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Never2muchpinkie


Just your average brony who enjoys writing stories.

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Well, this is my attempt at a short story. I think it turned out better in my head. XP

Filly Derpy wants nothing to do with muffins. Her grandma likes them, but that doesn't mean she does. Can Derpy give up her hatred of these "tricky, not-cupcakes" to enjoy this scrumptious breakfast treat?

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Comments ( 30 )

I came for the cover art, and stayed for the muffins.

You win a muffin.

BTW I saw an instance of muffing about halfway through. Thought you should know.

Not bad. Not bad at all. :eeyup:

YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!!

See this is why I say Derpy is too good for the background!

Derpy? Check.

Muffins? Check.

A short but amazing story? Error....error....can't compute the term "awesomeoneshotyaaaay"

Apart fron the spelling of "muffing" one time, this was actually a really good story! Shows how a short one-shot can do better than a long chapter-by-chapter, haha.

I really am looking forward to reading more from you man!

This is beautiful.
'Nough said.

awww but I love muffins:fluttercry:

This is amazing!

Every, single, one, of your stories, has some kind of despair in it... every... one...!!!

4365338 My evil doomsday device is powered by the tears of my readers. MOWHAWHAWHA!!!! :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss: And you've been the most helpful of all. :yay: :heart:

You do bring up a good point though. I don't have any stories where everything is all happy.

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Thanks, all of you. I didn't think this story came out too good, so I'm glad that all of you got some real enjoyment out of it. I guess I can do a short story every once in a while. I just wanted to ask whether you think the ending would have been more or less impactful if it had ended right after Derpy ordered the muffins, as we already know "the rest is history" so her actually eating them isn't strictly necessary.

4364028 Sure you do...now! But back then you didn't want to try them. Did ya read the story?

4366229 I like it the way it is, and see no need to change the ending.

Yes Yes but the title

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: I just want to hug Derpy now.....

Awwwwww..... :fluttercry: That made me cry... Great job!!:heart:

*Saw Sad category*
Me: Cool I love this genre.
*20 words in, reads about grandma*
Me: She dies
*Finishes story*
Boom

4384557 Sigh...I know. I really didn't want to include the sad tag for that expectation alone. But it would have been dishonest otherwise. Did you at least enjoy it?

Also, if you like the Cake twins I'm doing some short stories revolving around them and Pinkie Pie. So check it out if you're interested, :rainbowwild: They're very DAWWWW and HNNNGG worthy. :pinkiesmile:

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Of course I enjoyed the story!
I just thought it was funny how I guessed correctly on the first time.:rainbowlaugh:

This explains a lot about Derpy... especially her muffin obsession:derpytongue2:

Was every thing muffins at that place? They got Egg and Bagel- Egg, Donuts, and Bagel- Egg and Muffins- Egg, Bagel, and Muffins- Egg, Bagel, Donuts, and Muffins- Muffins, Bagel, Donuts, and Muffins- Muffins, Egg, Muffins, Muffins, Bagels, and Muffins- Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Egg, and Muffins- Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, Baked Beans, Muffins, Muffins, Muffins, and Muffins- Or Golden Crispy, Extra Tasty Croissants with melted butter, garnished with cereal flakes, Brandy, and A Fried Egg on Top, and Muffins.

For reference:

This was so sad. Poor Derpy...:fluttercry:

5272895 your name. i agree with it sooo much.:pinkiehappy:
Also neato storyo

5620300 Well, just like with Rarity and sequins there is the rare time where you can have too much Pinkie.

But when there is just one of her than I agree. She's so cool. If you're a big Pinkie fan you should read my most popular story, "How a Pie became a Cake." It shows how filly Pinkie came to live with the Cakes.

Just look at the cute pics I commissioned for it and I'm sure you'll be hooked.
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Here's the story link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/189993/how-a-pie-became-a-cake

Short but good!!!

Aw this was beautiful. Thought that it had a comedy tag. After all, haven't you read the title? I read about 8 paragraphs in, blinked (I don't know what my obsession with blinking is about...) and scrolled back to the top to check the tags. Nope, there wasn't a comedy tag I was expecting - instead there was a sad tag. I like things in the sad genre and things about Derpy so I continued (I would've even without the tag though :pinkiesmile:) but knew that Derpy's grandma would die. That didn't stop a few tears from trickling out though. Awesome story! Going to my Favoritest Fics shelf :pinkiehappy:

A wonderful story.

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It's always nice when someone finds one of my really old stories. Thanks for reading.

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