• Member Since 23rd Jan, 2013
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JXWheeler


I am a small time story-writer trying to get his stories published. If I can get any of my fanfictions or original stories published I'd be one happy pony! Look for J. X. Wheeler in a library soon!

Comments ( 67 )

This is turning out to be very interesting. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

Forward Unto Dawn as the name, but no crossover tag or Halo references in the description?

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Sorry, but someone had to do it!

:rainbowwild:

4115579 Because Halo has no influence on the story whatsoever. Keep reading, heartstrings will be broken and feels will be felt later. :ajsmug:

well it started out good then it began to feel rushed at the end, especially after the trial.

4116127 Chapter 1 and 2 were originally supposed to be one chapter but we decided to separate them due to how many words the readers would have needed to read. It may feel rushed, but a lot of though have gone into every response and action. War is never a slow thing, more times than none it has thrust itself upon us like a lion pouncing a deer.

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I understand that but the things that lead up to the event are usually slow to a degreeandersons.co.za/pics/lion01.jpg

4116239 The original plan was to have more events happen that lead up to it. However I figured it would get boring for the reader and would drag it out too much.

4115579 I couldn't help but think that either XD

I look forward to your work.

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you do have a point there but adding a little more meat would be beneficial... at least in my opinion.

4116377 I guess I could have added maybe one more scenario to it... but there's no turning back now. The collaborators are ready to work on the next chapter.

4116338 I shall aim to please!

{I made it!} He thought

The phrase 'I made it' is not a set for a Venn diagram. Change it to italics with no brackets, add a comma and then change the 'h' after it to be lowercase.

And here I was thinking I caught all the errors in advance.

4117104 Really? Huh, okay then. Ill do so tomorrow.

Edit: Fixed!

Yay, this thing's finally up and running. :pinkiehappy:

You might want to put an Alternate Universe tag on this, just to be safe.

4119514 whats alternate about it? Theres no halo.

You kind of got Luna wrong

4122225 She hasn't used Old English since Season 2

4122228 when a royal uses old english to a noble, it is to show they have lost respect for that person, or in this case, that pony. That's what we used.

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If I thought it was a Halo crossover, I'd tell you to use the crossover tag.
But instead, what you've wrote seems to directly contradict canon. After all, it seems pretty obvious by now that Discord isn't turning evil again any time soon.

4122228 As the writer for Luna, I feel the need to clarify. Luna's old English was a way of showing that a) she was angry, and b) she had lost respect for Celestia.

It won't be as present in the future.

4122958 Does that not mean 99% of the stories on this site is alternate universe since its non-canon?

4124791
By that logic, then nothing would be labeled an AU fic. An AU fic is when something directly contradicts the canon. If it could concievably happen in the same universe as everything that happens in the show, it's not an AU fic

4125057 that explains a lot, thanks.

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

Interesting take on the whole "evil Celestia" thing so many authors make.

4237666 Yes but also she will do more then just beating ponies up.

4237669 "Originality" is something I like to do. I take concepts and add little twists to it. As for Rainbow Dash? Ive made it mature gore for a reason :ajsmug:

The name drew me in, and the description finished the job. Into my read later you go, since I don't have much time to read this and I have stuff to work on.

4237666 I now know you ask this on every story... Lel

Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted May 12th, 2014

4313260 basically "lol" but with an e

Comment posted by JXWheeler deleted May 31st, 2014

4313248 As long as you enjoy reading it in the end, no problem can be found.

4314480 chapter 2 will hopefully be out during the month of May. Stories as long and with a storyline like this takes weeks of planning and debating.

4544937 Hee hee, I even have one for Luna's side, you will see it in the next chapter. Check my blog for the latest update!

Comment posted by FenrisianBrony deleted Nov 29th, 2014

5318760 It's not dead, ive decied to do the writing myself until everyone is able to come back to working on it.

5323992
Ah. Cool. I can still do Discord bits if you message me when you need me.

5324857 might need you for other parts too.

5325251 Sweet, can you help with some of the main six? Preferable the ones it says im writing for. Except Twilight and Rarity, I have special plans for them only I can portray.

5326383
I'll try, although I won't be able to do anytjing till Tuesday earliest

4351843
Um... Not trying to rush you but... It December. Did something happen?

5345642 Timezones are quite the bitch. Not to mention one of the people quit on us due to personal issues. Ive currently taken up the reigns until the rest are able to help out.


5326638 Check the google doc and do what you can as the characters.

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