Scootaloo goes to get Rainbow Dash a gift, but in the storm she loses her way and needs a savior. Her gift is made even more precious by the following events.
We will risk it all for those we love. Nothing can stop us, and nothing can break our bonds we form with our loved ones.
Not even death.
Bravo!
Very well done!
WAAAAHHH
The tears
So... good?
*SOBBING* WHO CHOPPED ALL THE ONIONS?
Aw... that's.... sweet....
I almost cried, ALMOST.
and THAT is an accomplishment
wait... here comes the tears
Well, I'm glad you all like it. This is my second piece of work, and I was afraid I wasn't good at writing.
On to story number 3!
Why is there chopped onions everywhere?
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
I totally felt tears.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmRzcWHZKas
Good story, really sad though
Very good. Very good......and sad.
this... yeah wow made me silently cry no matter how hard I fought it, well played.
I'm not an easy person to get upset so the effect you've created is quite well done.
3687700 good song choice, very fitting.
Sad and well done
i cried
Please check out my recent analytical reveiw on a story called Sail of the Vampire! The story is good and I need feedback on my analyzing skills.
scoot is died??????
Yeah...
mother of god...i didnt see the title
looks like i have to change the name of my story
Sad, but very well done.
If I read too many of these, I'll be influenced
3950156 I really like to write tragic stories...
SCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTAAAAALOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
It's gonna take more than that to make me cry
4177154 Oh great... now I gott try and make you cry... don't you KNOW how BUSY I am right now? I don't need to try and make someone cry! But I can't resist a challenge! AHHHGGG!!!
Just kidding, I'm way to busy, but I would appreciate if you checked my other stories.
I shouldn't be reading this while holding a knife.......good story made me cry a lot....I swear
ear if you ever kill scootaloo again I will hurt you
4216502 Oh... uh... *rewrites story about scootaloo dying*
4484637 Let them flow...
4486527 You read any of my other stories?
4486543 Ah. Okay.
4486612 Thanks
Not that I'm complaining or anything, but have you written any stories which don't involve someone dying?
I suppose it's best that you stick with what you're good at though (because you are good at it). Not like that one comedy story you wrote...
4695561 ah yes... That comedy sucked...
To be honest... no, i have not and more than likely will not write a story without some pony dying... It's just how I write, unfortunately...
4756657 Yeah...
4756677
It was so sad.
4756678 Did you like it?
4756681
Yep! GamerX was right! You are a great writer!
4756694 Ooh, you know Gamer?
4756699
I kinda do, not really. She is friends with my friend Scootaloo X. So that's how I know her. We talked a few times and she is really nice. She mentioned how great you were, and that I should read your stories.
4756708 Ah okay
4756725
I don't know her very well, but she seems like a really nice person.
4756735 She's a VERY nice person.
4757329
Can I ask a favor?
4757379 Eeyup.
4757397
I sent it.
The FEELS! So sad... But very well written.
4915980 Thank you!
The snow ball of effects all in one story
( good story)
SCOOTSY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!