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Scootaloo has been diagnosed with a disease that constantly eats away at her wing bones, thus they never grow. With a possible cure and a limited time, Sweetie Belle will stop at nothing to assure her friend can fly.
But can Scootaloo deal with the possible sacrifice that must be made in order to live her dream?
A true friend will stop at nothing to help others achieve their dreams, even going so far as to lose their own dreams.
Or their own life.
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Well theres a soaked pillow
Better than original i know its the same but rewritten but shut up
4351566 Yay... more tears of sorrow!
Hu, a few of the mistakes i noticed before are gone.
Why
This is every bit as sad as the original version. Sweetie Belle is a true friend.
4352263 Ah, yeah, the first time, I didn't proof read it at all. This time, I was a little more thorough.
4352364
4352802 Thank you. I hope you'll like the sequel just as much.
4353098 sequel? Awesome!!
4353896 It will be out within the week
4353927 gulp why do I feel butterfly's in stomach?
4360936 I have nooooo idea...
4360945 *gulp*might as well read
4360952 wait do I wants to cry right now?i dunno.
4360952 Please do.
4360955 but when everything is quite to experience it better cause now is noise as hell
4360963 Ah... yeah...
4360967 ......so how's the weather?
4360972 Um, great! We got some rain!
4360992 here some question......Who's your favorite character?Do u watch anime?if u do which is your favorite?do u like muffins?what about derpy?What about background PONYS?what do u think of mlp s4?do u hate a espisode if so why?
Phew.......that was a lot of typing
4361009
Applejack
Yes
RWBY
Yes
I love her
Lyra or Vinyl
I love it. Not the best season, but great still.
No, I'm not one to hate anything in MLP:FiM
4361023 yay!
So, she is blind, why?
4362289 I feel like I already said this, but oh well.
She's blind because of two things:
Severe Brain Trauma, from being jerked and snapped around.
Sensory Overload from all the pain her little body felt. (not entirely sure that's real, but I'm going with it)
I hope that makes sense.
After reading some of your other stories I was expecting Rarity to be hanging from a rope (wait, this is Rarity... "hanging from a fashionable scarf"), but I suppose you planned that didn't you.
Sweetie's blindness could probably also have been caused by what could be considered a stroke, a lack of oxygen to the brain, when she y'know... Died...
4695784 Yeah, I'm not really a medical expert... I don't know a lot of these things.
I hope you liked the story?
4696137 Yeah, I did enjoy it. In a way I enjoyed it more than your other stories, since this is about a somewhat intentional sacrifice; where several of your others that I've read are simply "this pony died, everyone was sad"
4698993 Ah, yes. I decided to add a plot to this outside of suicide. Guess it turned out better. I'm kind of done writing stories where the ponies just die.
4867208 :'(
Wtf Dash?
5046687 Mmm hmm
Well, that was different than what I'm used to seeing out of you. Still, it was a nice read regardless, despite the fact that I don't understand how this situation caused Sweetie Belle to go blind. Ah well, good going! Cheers
5262403 Ah, thanks! Glad you liked it!
If I may, Ill clear up the confusion.
Trauma to her brain, basically. She was whipped around and thrown to the ground and it was too much for her body to handle. Her brain got a little damaged when everything went down, that part being the one that controls eye sight.
Well then. That was sad. I don't know how I should feel about Rainbow Dash now. Anyway, I really enjoyed this story.
5562522 Thanks!
Congrats on making it to 100 thumbs up, Silver!
5575555 Oh wow! I didn't even notice! Awesome! Thanks!
5780634
Tears came to my eyes from this story. Great job.
6364758 thank you ^^
beautiful
WHY WHY MUST THE CREATOR BE SO CRUEL!
ngh the feels