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Leucine
I write romance. Sometimes it's bearable!
Leucine
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Fuck yeah. There's not enough gay, R63'd Zecora clop in the world.
Leucine, what's it with you and gay clop?as you know, I has your pastebin, which is filled with the stuff!
Oh please continue this one! That was one of the hottest things i've read
Reading this why is this not tagged Romance?
Seems like it does contain it
4372893
Found it! I like what I see. The Vinyl one is particularly good.
4383183 erm...ok then...coughnaogaycough
That was great. Can't wait for the next chapt-
>Complete
OH COME ON!!!
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That's an oddly specific type of clop, no?
4372893
Clop can make for a nice break from more serious writing. Couple that with the fact that I'm a filthy deviant homosexual and you have your answer.
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4383824
You people are going to be the death of me. Okay, I may write more in the future but right now I've got RL matters to deal with and then there's the small issue of other stories to convert first.
4377509
I would prefer to reserve the romance tag for stories that are overtly romantic. There may be some romantic undertones to this but that's just my inability to resist injecting some even into straight up clop.
4383183
I'm beginning to think I should just add a link to my pastebin on my profile. It's not like it's that hard to find it, after all.
4408775 ...yeah well I'm not going to hang round theses parts anymore,not to be the racist homophobic person i am.
4408775 What can I say? I likes what I likes.
Wow, this was... Good! I really loved the set up for the story, just the right amount of lead in for dusk and his personality, and his connection to zircon before things get intimate. And zircon was great. I could just picture this big strong stallion speaking in a deep but gentle voice as he talked to dusk, and it had this very warm and exotic feel to it.
The sex was a little rough for what I enjoy (not a fan of deepthroat, just seems uncomfortable) . And I was hoping to see some anal action as well as some pillow talk afterwards, but those are just personal things I like.
You did a really good job with this. Thanks for adding some decent m/m content.
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To be praised by someone like you is more than I'd hoped for. We all like to think an author we respect might one day think something of us but to see it actually happen is quite something else.
There's nothing saying another chapter couldn't be written. Because, if I'm to be honest, I prefer that kind of gentle, self-indulgent lovemaking but felt it would've been out of place in something so short.
5090901
I would say leave this chapter as is: you wrote what you felt worked for the story, no need to add a whole other section if you think it feels out of place.
But PLEASE write more clop stories if you feel the urge! I feel like you'd be keeping something great from the clop community if you kept your ideas from being published.
Hoping to see more from you in the future.
First off thank you for putting your talents to quality m/m fiction; truely a hero of our time. That being said, try to tone down the language a little, like at the beginning, to keep it from sounding too pretentious. I do the same thing. But, when it got down to buisness it evened out. The action was great, but I wanted to see you branch out more with the scene.
5090901
Don't be afraid to make it longer if you feel the scene needs more. I really think it would have been amazing if you'd put more into it and I'd deffinitly read more to see it happen. Keep it up!
this needs another chapter.
Well...I must certainly say this was a new ship to me....And one I think I'm growing rather fond of...
I would love to see this story continue
Very nice. I was disappointed at how quickly it ended, though. After all that buildup with Dusk's feelings and desires, ending right after the orgasm without letting Dusk react a little makes it feel incomplete. Still hot, though.
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Yes, I've thought that myself but unfortunately it's taken a comment stating such to get me to do something about it. I don't think it'd be dishonest to go back and edit in a proper ending. Thank you for the criticism, though. I only wish more people were willing to give valuable feedback.
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Happy to help! Let me know when you're finished with the rewrite - I'd love to give this story another look.
oh god this needs real action
was hot regardless
Sequel?