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syrograph


I are guy who gonna teach u lesson

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Being a princess in Equestria is tiring work. After many long years of rule, they've seen absolutely everything. Right?

A series of short (ish!) stories about our favourite four-legged diarchy and how they deal with various things modern Equestrian life throws at them.

It's not as though it's going to be difficult. They've seen plenty of generations come and go. Nopony could possibly put them out of their depth.

They think.


Stories so far:

Healthy Living: Celestia can't remember if she ever had the one-time disease "Filly Fever". It's been so long, she must have forgotten it.

Trending Topic: A new toy craze takes Equestria by storm, and Luna is in the eye of it all.

Princess Celestia's Uneventful Day: It's nice to unwind and read a good book once in a while. Fate has other plans.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 32 )
JackRipper
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A story with a decent premise, good cover art, and acceptable prose?

Am I on the right site? :trollestia:

Good story also did you make this art?

I love how this is written. It's delectable. Thank you for writing this.

8620693
Behold my terrible pulp, wherein the rules don't apply! Thank you. :B

8620621
I did indeed. And it was meant to be a simple doodle that got out of hand... I suffer for my art.

8620607
I dunno... I think so. This was written four years ago so I can't guarantee that my prose will remain at this standard. Has fimfic become a lot less active since?

8620727
Do you have a da account or do commission work?

8620729
I don't have a DA and I'm not taking commissions, sorry. If I had more time in between my other projects I would! ^^;

HEHEHehe poor Twilight.

8620786
I love the idea that, despite their history, and Celestia's outwardly regal appearance, she still delights on tormenting Twilight at times.

“But are y'sure y'can do it? I'm not even sure Princess Luna can.”

Well, obviously she can't, or I think she would've done so by now. :rainbowlaugh:

Cute tale. :twilightsmile:

8621823
Thank ya kindly <33

I think they had kind of a Captain Obvious moment, ha <3

Why is chapter two so long?

8623286
Just turned out that way ^^;

It's a complete story with three different plots running parallel until the very end, so I had to keep jumping between scenes.

Originally it was about half this length, but by the end it felt rushed, so I lengthened it a bit.

I might consider splitting this one in to two parts, half and half. We'll see about it.

Could definitively work as an episode from the actual show, a good one :D

8624627
Probably double episode, from the length of it!

Thank you so much. Glad I could keep it somewhat close to the feel of the show.

I just bear in mind that there's some darkness hidden deep down in it, especially if you take in to account creatures like Discord existing in the first place. :D

8624948
Ha, I didn't intend for Orion to become Luna's pet permanently, but I suppose he is a little bit like Tiberius after all!

I should catch up on the IDW comics. I really enjoy them. <3

Terrible taste in literature. The sisters are well written and relatable here though.

8639898
I assure you it's not my taste in literature! <3

But thank you very much ;)

I really enjoy writing the princesses.

8639905
10/10 would receive nice comment from you again.

<3 thanks

Still a better love story than Twilight... and that's a bar so low a beetle can walk over it.

8640189
How was fifty shades better than twilight if it was based on it? : 3

I read most of this with a wry, vaguely amused smirk. The characterization was spot on. Then the last line of Ch. 3 made me spit out my coffee, and I wasn't even drinking any.

That's actually somewhat concerning in hindsight.

8640264
A great deal of FiM fanfiction is superior in story to the series it's based on. All due respect, but your argument is invalid. :trixieshiftright:

So thanks for that.

8642233
The curse of the spontaneously exuding tertiary fluid!

I hope it wasn't hot!

Thank you though, I really appreciate it. It's great hearing that my characterisation is good; it's always best when a story fits the character, at least to some degree. Not that fanfiction can't bend their wills a little bit to make things happen, but man, dialogue is super important, hm? :P

Thanks again <3

Never saw the appeal of the story myself, but yeah, Luna's right. If she and Celestia enjoy it, then frankly, who cares what everyone else thinks? :pinkiehappy:

8643708
I mean, yeah, right?

We're on a fan-fiction site for ponies, I think we can understand her point. ;D

Why didn't Luna and Twilight do it together?Even if they couldn't I'm sure Candance could have helped heck even flurry.:facehoof:It was a simple solution.

Ponies are dumb.

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