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SeanofTheDead


"I'm a Big Goat now, I need Big Goat things!" ~Markiplier (he is not a brony)

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To answer your question: yes, they will end up happy. Romantic comedy rule #1: you know the guy on the poster is going to end up with the girl on the poster, what's interesting is what happens in the middle.

5042617 Exactly. Or I could be a dick and send their lives straight down the toilet. though I do plan on there being tough times ahead. I am on the fence currently about the 'happy' ending.

5043382 Well it wouldn't be a story without some kind of conflict, every story need a conflict. I'd maybe add something horrible in there just to screw with everyone, but the happy ending is totally up to you. Though I would prefer to see a nice crack ship like this one pull through.

5044398 So do I. But that being said. Can't have a story without conflict.

Gah! The last part needs editing!

5044811 That's wait...Dammit! I forgot to put that in the authors notes.:facehoof: hang on.

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Tension. Conflict isn't necessary, tension/uncertainty is. Conflict often provides that, but it's not the only option.

5051232 there are many types of conflict however. You are right though. The feelings a story causes is what makes it or breaks it.

Ha! Flash has a small penis. Also, I really love how Lightening's character has changed since the start of this story, she's much more interesting and level headed now and I really like it. Great job dude.

5202583 Thank you. next chapter is almost done now.

looking forward to when twilight and lightning will tell their friends and their parents about them :)

Hooray, an update! So, Discord and Celestia are seeing each other. Spitfire's a voyeur? I hate cliffhangers like this!

You know, this really isn't that much tamer than the other version.

Hm...I'm honestly not sure how the next part is going to go. The logical part of me says that Lightning and Twilight are both smart individuals who love each other and may be slightly uncomfertable with the addition of a third party. However, this is a clopfic so threeway lesbian action is probably still on the table.

6684622 well, I am writing, but nothing I put to paper seems good. It all seems wrong, or off.

6686689 why dont you get some help writing it, like another author?

6687433 well to be honest I have tried. Though for now I suppose I will just have to keep slogging through until I get it done. The problem with that solution is that I have the story mapped out, just not the details. That is what ends up kicking my ass.

6723788 im sure you'll get through it...you can do anything once you put your mind to it

6723796 the current chapter is at about 1500 words, but around half that needs to be reworked and redone. Also, I do have a writing disability that makes it difficult to write for extended periods, and makes me rather slow when it come to any sort of writing. I am trying, I do feel rather bad that I haven't put up a chapter for any of my stories in this long. Life is also a deciding factor in how much I am able to write.

6734187 hey dont stress over it. We all have real life problems and priorities. Just do what you can, we'll understand :twilightsmile:

6734207 thank you. and I am sorry for not responding sooner. I have started writing it again, just finished up with the first 1400 words of the next chapter.

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