Inspired heavily by Noponythere and his stories:Pulling Trough & Reunited. Unfortunately, the author of these is no longer on, but his stories are something you'll like if you're into 2nd person stories.
'With the lovely editing from our traveling Bard, who occasionally stops by from her travels to help this writer create a readable story. Go give her tales a try! Cheers to The Traveling Bard Lyric!
Title card created by: Nightglimmer22
Welcome to High Altitude! New school year is starting in the Pegasi school of Cloudsdale! Also your new school year and that of your best friend; the ever so caring, understanding and friendly ( yeah, you know the colt, the one who pulled the chair from under you when you wanted to sit down in class. ) Dust Cloud! Bucker, but he his your best friend somehow none the less.
Let's see how you manage with the hardships that can come along in a pony's life!
Anyhoof! Let's get you to wake up!
I did enjoy this story. I liked seeing Static's family life, and I had to chuckle because I could relate to the "not a morning person with a mother as a morning person" bit. The whole scene with his family was well described and sweet, and I was smiling often as I read.
That said, there were a number of grammatical errors in this story, too many to point out in this one comment. If you would like, I can point them out to you in a PM. Just send me one if you'd be interested. For now though, cheers!
Don't you hate it when a story updates and you don't see it, well that happens to me with this story.
6422602 Nah, to be honest I removed it for some time. I didn't have the commitment at that moment to write it anymore. So I un-submitted it, so that readers would not linger around the story that might not be updated again. I'm sorry about that, but I thought it was for the better.
6422602 I'll now try to continue it just on my own pace, and try to give an enjoyable story out for those who read.
Miss Pi so her first name is Squre, last name Pi. What's next to this math pegasus her middle name Root?
6466804 Maybe...
First to comment on this chapter
It was really good, I hope you can get more soon, or at the very least finish it, I know a lot of authors who woulda given up by now, but the story is really good.
6496121 Thank you, mate! Personally, I realllllyyyy don't know if this will have an end.
Since it is in the 1st day, about 5-6 hours in and it is already at 40k words.
I want to speed it up a bit once I finish the first day. I want to make an entire school year worth of moments, as well as stuff that happens after school. The story would have no end in sight at that rate.
BUT I do plan on finish this, even if it takes up to 2 years to write it!
'When' I finish this, I plan to make a little 'after story'.
This is a great story so far
6553955 Thank you. I hope I won't disappoint.
I'm definitely enjoying the story. Funny thing, I have a friend IRL whose name is Summer.
6591081 It would be true coincidence, if she were to be your sister.
Heh, great chapter!
A pretty good chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Oh I can't wait for that chapter to come out static trying to avoid the heat crazed mares at school nice job
6658928 Thanks.
*Grins evilly* That... might be a part that may happen...
6669832 My apologies for not being able to deliver faster.
But I'm glad that this story makes you happy!
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You honor me, kind sir!
Aw MAN! This music is EPIC! I mean this chapter was excellent! Really enjoying the story! Keep up the great work! (Yes, I listen to music and read now...)
6680316 Why not both? I do the same very often!
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New chap? CUE THE MUSIC!
Great chapter! Hold on a sec while I try to make sure that all my comments aren't the same... Oh! I really liked the ending and I hope Static meets Rarityat some point. That would be kinda funny.
This stories all right..but this is where I part ways. Your characters aren't flushed out, and the budding relationship with dash seems entirely to rushed. Your OC comes off as a Mary Sue, all the dudes want to be him and all the mares want to be with him...except I can't see any reason why. Not to mention you drag the story in a way that doesn't make sense with the immersion of time. The first 7-8 chapters are about how rushed your OC is to get to school but never mind that because I have to throw in dashxanon as quick as possible. You have potential as a writer man, just need to work on your execution and maybe find a way to smooth out your flow of events.
6733119 Thanks for sharing your opinion and staying for so long.
True, I wanted to hurry up a bit, as to not stay at the same points for too long, and move the story a bit, because, if I truly wanted to write every little thing, chapters would be coming very... very slow + that If I had written everything I wanted, or thought that I wanted, the story would still be maybe at chapter 10 or so.
Also, to be honest, I'm someone who has little patience...
So that might be the cause as to 'why' it is rushed a bit.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Nice chapter, keep up the good work
6796039 Couldn't have said it better myself.
Wow, when I saw the thumnail it made remenber of Pulling trough and Reunited but didn't expect it to be inspired by it!
6890813 Well, it is.
Alright dear readers, I have a question for you all.
Who wants me to write a ponyfied 2nd pov clop fic of this story?
( Each chapter in that will feature a certain scenario and a pony that goes along with it. (( All OC's that are featured in this story as well as canon.))
Don't worry, it will be posted in a separated story so anyone will be able to read this story without the sudden clop involvement.
Thumbs up for yes, down for the obvious.
Don't be so hard on yourself. I liked the chapter! Especially the part with Rainbow Dash's wings.
6894486 Thank you, kind sir!
i noticed since you have this story heavily inspired by noponythere i rememeber he had a second person story idea i think it was about a federal agent and a criminal investigation or something like that it was in a chapter of reunited or the one before it if i were you id look at it and maybe you could write it since he is sadly no longer here just a thought really
7012186 While I apreciate you brining this to my attention, I will likely not write that. It is mostly since I don't have much likeness towards investigations, and I don't want to write multiple stories at the same time. SFFG is my priority.
But I thank you again for brining this up, it was a good suggestion.
Nice chapter! I'm curious to see what happens next! Keep up the great work!
I'm glad I took the tike to read this. It was great!
Oh. OH. Damn. This is canceled? What a shame. Might I suggest listing it as such, rather than incomplete?
7273025 Canceled? No...? Why do you say that?
7277225 My sleep addled state of mind interpreted the paragraph in the description about stories that inspired this (author having gone) as pertaining to this story. Was my bad, sorry.
7278964 No problem! I was scared I accidentally wrote somewhere that I canceled it!
7280449 It would be hard to do on accident. Sorry for the heart palpitations. I should probably get more sleep.
7281196 I think Luna might be able to help with the sleep issue.