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well the story is well written, it has my favorite background ponies in it, and as a musician my self i'm attracted to the whole story concept.
as for way's to improve you could try making paragraphs instead of a wall of text cause a lot of people don't really like that (personally i have no problem with it though)

thanks for the fav!

say, what did you like about R&S? and how could I improve it?

look how big this Derpy is!

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