No character tag for poor Misty Fly!? Oh well…
The lands of Equestria are in ruins, destroyed by mysterious, billowing monsters who devour ponies. Some kind of cursed magic? Nopony knows.
The survivors forge on up in Cloudsdale, and only the re-militarized Wonderbolts go below and only for strategic, tautly planned, rigorously overseen missions. That is, until one day when Misty Fly gets it in mind to surprise her girlfriend, Lyra, with a special gift, and Soarin agrees to be her wingpony.
Same AU as my stories Happy Birthday, Sugarcube and Planted in the Clouds (it would be during the 5th chapter of Planted). All can be read and understood separately but reading all three will add more context and details to the AU.
Chapters (4)
Canon characters without a tag of their own are usually tagged as Other.
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Thanks!
This is a very interesting start of your story and I kind of guess not every characters have their own tag some are category as others or Misty Fly as Wonderbolts but it happens it looks like her and Lyra in the pretty good relationship but they don't know yet I wonder what's up with that guess we'll find out next time
A shame this story doesn't have more likes.
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Thanks! I am nearly done with Chapter 2, hope you will like it. I struggle to not overdo the Applejack parts; she’s my favorite but I’m trying to keep this Misty’s story. 😉
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You won't have any complaints from me if it's all about AJ.
So it looks like soarin and his teammates are securing everything around in Baltimore but when they pass the theater Misty fly had an idea to get Lyra a present he wants to do this by herself but of course they won't let her because going alone is very dangerous especially with those unknown creatures so soarin volunteer to go with her it took them a few hours to find the instrument but they found it unfortunately so did the unknown monsters and they had to fight they're way out of here but finally they got themself out of there but Misty Fly got injured and she is no condition to fly so they had to wait until she recovers while they were getting comfortable Misty confessed that she was in love with Lyra but the problem is she doesn't know if she gotten over with bonbon and she doesn't want to feel insensitive about the situation but sometimes she can't help it all she can do is to give her something for her birthday and these two had a pretty good conversation with each other this is a pretty nice story so far still we really need to know where those creatures came from but other than that this was good I wonder what's going to happen next
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I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! I really enjoyed writing that conversation.
Dang everything just escalated in the story so it looks like sorin and Misty Fly got rescued by the other Wonderbolts when they got to the hospital Rainbow dash wasn't too happy what they did and things got really violent and I have to say I felt like I know she's an emotional state but I didn't like the way how she was acting in that one I just hope she won't be like that anyway Spitfire stop the fight before things got even more violent and she talked with Misty Fly and I will admit that was pretty nice of her to say that and it looks like somebody is visiting her as well I wonder what Misty and Lyra are going to talk about guess we'll find out next time
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I am interested to know if readers felt Rainbow crossed a line so thank you for that!
Aww that was a pretty nice story and it was always nice to see Misty wanted to do something for Lyra even though she almost got herself and Soarin killed but she really wanted to do anything for her but she's not invisible she needs to be careful and not get anybody killed but other than that I think that's the most cutest thing I've ever seen in the ending here this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
I still want to know where those creatures come from but I guess that's another story
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Thanks so much for the encouraging words, and the song! I’m glad you enjoyed this. I promise someday I will tackle those creatures, lol! ❤️
This was a great story dude. I look forward to more from you.
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Thanks so much! This is my 3rd story in this AU and I would definitely be willing to go again, but I might try something different first. We’ll see! Thank you for the encouragement. Glad you liked it.