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CptBrony


Engineer, Martial Artist, Scuba Diver; Always working

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They were the only ones who would help, with no training, tools, or methods. But they had the heart, the will, and the courage to do what needed to be done.
In his final hour, one man of many thinks about what his choices have led to and why he walked the path he did.



First attempt at a one-shot.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 14 )

Amazing story! Fantastic job my friend!

we are the Bronies.

The moment I saw this. I laughed my arse off

That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

ISS
ISS #4 · Sep 16th, 2014 · · 4 ·

This story would have been much better if it didn't had 'Brony' words.

For our fallen Comrades! URA!

a very touching story slightly sad and you should do a backstory as to how he got there

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I'm afraid I haven't got much time to write a backstory. I leave that to whomever chooses to do it.

The speech that inspired I believe. :duck:

Bravo. Just bravo. I definitely recognized the lines both from Ronald Reagan and Patrick Henry. This was well written. The message was brilliantly conveyed. I give this my David Crespo stamp of approval.

Not to bad, bro. It felt like two fics pinned awkwardly into one, though. It's like a story which is not. And for selling it with being the final moments of a downed fighter, there was pretty much nothing like that. I was expecting something more like this (URL: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109581/i-did-not-want-to-die (forgive the self-promotion)) or this (URL: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50795/the-youth-in-the-garden). Now, I like your style and I like what you came up with. It actually got me a little fired up inside to write something stirring for Memorial Day. Perhaps we could work together sometime in the future.

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Thanks. Most of my one-shots are either practice or me going outside my usual zone to get better at writing.

Comment posted by grim dash deleted Mar 14th, 2019

We will remember those who phot and died for freedom and justis we will remember them.

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