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WritingDragonfly


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Now has a companion story! With All My Heart, Fluttershy

"'My Dearest Fluttershy...?' ... naw, too cheesy...
'Dear Fluttershy...?' ... too formal...
'My Beautiful Butterfly...?" ... Waaaaay too lame. I... might need some help."

When you're not a romantic and you're too prideful to say it to their face, sometimes you need a little help to write "I love you."

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

I love the ship and the premise, and while I thought it could have been more fleshed out I think it's solid and cute. :yay::rainbowwild:

4657943 Thank you very much! I'm just trying to get back into writing, and this was meant to be a quick story (went from concept to done in under 12 hours), so I can understand the sentiment that it should be more fleshed out. I'm glad you liked it despite that, though! :rainbowkiss:

That was adorable. A solid premise with well written characters and some really cute moments; that's enough to make my day. It's just a shame that it was so short. A bit more time spent fleshing out the story and I'd be sold.
:heart:

:pinkiegasp:
Best...Story...EVER!!!!
:yay::rainbowkiss:
Flutterdash Stories
(I like those kinds of stories)

I feel for you, Dashie; I could never come up with anything like that without a whole lot of help.

4658270 Glad to hear I brightened your day, your comment definitely brightened mine! I know it was a little short, concept to completion took a little under 12 hours, and half of that time was spent at work. :twilightsheepish: This was really just to get me back into writing, hopefully my future works will be more fleshed out, and I hope they brighten your day like this one did!

Awww, that wa- GAH! Cavity! CAVITIES! QUICK! CALL THE COLGATE! Also, I liked it! TO THE DENTIST!

Only one flaw:
There isn't more of it. Fantastic job.
~Wywint

While I am not really a fan of Flutterdash, this made me feel warm and fuzzy, even coming from my least favourite genre. I need to hug something. Now.

I put this on another story recently, but my reaction to the cuteness is the same.

Aww! That was sweet.:heart: This gave me warm and fuzzy feels. :rainbowkiss: Great job on this! :ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2:

A really cute story, though as others have said it could defenitely be fleshed out more. It still earns you a like though.

A very impressive job, both are very in character and it ended on a gentle note, loved it:ajsmug:

Man, so much blushing in these stories. Is that how people ALWAYS react around someone they love? I always enjoy stories of romance, but it gets annoying in these kinds of stories. I don't know if it's just because I never blush. I don't know the feeling.

But then again, I don't even know what LOVE feels like.

4768543

Heartless Hater.

Makes sense that one thumbs down. But the rest of the 100+ people that have thumbs up beg to differ.

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