They came down from the stars in boats made of iron and steel. They descended onto the planet and freed it from the greed and tyranny of its reagent.
The ponies called them heroes. They call themselves Decepticons.
But whatever they are, they've done their best to improve life for the people of Equestria. To bring them out of poverty and slavery, to bring them out of fear and despair. When Queen Celestia returns, she can't abide, so she decides it's time to remind the ponies of the status quo ... whatever it takes, even if it means terminating the Decepticon leader.
Note: Takes places in the Transformers "Shattered Glass" universe.
Chapters (10)
i'm guessing this is from the 'Shattered Glass' continuity?
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Yes.
FINALLY!!! A SHATTERED GLASS STORY!!!
The Good:
Always a fan on Comic Book style narration. I think you misspelled Transform though.
Ya know what's better than one giant robot? Two giant robots that are also one even more giant robot.
Everyone who isn’t left handed has wanted to say that. And hooray for Rumbler!
Couldn’t find just one quote to use here, so I'll just say that I really like the way you write Twilights villain diologue.
The Bad:
Hurray for tactical expert Megaton. A round of applause, everyone.
...I see what you’re trying to do with Cheerilee, but as the sun of teacher, I have to call it. No preschool teacher would ever act like that.
And, while I like Megatron helping his friend, I'm not sure that this was the smartest route.
Just one last thing: You already have a ton of characters here. Your other story got bogged down with too many people and lost track of most of them. Try and keep the cast smaller.
Ah yes I remember reading your last SG fic way back when.
The Good:
Starscream is useful!
I really liked Megatron. He kinda remeinds me of Animated!Prime.
EvilTwilgiht is an amazing villain, as always.
Sideswipe and Cliffjumper have good chemistry.
Rodimus is decent at leading.
Terrific fight.
Chrysalis is fantastic here.
The Bad:
A few descriptions felt a bit beige, mainly in the beginning.
Megatron's indecision over the Stunticon's wasn't necessary, seeing as it had such an easy fix.
We are pleased with this offering. We will not kill you... For now.
FINALLY! I'm sorry this has taken so long.
Barely started and I already like Evilestia.
It's a bit odd of a reaction from a smug snake like Evilestia.
Good job, Cliffjumper.
You have the best villains.
Semantics. You're too thin skinned.
Of course it will. Since when do giant force fields made to keep out giant robots fail in modern fiction?
...Now that I'm thinking about it... do force fields ever work?
He handles shock well.
Well, those are some impressively brave hidden depth's.
Oooo, classic!
...this is gonna be one of those episodes, isn't it?
Yep, its definitely time for new toys in Hasbro land.
Ultimately, this is fantastic. Emotional in the rights parts, and the pacing was solid. On the other hand, it was a bit cliched in places. Great job.
How slowly are they driving away?
Cliche evil, but pragmatic and not illogical. Have I mentioned Evilestia is a great villain today? It needs to be a once a day thing.
That was a really weird description.
That was adorable. This whole scene was fantastic.
Not a big fan of the Mane Six's alternate personalities; unlike Evilestia and Evilight, they aren't evil version of our beloved ponies, their just reveres ed versions of our beloved ponies.
"And now, we will let you get away, instead of trying to catch as is our job! It's a nuanced plan, but give it time."
And then Starscream proves to be competent. I really liked how far you pushed Starscream this chapter, you had me going there.
This is golden!
You're totally gettin' good at writing this fic.
The Transformer-pony interactions are the very best thing about this story you're writing, my friend.
Stuff's gettin' real. ;)
Perfecto!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aggjIMqaRn4
I'm enjoying this fic more and more. :)
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Not gonna lie;
I was expecting that to lead to Doctor Facilier's Friends From The Other Side from The Princess and the Frog.
In fact ...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yZAY-78zhmw
*watches your link*
I like this one. The brief history lesson on the Cyber Planet Keys is my favorite part.
Bravo on yet another great chapter! The characters are so epicly realized!
You write warfare so good. And once again, you nail the Transformer-pony dynamic.
You've ended this story with a literal bang. You've got a talent for storytelling. :)
What a ending!
I love it!
Best ending ever!!!!!!
Anyone noticed the Star Wars Episode 2 reference in the end? I did
Love it.
Absolutely love it.
Okay so last chapter Megs got offlined so how long till Galavtron pops up?
Quick question, if you are still answering comments, what does Twilight look like? Since ponies are swapping colors too, does she have Trixie’s pallet? Is she white and pink?