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SparkStone


I make stories about humans and ponies. Messages about comments are the highlight of my day. I consider myself to be strange, therefore, interesting since I'm not very common.

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Kasin, a low self-esteem 17 year old teenager has just lost everything again. When things seem bleak, he is brought to Equestria where he'll meet six ponies that revive his will to live.

But it won't be all fun and games even if the Elements have a new friend. With the revolutionaries on a rampage, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Kasin must do their best to rise against the foes that threatens the harmony of Equestria and to their friends.

-Takes place before Magical Mystery Cure ever happened, Alternate time line.-
-Story Artist link here! http://ace-catel.deviantart.com/-

Chapters (22)
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Comments ( 178 )

OK...... YOU HAVE ALL MY ATENTION, THESE LOOK GOOD.

Interesting. I would love to see more.

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Thank you, I'm glad you all like this. I'll be sure to post the next chapter as soon as possible.

I really am enjoying this very much. I can't wait to see Kasin meet many of the other characters like the princesses

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I'm glad you like it! I can't wait for it to reach that point too! :twilightsmile:

Good chapter. All three jobs, hope he can multitask well otherwise he's gonna be overwhelmed

While yes this story is still going good I must comment that in all the HiE fics I've read (quite a bit), If the human gets a job, it's either:

1: Sweet Apple Acres
2: The spa lotus and aloe work at
3: Sugarcube Corner

I'm not saying its bad, I'm just expressing my opinion that it's kind of overdone. It's fine though as it's just my opinion and I'm not writing this so it's your choice and it's fine if that's okay with you...

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I have a good reason for doing this. I agree, it's a bit overdone sometimes, but...
I like to twist things around.:rainbowkiss: I just hope I can get to that chapter done to show you soon.:pinkiehappy:

There is bad grammar in the summary. Not exactly a good sign for the rest of the story. :ajbemused:

There's bad grammar in the summary. Not exactly a good sign for the rest if the story.

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I'll check on that, thanks for warning me.

Oh no Kasin's been captured. I fear to think of what may happen to his next

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Did you mean there's bad grammar in one of the chapters, or really just the summary of the story?

This looks interesting, but with the tragedy and dark tags, how much of that are we talking about? I'll give it a go, but if you could tell me it would be most appreciated.

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Dark for past events, such as Kasin's past or Unity's Past.
Tragedy for drama. What's to happen next, who wins or loses, what is to be gained or lost in the expense. I like to follow the way One Piece does it. There won't likely be death, but failure itself has great consequences, don't you agree?

Man that was good. I loved how he openly called Celestia hot.

4077030 Thanks! I'm glad you still like this. :twilightsmile:
Knowing Celestia, she's probably okay with it. :trollestia: Or wants to hear more than that.

That was a great chapter and if I went through what Kasin went through at the zoo at that age I would be scarred for life as well. Glad he got over it though, and made a new friend in the process.

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Fluttershy's probably happy about that too. :yay:

Ooh now Applejack's starting to fall for Kasin? This is going to escalate into a real trial between him and the ponies.

I sense a Emotional Shitstorm in the future, when it hits shit gonna go down! :flutterrage::flutterrage:

Found this story and already caught up to it. And I need more of this story:pinkiecrazy:

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You should be a weather forecaster, because that sounds highly accurate.:rainbowlaugh:

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I'm always working on it. :twilightsmile: Glad you like it! :rainbowkiss:

Add one more to the mares after kasin. More ponies!

Just walked into this one.

Feels a bit odd as Kasin can be a bad ass, near Gary Stu one moment, and an broken, emotional wreck in another.

Still, the story is entertaining, if a little different from the rapid POV shifts, and I am curious to see where it'll end up going.

I liked it. Especially seeing Kasin on a double date with two mares

You should wait and gather 2 chapters. now left with wanting more, your story is one of the best I've read. congratulations:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Heh, some people would find themselves lucky.
Kasin is sadly too shy to see some good in that.:fluttershysad:

Comment posted by fferror deleted Apr 9th, 2014
Comment posted by SparkStone deleted Apr 9th, 2014

Excellent chapter. Especially the fanart or Rainbow and Kasin

Well I can't wait to see what comes after this for sure

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: INFINITE HAPPYNESS NEW CHAPTER YEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Dat fan art. Love the little "Throw" in it as well. Stories going great too.

I just realized they're going to attack the castle while they're at full alert of Kasin's little.... mishap.

Things have already gone amiss for them.

Awesome chapter!
- for the Pairing I would say KasinXTwilight, would make a good story because there already were some hints(like the kiss) and he already had some feelings for her even if it was just a crush. Could be that they come back only stronger this time and the making up between them, because Twilight said in another chapter that she would never date him because he´s Human, would be interesting.
- Applejacks Element is not glowing because she´s not beeing honest with herself about beeing in love with Kasin.
- I have nothing much to say about Commander Gold Shield, only that I like him. ^^
- What happens next? well only you know that, but I think that Applejack is going to be honest with herself about beeing in love, they will find out that Discord helped in this fight by merging Kasin´s personalities and they are going to KICK SOME BUTT!!

An amazing chapter as always. And I can't wait for next time

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Do you have any opinions so far? Maybe about Gold Shield or something else?:pinkiesmile:

You should have add this scene

Kasin: "Alright, Let's go! FOR NARNIA!!!"

All the guard near him stopped attacking and gave him a 'Wat?' Stare

...Awkward silence...

Kasin: "Uh... Nevermind... Attack!!!"

Lol, anyway, well done the story is interesting and Intriguing
Keep up the good work :)

P.S
I vote for Kasin and Twilight / Fluttershy

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Don't ask me why, just my opinion, M'kay.

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