Cliffside High was sent to the outskirts of Ponyville, causing mass hysteria to both the ponies and the humans. After Mark and Princess Celestia patches the trust, the students continue to learn in school while learning the life of Equestria. Many are hoping to come back home while others have left behind the school altogether, both students and teachers.
Question remains. Will they come back home? Or are they stuck forever?
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You may suggest random human names for future chapters.
Chapters (5)
i think the story is not bad, i am not sure about it yet, but i had my laugh. It would be so predictable if it would be Luna who whant to speak him.
I have nothing against it, just after a few fanfics, i start not liking it if some ponys or in some Cases Luna, try to be to much help and godirectly after the main OC and try to talk maybe about his bad dream.
Well i wanted to say that i hope in this fanfic, Luna don´t try to force im to a solution and let him room to decide. If it would be really Luna.
To be sure you now what i mean...in one fanfic it even looked like Luna tried to make one Human fell bad because he doesn´t wanted to be together with a pony and in the end they were together. Well she screamed at him and it looked like out of fear he suddenly started to let himself talked/forced into a relationship. ( ahh bad english, i hope you can understand me well enough
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Thank you for the positive feedback. I've been down in the dumps until I read this.
Your suggestion seems smart. I'll be sure to follow it when I write the next chapter.
4604888 thx even i have my moments
and no problem i guess
If this happend I would scream YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY! And explore
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I don't think I need a last name, but I can never be too sure of that. A list of last names would probably be best since my current cast doesn't have one.
Ok then
That was fast I wanted to see if anyone saw that
Ha! Teachers pet!
I am glad that you don´t make Cadance a stubborn here.
For one moment i sweared she would force him to listen to her and get a girlfriend or marefriend.
I think you make it good, i think i had to many fanfics, where the princess Ponys, thought they could just force the Human´s to act like they want without trying to understand them or let them do their own things.
Like i said i am happy that you don´t make them force them to much, i think i said it already but in another story a Human was forced to start love Derpy in some way.
At the moment it looked a bit like that teaching is something Twilight really wanted to do and like there would start a romance between Mark and him.....i guess this could be sweet. Well i start to want think again, which don´t want happen, but thats always a sign that i like a story.
That he somehoe helped Twilight in her emotional state was somehow cute.
PS:
Author's Note:
I'm not at my best right now, but this is what I got done. I hope you enjoy.
-Of course i do, you be at least able to finish a chapter and i am still trying to get something finish...well maybe i try to hard, i think for one story i already have enough for the first chapter but it start growing and i have a writers block right now. To many different ideas.
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Thank you for your comment. I was reassured and very happy to read this. I also like your opinions. The last comment really helped me make this chapter, and this comment makes me feel relieved for the future chapters.
I'm not sure about the romance part yet. I've been thinking about adding that tag for later just in case.
As for the thing about writers block, I often have those as well. They get increasingly difficult to get over when someone brings you down. But then again, I guess that happens when you write a bad story.
But that aside, it's luckily not impossible to get over. I think all you need is to talk to someone who is willing to listen to you and hopefully agree with you. That way, it makes everything so much clearer.
Not bad. I think this is a rather interesting angle for a HIE story. Keep up the good work!
I like dis, plz make it long
i really hope you continue this great story and i would like it if cadence/celestia routinely shoved a girl or mare in his face damn near forcing him to at least try but i guess thats just my opinion. I also dont know why this has the rating it does, it should have a much higher rating
Bun bun bummmmmmmmmm
poor mark he got dragged out of class and got marked absent well that's not that bad... (end of school year) mark:WHATI HAVE TO REDO A GRADE WHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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It reminds me a lot about my troubles in school too.
4638658 I'm going to middle school so now that's going to be a problem... well once summer is over
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Going to be finishing high school next year.
I feel kinda sad cause that means I'm gonna be old like her.
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you had to go there (nice joke though)
not bad, i maybe expected something other, but i am always glad if not everything went the way, the main six want it to happen.
Yeah you know what i mean, i said it all the time, but i think good work.
Field trip to Ponyville?
Definitely field trip to Ponyville. With Lyra!
I mean, come on, a HiE story without Lyra?
idea 2 or 3 i think, but i don´t want Dash to boast off to much, i just don´t like it if the princesses force the others and Humans t odo as they would to and live like that.
But maybe if you include Cadance, she could try to bring Twilight and him closer, this was it wouldn´t be just force them, it would be some kind of funny for me i think. ;)
PS: I am glad that he doesn´t give in so fast and even at the end he isn´t suddenly full of friendship, he just admit that it is a good thing. And well i hope he still put them in their place if they did something wrong.
I can´t believe that Spike take this as a normal behavor, then again most of the Ponys are weird in some way.
"I sent her to equestra" you mean ponyville
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I'm terrible.
Thanks for the point out. I obviously cannot focus when I'm sick.
4661166 I can't focous either when I'm sick so its ok
field trip to ponyville please.
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I freaked out when I opened the pic.
Then I laughed so hard.
That was a good one.
Mark is similar to how I was when I was younger.
But I'm more a Twilight now, I guess.
Realized that there's more to life than reading all the time.
This is pretty good. I like the interaction between Mark and Tia.
Keep up the good work.
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Thanks! I'm glad you like those scenes.
So you can relate to Mark a lot huh? That's interesting. Yeah, there's more to a character than you'd think.
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Yep, after all, there's more than meets the eye.