Nightmare Moon, Discord, Queen Chrysalis, Sombra, they all have two things in common. They're evil and they were all defeated by the six heroes of Equestria, save Discord, who's no longer evil. Together they've forged a bond of friendship to stand the test of time through and through, never to break. Nopony is closer to each other then these six mares.
Yet Twilight still feels as if she doesn't truly know them, like they're hiding something. She feels as if they each have a secret, be it dark or painful, but she doesn't know what. She has to find out, but that won't be easy, considering her friends always seem to disappear whenever she wants to talk to them.
And she's not the only one who feels this way. There are others who are out to get revenge on Twilight and her friends, those who would love nothing more then to see them all burn in the fires of 'justice'.
This is awesome!!!
I can already see where this is going... And I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to see the next chapter
Fantastic. Take my mone- I mean like and favorite.
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
4765758 Yes, there will be some very epic fighting.
Hell yeah! :c:twilight_sparkle:
4766257 Yeeeeaaaah!!!
Very original, I loveit
4766488 really? I don't read many adventure stories but I figured this had been done many times already.
Woohoo! I'm glad to see this updating again.
I like the way this is going, except for one thing. Twilight seems to be slightly out of character. She wouldn't just leave Apple Bloom like that. She would try to reassure her or slmething. But she wouldn't leave her! Also, if Apple Bloom is failing, she's want to help, not be a powerful bystander. That's not something she would do. She would want to know so that she could help.
That's really the only problem I could find, though, and I'm really excited to read the rest of the story.
(This was meant to be on Chapter 3, but something is off with somethig, cause it won't let me.)
5028113 Hmm, I see your point, but I'm coming from the side of, Twilight is tired and not ready to deal with this s**t. She was surprised, worried, but just not in the mood.
Glad you like it!
5028119 Okay then, but you could probably make that a bit more clear in the story itself.
5028134 Well, I thought I'd made it plenty clear, but okay, I'll do that in the future.
wow, way to be sympathetic, twilight. you make a little filly cry, and then just leave her all alone? when did you become so heartless?
5028168 Or it could just be me being stupid again. That's always a possibility-- one I had not considered this time, therefore proving it. So, now that I think about it, you would be well off just ignoring that until someone else agrees with me. Sorry.
5028290 Ah, seems I made a mistake.
I was just thinking in the mind set of, "I'm too tired for this, I don't want to deal with a filly, I have more important things to do, etc."
5028291 No, you're not stupid. Stop saying that.
5028352 still.....
5028375 Yeah... I might have to edit that part.
5028359 But what if I am?
5028385 You're not. I'd be able to tell if you were stupid.
5028394 Uh huh. And how would you do that? Besides, I can be stupid at quite a few things. There is stuff I just won't get. There is stuff I'll never pick up on. Stuff I will never know.
5028383 i mean, i get that she was tired and felt that she had somewhere she needed to be, but i don't think that twilight would just blow off a little filly that was having a mental breakdown. especially if she was the cause of it.
5028395 So? If that's your definition of stupid, then I'm stupid too.
5028398 She could see that the filly was a little bit... over exaggerating. I put a few parts in there where it said Apple Bloom was blowing things out of proportion. I should add a little more, probably.
5028404 No, a lot of stuff. I can justificably call myself call myself stupid. Either way, my math scores are just proof of that. I lowered my score too much with nothing but stupid mistakes that a kindergartener wouldn't make.
5028435 I'm supposed to be in twelfth grade and I'm having to retake basic algebra because I failed it.
5028460 So? Different minds think differently. These are just stupid mistakes that I'm making.
5028499 You think I'm not making stupid mistakes? I'm starting to fail math because I don't turn in homework because I'm too stupid to remember it.
5028525 You can't always control memory.
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5028499
Now both of you just shut up!
You're both wonderful human beings with wonderful things that make you important despite your flaws! 
5028550 I know. I suffer from short term memory loss (not as extreme as some, but still)
5028552 Aww, why thank you!
5028563
5028563 So how is that your fault?
5028552 Important is subjective.
5028579 I don't believe that. You matter to someone.
5028587 You disagree with him? You think you don't matter to anyone?
5028598 Well I don't very much appreciate it. I spend my time, every day I can, trying to make sure you're okay. Even if it doesn't work, at least I try, and here you are, being sarcastic about it. Thanks. Glad to know my friendship means something to you.
5028644 Stop. Okay? Stop, now. I'm not doing this. When you feel like not toying with me and messing with my emotions, then we can talk. If you comment one more stupid thing here, I will ban you, okay? I'm not dealing with this. I'm having enough trouble in my life without my own friend trying to screw with my emotions.
5028598 Hey, no matter what anyone tells ya, if there is no one else on earth that cares, the freaking Creator of the Universe cares for you and loves you, so much so that He sent His only Son to die for ya, so you don 't feel like you're worthless.
And if ya don't believe that, then, well, gosh dangit, I care!
I know for a fact that you are an awesome person!
And so does 5028607! There are people who think you're important!
5028671 Oh cool! Yousa be a christian?
Unfortunatly, she is not.
5028671 I'm an Aethiest Jew, I don't believe in Jesus. And, again, I never said whether that was sarcasm or not. That is up to anyone to interpret how they want.
5028666 And that is what I meant that whole long while ago when I said, "I can be cruel at times." Sorry. It slips out sometimes, whether in real life or not. I won't toy with your emotions. I'll do my best to prevent it. And I'll even go back and delete my previous comments about it. Alright? (Sarcasm unintended)
5028666 Hey, whatever you do, don't give up caring. I don't know your personal struggles, but I do know that if you give up, darkness and depression win. I have personally decided to stick around to be an encouragement to both of ya, but you can't quit!
5028699 At any rate, just don't tell yourself that you're stupid and unimportant, because you're not.
5028713 It's easy to convince oneself otherwise at times.
5028720 I know. The brain is a VERY powerful thing.
But sometimes, you just gotta fight what your brain is telling you. It's hard. Seemingly impossible, even. It's in times like those where ya gotta focus on the people who are trying to help.
There is no 'just getting over it' and people who say crap like that are stupid, but building self-esteem can be done, even if you just take small steps.
5028749 I've never managed to fight back against something like this. I seriously doubt that I'll start now, and I'd prefer not to get my hopes crushed by reality.
5028699 Okay...
5028704 I won't ever stop caring. But I can't be there 100% of the time... and I can't last forever. Everyone has their limits.
Thank you.