even though it's theoretically plausible with Applejack's character development, maybe Rarity will have to deal with the same thing Applejack did for twilight or something, IDK for sure...
Then you have to figure dash isn't going to like that the only pony she gave her wings to is pairing up with rarity not to mention her most recent outrage/misunderstanding with her friends and I still think Gilda might come looking for round two with dash.
Anyway, I suppose you'll answer that later after you catch up with Twixie and maybe a note on Luna's spying but that's more of a guess at what you might do next. Keep up your great work buddy!
Thanks for not pelting me with commas and hyphens this time! LOL
Dammit, I'm totally rooting for Rainbow and Applejack all the way, but this last chapter has me rooting for Rarity as well. DAMN YOU AND YOUR AWESOME WRITING! If you can't find a way to resolve this with everyone being happy then I'm going to go crazy!
Seems like Rarity's worst day ever is taking a turn for the better.
I thoroughly enjoy this, as well as your other stories (adult and non). kfakjhgaopi[oprsoklam,nbvza thanks Applejinx.
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Inb4 Dash and Rarity compete. I think that might do it, if that`s what winds up happening.
I must admit I kinda hope so, I feel sorry for RD. She only did what she thought was normal.
As always, love your character interactions, but I'm kinda befuddled by the "large dong = best sex ever" logic at play in the Rainbow x Mac, Rainbow x Gilda, and Rarity x Applejack chapters. Especially in this last scene, there's fun interplay between Applejack and Rarara... and then the massive dick comes out, and your two characters are just kinda standing on either end it, shifting a bit to accommodate. There's a bit more at play, but it feels passive rather than erotic, and belies the explosive orgasm. I'm more interested in Applejack's first sexual experience feeling like a full-on mare than in INCOMING DICKERNAUT
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Because she's the element of loyalty, and is following everyones orders in the end. I just hate how everyone's making it so stupidly complicated.
And now we get some RariJack!
But what will all of this mean for AppleDash?
FlutterPie and TwiXie are practically sealed...
Wha? Oh my. If only Dash had gotten to explain to Shy and Pinkie the wing stuff. Dash will be jealous, Rarity has a bigger dick than her.
Guess someone finally have gotten Rarity to change for liking stallions only to liking mares as well. But if rarijack is now a thing, how will Rainbow Dash explain what actually happened between her and Big Macintosh, so that she and Apple Jack and Rarity and Big Macintosh can get back together again ?