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FelixTheBrony


My favourite is Applebloom! Spikebloom is my OTP!

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The second installment to the How It Started series, explaining how Applejack and Soarin became an item.

Soarinjack, obviously, other back ground pairings such as RainbowMac and FlutterBurn.

UPDATE: Added AU because the show decided to give Mac a canon marefriend. *Shrugs* Fair enough, not gonna stop me shipping what I wanna ship though.

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Very interesting shippings. I may have to take a look. It's good to see some different straight shippings, even though I'm a SoarinDash shipper.

Yay, the next installment! Very sweet, as always. Can't wait to see the rest of the pairings.

The orange protagonist of the story

I... I can't decide whether I want to shake your hand or punch you in the face...

4323603 I hope it's to shake my hand, I bruise like a peach:fluttercry:

4323498 Thank you. I hope you enjoy the story, despite your preferences :pinkiehappy:

I'll have to read it later but first let me add it to the SoarinJack group

4323634

Meh, don't worry, I'm too nice a guy to hit you. :ajsmug:

Also, was that a SpikeBloom hint in there?

Nice story. I liked how Aj was in denile the whole time. Best of luck with the next one.

Great story! You kept all the characters true, and I loved the MacDash! Keep up the great work!

jejejejejeje!!!! It was fun to read, and I loved it!

Not a bad story, but it would benefit greatly from an editor. I spotted a good amount of errors in the text and some awkward sentences that just killed the flow of the story.
Also, as a southern man, I would be remiss if I didn't mention the fact that y'all is not a substitute for you. Y'all is a contraction of you and all. Used to address a group.
As I said, not bad at all, but it needs work. Keep at it!

4323730 Not really. Spike and Applebloom get together in A day in Ponyville, so I was just showing that they were friends first.


4323762 Yeah, AJ can be stubborn can't she? :ajbemused:


4324006 Thank you for the kind words, I'll do my best. :pinkiehappy:


4326118 Thank you for the constructive critism, Most people on FanFiction just tel me they like or don't like, I don't think many actually try to help. I'll see what I can do to rectify these mistakes.
Also, do people from the the South just say you then? (Sorry if that comes off offensive, I'm just curious)

Somf of my fav ships are here, I loved it

4326435 Love the story. i'm from the south too, and basically it depends on how formal i'm being with i talk with someone. if its a vip i say you, but if its family or friends i say ya. hope this helps :pinkiehappy:

I have a hunch that that ferris wheel is built that way for a 'purpose'.

*sees a SoarinJack fic*
"Really wanna read this, but I have studying stuff to do."
*sees note about MacDash and FlutterBurn*
"Screw studying. Reading this now!"

4326435 yes, folks from the south say 'you'.

I think this needs a sequel about AJ really having to deal with the downsides of dating a wonderbolt!

5670758 6320142 You know I have been stuck in a writers block, maybe I shoud do a sequel to break it!

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