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TheFineBrony


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Another day, another show; such is the life of a Wonderbolt.

When Soarin needs to leave his Rainbow Dash behind to go on tour again, he isn’t very happy about it. Luckily his marefriend has already plans for a memorable last evening together. After all, rainbows go well with pie.

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I love this story. Nuff said.

Excellent read. I even ended up shutting the TV off because I didn't want any distractions while finishing it.

It's adorable stories like these that make me love sorindash ship fics:pinkiehappy:

This story was so cute :rainbowkiss:

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Glad you enjoyed it!

Azusa #8 · May 24th, 2014 · · 1 ·

Oh, this isn't a PinkieDash fic.

This is so good I wish there was more

Imma go die now. The feels be too much...:fluttercry: *dies*

That was a pretty cute story, many a d'awww was had. :rainbowkiss:

You really have quite a way with your imagery, I think that this story is a good entry for the contest in the Soarindash group. :twilightsmile:

Good luck!

Man this was a good story and a cute one two if it'd be alright to you if you or anybody else doesn't make a sequel to this i would love to if i have time.and i hope you keep up the good work:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::raritywink:

This was a cute little story :heart:

MAKE MOAARRRR :flutterrage:
Lol joking :twilightblush:

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So... You don't want more?

4510248 I think it would be awesome to have more, but I don't wanna put work on u xD

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I don't know if I'm going to continue this one exactly but you should expect so more cute short stories soon. I'm a one shotter to the end. Rarely do I have the will and effort to make a full blown fic.

4511988 I wuv ur stories >w>

I really like that SoarinDash stor:rainbowkiss:y

need..............MOAR

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Haha, thanks. I don't know really where my writing career is going though...

Comment posted by Deathclaw2014 deleted Mar 31st, 2015

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I had a different view of the story and feel I executed it the way I wanted. You are intitled to your opinion as I am mine. I didn't intend this to be just about soarin eating her out of a pie, I wanted more than that. I wanted emotion, a back story, and a reason. That's just how I work. Thanks for your input.

Comment posted by Deathclaw2014 deleted Mar 31st, 2015

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I didn't take your first comment as mean spirited. I said you have your own opion which you are intitled to. I was merely saying that I disagree with what you are saying. Some people don't like the ways I do things and others do, its a fact of life. I see what you are trying to point out but I politely disagree. I'm not here to argue with you or fight off your claims. I'm proud of what I wrote and I stand by it, that's all I'm saying. Not everyone is going to like what I write, that's something I can't change. But all that really matters is that I'm proud of what I've made.

Comment posted by Deathclaw2014 deleted Mar 31st, 2015

Loved the story:heart::pinkiehappy:

Awww,this was so cute and adorable!:raritystarry::rainbowderp::pinkiesmile:It's nice to see a story from Soarin's point of view!:rainbowkiss: (anybody else thinking we need a soarin-sticker here?:rainbowlaugh: )

“What?”
“Do you realize how weird this is?”
I was like yes!!!!!!!!! thank you Applebloom!!!!!!!!!!!!
“Come on, let’s leave these two alone.”
then I was like yes because this E is about to turn M.If you know what i'm saying.:raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::scootangel::twilightblush::rainbowkiss::rainbowderp::rainbowwild::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

oh yeah but all and all I liked the story!:pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

Behind the scene unfolding Apple Bloom and Applejack stood to watch. The older mare pulled her little sister close to her, as they watched. The filly’s face scrunched and tilted, shaking her head a bit. AJ was happy, their hard work had paid off. Almost an entire day’s worth of work went into making that pie. It was all worth it though to see the end result, Soarin and Rainbow happy. In all the years that she knew Dash, never had she once seen her this happy. Rainbow loved him with every ounce of her heart, as did he to her. The orange earth pony looked down at her sister shaking her head.

I don't think Applebloom should be watching this...:twilightblush:

i thought this fic was going to be… kinky, BUT IT WAS SO GOOD I LOVE THISSSSSSS :HEART:

Everypony knew it was really only a matter of time before she would come a Wonderbolt herself.

And she will be in season 6

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