BOOK 1
How is one to react to one's world being changed? How should one react to losing what one holds dear? How do we cope? How do we move on?
Maybe we don't. Maybe we are meant to stay in our grief, and mourn for what was, and what never will be. Maybe we aren't meant to rise up, but to fall down.
What do we do? We stop. We don't try. We don't think. We grieve. We mourn. We break. We apologize. We cry.
We are so sorry...
Yet we have no control.
For best effect, listen to this while reading. If it stops while you are still reading, play it again. It really helps add to the emotions.
This is the first installment of my Heaven's Tears series.
Chapters (1)
Wow.... Just wow... This is gonna be reviewed.
...why is my keyboard wet?
Excellent work...
I totally didnt cry.
Not a bit.
Nope.
I have an experience so so similar to this and.... i don't know who you are, but i love you...
so much liquid pride.....
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Cool! I can't wait!
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I know, I tried really hard to make this a well written tear-jerker.
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Well... thanks. I hope I didn't, like, stir up some sort of emotional distress?
3948234 Not at all my good pony.
Twas good to have a nice cry over forgotten memories. 
I certainly was sad... to a point.
But what ruined it for me is the AppleDash part.
3949507 Ah, well, sorry to hear that.
So well written, and the song you recommended fits perfectly with this. Applebloom was just too young.
Definitely impressive for you're first tear jerker. You must write more sadfics.
*derp*
3949925 Well, I've written other sadfics, this was just my first REAL attempt at a tear-jerker. My other sadfics were just kind of thrown together. I put more thought into this one.
Glad you like it!
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Much apologies for the unusual comment above. I had something there, but I realized I made an error. I don't delete comments, but I couldn't think of anything to say at the moment.
Definitely a nicely written story. The eye-catch near the end was great, but far too emphasized in my opinion. Made the soufflé of the story fall flat. Example:
Too many tears. Tears falling take time. AJ and RD still not fast enough? Remove mention of the tears because no one has time to cry in that type of situation. Everything else there is fine.
This was by far the best sadfic I have ever read from you.
3972714 Thank you...
Don't cry.
NO
TEAR
GET BACK IN THERE
fruq it
I didn't cry is something wrong with me
4036052 Nope.
If you didn't cry, the way write doesn't pull at you heart the way it does t others. That's all.
Wow, this was really emotional...
I have to admit, I did get some tears in my eyes, and at times, I felt it was hard to breathe. So congrats on your lovely fic!
i demand a reading of this!
4057241 By whom?
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suggestively a male.
anypony
4057362 You know what would be an amazing honor? to have Mic do a dramatic reading of your story...
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thats so funny....are you being sarcastic-oh....
thanks that was so beautiful....if youre talking to me...
who? mine?
4057429 I'm not saying anyone's specifically... I'm saying if Mic read one of your stories, you'd be honored. If he read one of mine, I'd be honored... its just an honoring thing...
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thats what i thought
*sniff* I'm gonna need a moment........ BRAVO!!!!!!!
That was a beautiful story. It was so super sad that I shed some tears. You did a great job writing the story. I love it so much it was a awesome story. Great job on this. I'll be looking forward to read the sequel soon.
4114998 I'm glad you liked it... i worked extra hard on it... tell me what you think of the sequel!
I didn't cry, but only because I skipped some parts of the story. Sorry, I'll get back to reading them later, it's just kind of hard to handle a fanfic like this, and I can't really start crying right now. (I'm in a situation where I can't really let myself cry, as I'm on a break from repainting the house here and I'm only reading to pass the time).
AppleDash seemed pretty unnececery, but I wouldn't say it was bad, or intrusive at all, so it's fine by me.
4217232 Cool!
I-i think I'm going to cry...
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I'm sure he'll be back...
*Five hours later*
Okay he won't come back Good story
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Finally, I made someone cry...
4269279 is that good?
4381273 Is what good?
4381583 MAKEING PEOPLE CRY?!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?
4381588 Yes it's good. When people cry, it helps their emotions.
4381607 me:Hey AJ so we contiue...'licking'
4381620 Oh ho ho no! Not that again!
4381633 lol I START IT!!!!
4381647 I am busy tonight! Maybes tomorrows!
4381650 yeah yeah sure.......
4381653 please don't cry...
4381663 I wonts crys over this just kinda depress :/
4381796 Oh... I'm sorry...
While looking through your stories, I realized I hadn't read this one. I am totally going to read it later, I just.... I don't know... I don't feel like a sad fic right now... But I will TOTALLY read it tonight!
4482035 Okay.
Aww wa wa wa,
I got the feels. I liked that filly.
I can still hear that song..
4/5 *Tears*
4752935 I always get confused when responding to these... I made you cry... Do I say yay?