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Thule117


An aspiring writer who grew strong with the help of fellow fans of MLP.

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Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Cadance, the four supreme powers of the old world. Born to lead, they rouse their mighty armies to conquer all before them. The mountains will quake, the seas shall boil, the sky itself shall crack open, AND NONE, save perhaps the chaos god of poor connection speed, SHALL STAND IN THEIR WAY!! At least, until a dark and mysterious strategist comes to challenge their supremacy. . .

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

Okay. The last part saved the story. Here I was thinking this was going to devolve into actual blood and gore in reality, and your "villain" was planning to do very not nice things to ponies for real, not just online.

Wow, this Jack sure is sweaty ( Meaning he is very nervous and timid ).

When a while ago, he was super confident on being the first person to beat the Princesses. :unsuresweetie:

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It's easy to talk shit about someone when you think they're not on the other end. Not so much when it is that person (or pony in this case) you're smack talking. Especially since Celestia, apparently, is generally acknowledged to be one of the best here.

Damn, I can't wait for the next chapter !

Legend of Total war here

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Legend of Total War : "Today's disaster battle comes from Solinvictus1500, let's see here we have a taurox army invading...Tyrion can't force march away so we have to fight. Looks like he's got an all comers army against ... Let's see... Oh. OH NO.

So I have to ask where or who did the cover art?

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Good question, I pulled it off google image search as the most appropriate image I could find for the story. Unfortunately it's been so long now that I can't recall where it originally came from or who drew it.

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Ah it’s fine thanks for telling me anyways

Story brings back good memories of my Archaon led Chaos Warriors decimating all before me. It had been a good army that rarely if ever failed me.

More fics should be like this.:twilightsmile:

More I need more

The story is nice, but Jack is too unlikable, I just can't enjoy it with this stuttering, embarrassing fanboy.

A man should never act like that, the world is not merciful with people like him.

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You mean kinda' like how "a man" shouldn't watch cartoons for girls about magical ponies solving problems with the power of friendship? Get real dude.

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Artist is php92.
Image # 827569 on Derpibooru.org.

I hope the story is going to be continued, it’s been awhile since the last update.

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Apologies, I know it's been awhile. The story will continue, albeit not as fast as I'd like. I'm having some issues getting time to write and I've been feeling utterly exhausted for several months, so it's going slowly.

Is Jack really as wimpy as Auriga21 says he is?

Woo I've been waiting for this story to come back

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I suppose that's a matter of interpretation and perspective, but personally I'd argue 'no'. Being self-conscious or nervous around someone you deeply admire, and whom is massively famous and powerful to boot, doesn't make you less of a 'man' in my experience. Just as owning an oversized truck or a large firearm does not make you any better endowed. Jack is a dorky shut-in who unexpectedly was given the opportunity to interact directly with the demi-goddess pony of his dreams. How exactly is he supposed to react to that? Aurigia21 can have his point of view, but frankly, it strikes me as chauvinistic, reductive, and as another commenter pointed out: extremely ironic given that he's reading MLP fanfiction. Honestly, I think he's a troll looking for attention, but that's just my opinion.

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