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*Sets during Season 5*

It's been months since the Equestrian Games, due the long absence of any Internationale competitions Princess Celestia sets for a new kind of tournament that's never been made before in Equestria.

The first Worldwide Equestrian Flying Marathon will be realized in the matter of a couple of weeks.

Seeing such an opportunity to make her name in story, a certain blue pegasus will do anything she can to win the marathon. There's only one problem.

She needs a team.

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Good work keep it up!

Great chapter. Keep up the work. Plus I can see that Twilight wants to keep tabs on Lightning Dust just to be sure she's doing okay.

Not bad. Not bad at all. Keep up the work.

Looks like the plan in in motion to get the team together. Great work keep it up!!!

Alright one member down and just two more to go. Keep up the work.

This can only end so well.

Before Rainbow could finish the griffon took impulse and slammed her legs brutally against the door. The poor thing wasn't match for Gilda's strength and ended falling away a couple of meters.

Well Gilda sure knows how to make a first impression....:rainbowderp:

Heres where I disagree with spitfire. Kicking Lightning Dust out of the academy and preventing her from getting a job is going to far. She should've kept at least make her a wing pony for being reckless. Nevertheless great work and I can't wait for more!:twilightsmile:

Will Rainbow Dash/Gilda/Lightning Dust be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns? Also, in the future always make sure you always put spaces in between your words.

If I were spitfire I would've at least put her on a three week suspension till she cooled down then brought her back. Other then that great work my friend.:twilightsmile:

Pinkie is acting like Pinkie, still the big question is how the others will react to Rainbow's new friend.

Oh now your in for it Lightning. Pinkies throwing you a party. This can only end so well.

Excellent chapter, the party went better then I expected!!!

Excellent. Her road to recovery is only just starting.

Well now looks like things are gonna get interesting.

"Has thou forgot we've been to Ponyville sometimes? There's this fascinating mare called Rainbow D-

That explains it so well :rainbowlaugh:

Well now this is a very interesting plot twist.:rainbowderp:

Spitfire what do you have planned.

No need to be sorry this was worth the wait!!!!

"So as you probably did grow yours, once Spitfire kicked your flank out of the academy." The cyan mare retorted.

Wow low blow...:rainbowderp:

I thought this was during season 5, not 6. What's Starlight doing as Twilight's student here?

Dangerous minefield? Military only? No civilians not allowed? Applies to all but Twilight Sparkle she can go wherever she wants whenever without consequence.
Always thought Celestria would hush up something like that...

Well now this is gonna be a interesting reunion, lets hope nothing get's to out of control.

Well, next chapter promises to be messy. Too bad Dust noticed Spitfire before Twilight could start giving her heck for trying to poach one of their best ponies. Oh, and the part with Lightning Bolt was just confusing (since you already use Lightning and Dust interchangeably for LD alread) and seemed like an unnecessary cameo.

Still, interesting developments all around.

This could only end well. The arguments are just going to pile up until twilight pops a vessel. Keep it up my friend.

Good chapter, almost seeing a sort of possible shipping between Lightning Dust and Thunderlane. Keep up the good work, and good luck on exams! :pinkiehappy:

I smell shipping fuel. Great chapter by the way.

Aww true love!!! Btw good luck on your exams!

Glad to hear that you finished exams, looking forward to more like this great chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Now we finally get some emotion out of Spitfire. But Gilda seriously a little bit over the top there. Keep up the work.:twilightsmile:

Very touching. You did an awesome job mate! :pinkiehappy: Keep up the good work and have a Merry Christmas!

Hey your back. Great chapter by the way.

"I'm sure there must be some other in this town that know how to organize stuff without making a fuss." Gilda reassured the alicorn, though the griffon had other concerns instead.

"Wait, yes! That's it!" Twilight exclaimed all of sudden. "Gilda, do you mind accompanying me back to the town?"

How did I know right away that it was going to be Amethyst Star!? :rainbowlaugh:
And I couldn't control my laughter in the middle of class when she said what she said referencing the Slice of Life episode! :rainbowlaugh:

You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right-hand corner of the comment you want to reply to then clicking on the >> that appears. Who made the picture?


Fancy stuff but I use a cellphone.
The picture is a mix of Tsitra360 and InuHoshi-to-DarkPen.

Why do I get the feeling Kicker is about to give Rainbow a chewing out.

Finally I caught up. I am loving this story so far. Still waiting for Luna to make another appearance though.


Oh. Thanks! I was busy working on few other fanfics (FanFiction and Equestria Amino included) so this story was on hold for few months. Hopefully I will be back at it soon. Happy Hearts Warming Eve!

Hum... I might?
I've struggled with time to do this and five other stories in different platforms. I will see if I can work on something next month. Thanks :)

Is there a Link or something to the Cover Art? I cannot seem to find It and It looks really cool

The artwork is a mix of several pieces from Inuhoshi Dark Pen and Tsitra360.

Elle n'a même pas penser à Thunderlane...

Comment posted by Omegafr deleted Aug 29th, 2021

Reprenez la s'il vous plaît, c'est vraiment très plaisant à lire.
Surtout qu'il y a du ThunderDust !!!

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