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Careful of your past and present tenses. For example.
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Yeah, it's one of my weaknesses. Thanks for giving me an example to work with, it really helps!
this how she must've felt ^^
I'm painfully curious about the aftermath of this. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom's Reactions would be priceless. I suppose it's more fun to imagine my own ending though. Nice little story though. Very cute without going overboard with the sexual encounter, although that part could have used a little more detail, it was still sweet.
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me too actually, thinking about a follow up, but I'm just not sure where I'd go. Well, the one idea for this to be a series would be that it starts a grand adventure of Scootaloo exploring her sexuality and womanhood and tomboyishness and just letting it be a mutual one night stand between Scootaloo and Rarity, or maybe a friends with benefits, or an open relationship, or an actual relationship with the age gap, I just don't know
And, yeah, I learned something writing this, reading a whole bunch of sexy stories does not make one proficient at writing them. I wanted to avoid being super cheesy, but I think it came off as too short and probably mechanical. It was partially due to it all being really really spur of the moment and by the end of the story I just really really wanted to finish writing so I would finally go to sleep already Xp. Same thing when I was cleaning it up, since the sexy bits were already more fleshed out and I was tired I just cleaned up the formatting and grammar a bit. Part of me wants to fix it over and over again, but that might be a bottomless pit. Instead I should probably try to move on to other projects if I want to keep improving, leaving this as a reminder..
Anyway, I'm being all carrying on and rambly tonight, so I hope you come up with a good ending of your own!! Glad you enjoyed it!
love to see a follow up
This is a wonderful story and there really isn't enough Rariloo around.
6754601 Link to your YouTube channel please.