• Member Since 24th Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Nov 16th, 2018

Whirring Gears

A guy with crazy ideas and a little free time.


[2nd Person Perspective]

"Look out for number one."

That was the way of life back in Clopton. A city where survival was a daily battle.

Having made a few too many enemies, you move to Ponyville with only a bag of bits, the tools of your trade, and a couple jackets to cover the scars you've accumulated in the past. You don't trust anypony as far as you can throw them, but can you mesh well enough into the little country town to support yourself?

It'd probably be easier without that colorful maned pegasus bothering you.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 407 )

Wow. I never knew I was such a jerk.

Sweet. Been following the story since you posted it on Ponychan, now I can just track it here :rainbowkiss:

I'm already liking where this is going...

Great Job Smartass,I Mean Me Not You

Anyway,This Is Now My Favorite Fanfic Great Job

PS:I Agree With Soulsilver.

ha ha ha ha hah hahhahaha! WIN!


Love it, already one of my favourites.

I was waiting for this! :pinkiehappy:
I hope to see more from you.

An amazing story that makes me lmao. Keep being AWESOME


"just wanted to say you can all buck yourselves"

Omg can't wait for Part 5

Man am I an asshole.

wow...he appology will be hard for him

goooood ...one


Then go stick your head in an anthill. Nobody's forcing you to read anything.

YOU ARE A FUCKING TEASE. It puts it on the front page as 'updated' if you edit something. Asshole.

Sorry, I didn't know that. I'll be more careful about it and let people know when things are just editing mistakes.

Lol, take it as a compliment that I'm that pissed you didn't continue the story yet xD

I'm going mad and my good friend McCall 12 is going mad also. We need this like a cancer patient needs to get a tumour removed. samething happens. we don't get story soon we are gonna die and turn into zombie ponies confirmings spikes fear:pinkiesick:

wow, i am a complete asshole!

“...you can all go buck yourselves.” - I can just imagine :rainbowderp: saying "oh no you di'int" in an American accent :p

It's... well, some parts are kind of, sort of, halfway, maybe, a little written. Real life has my free time on lockdown (12 hour days) so writing has been a little slow and I've also been working on a few other projects.

I've decided that I'm not going to wait to write two stories before the next part though and just write what I feel like at the time. I do have a break coming up and if I don't get anything posted by the end of next week, I'll write a short fic about me eating my hat.

yup this guy lost all confidence on friendly ponies

well if you lived in i town with no friendly ponies yeah eventuly you lose
trust on everpony

:rainbowlaugh: yup i'll do the same if i was pissed but at the whole town well i better start packing

yeah i must be crazy:pinkiecrazy: to say that at the town
but at one pony it's diffrent

great story realy unexpected and i like a unexpected thing
except when i get attacked all the sudden

WE DEMAND UPDATES if it's ok with you


They'll be here by the end of the week.

Lol I read this story with a Spanish Accent, Gotta admit, it was pretty fucking hilarious

I hope you haven't abandoned this story cause its great so far.

Thank you all for your patience. I hope that next chapter can come out in less time.

I cannot promise anything, though. I apologize.

That was awesome! If anything, be rest assured that this chapter was DEFINITELY worth the wait! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out, keep up the great work gears!
P.S. I laughed my ass off at the "...fuck." XD

:rainbowkiss: is all I can really comment with

Worth the wait..
Although a shorter wait would be appreciated eheh.. :twilightsheepish:

Brilliant. Just brilliant. I'm, thoroughly enjoying this story, and I can't wait to see how it ends - although, I can guess there's going to be a twist of some sort between then and now.

Keep going!

fuck...FUUUCK. the term in mlp is horseapples

Loved it! So glad you didn't drop this story.

lol that was surprisingly awesome :D :rainbowlaugh:

Oh my god, haha, 'fuck' :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: this story is probably in the top three I've ever read, no one pulls off good OC's, and this is the most detailed, creative, and well written stories on this website!

"Do you know how I got these scars?"
"No, but I know how you got these."

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