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If you don't have a grasp of basic grammar & spelling, get yourself an editor before you decide to just throw your shit at the wall to see if it'll stick.
Also if you're character has been kidnapped and forced into sexual slavery, you might want a dark tag here..
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I fear that I don't have any Pre-readers or editors, if I would have had just that I am sure the story would have been more enjoyable but alas, I am not very at home in the whole Fimfic Scene
I do agree on the Dark Tag though, I'll updated that... I suppose it came out a bit darker than the story was originally intended to be.. ow well
Not bad.
I would like to see this continued at some point because it is a decent story with decent clop all you need is a decent editor and you'll make a decent clop writer because it is decent
3958043 Thanks for the comment ^^ , I like to think that I am a reasonable writer but I fear I cant really plan ahead so if I write I make it up as I go.. Next to this I really don't have a clue how to find proper people to pre-read / edit my stories which means that if I write something it always comes out... flawed
Who knows though maybe I will write another story or another chapter to this one sometime I have been toying with a few ideas in my head...
4033385 Even if there are flaws I saw very few in this story.
thank you good sir for this perfect mind bleach!!!
4189057 You are most welcome kind sir
4191733 Well normally people would say that they need mind bleach AFTER something like this... though it is not that dark I guese, could have been a lot worse, you got a basked to sleep in and everything!
the main reason this is good for me is i read scootaloo's master and even if you just read chapter 1
YOU WILL NEED MIND BLEACH!!!!
4194126 Tell me about it, I could not go further then 2 chapters in that, too heavy for me tbh, I like to write / read about scenarios where the "victim" is more or less accepting of it... not tortured and beaten
despite it being, well dark as fuck i love it and have my email update me on it.
if you look at the story i wrote... yea I psychotic...
Can you do more
This seems like its in the making of a really good fic , keep it up and ill be looking for the continuation
think i read a fic about this exact same thing a few months ago....
6262145 Well I don't THINK I blatantly plagiarized anything xD I wrote it in feb-2014, but it has that Rainbow factory vibe going of course so there is plenty of stuff out there that is similar by setting.
Very good grammar for someone with a 'severe lack of understanding regarding basic grammar'.
This is a nice break after reading stories that would make hell look like a joke.
Honestly, if my fate was to become RD's personal sex pet... I probably wouldn't mind whatsoever.
Heck, I'd probably need less convincing than in this story...
And that is the FIRST TIME I have EVER said something like that about ANY fictional character EVER.