One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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Yes, finally an update.
Hol-E-CAPITAL-S-MOTHERFUCKING-SHIT
If you could sell words. you would make a fortune.
Plot that hasn't been explored before - Check
Aspects that haven't been explored before - Check
Funny celestia, but not pushing it - Check
Believable characters and none TOO canon - Check
I can't thank you enough for this wonderful Morning AM treat
Though i should probably go to bed now
Oh shit. An update.
I'm just assuming that one pony has a weird quirk for restating the last few words of any given sentence he says instead of it being mistakes.
Maybe he's the one they send in to destroy nuke launching robots and it's a habitual thing after having insanely silly plans hefted against him?
YAY i was so excited for the new chapter the only complaint is you need to write more i was worried it was dead........so when is the next chapter coming loved how you explained nightmare moon. great twist to the story. please continue to write this amazing take on mlp.
strikes again.
Twilight's reaction to the God Ball was interesting. Hints at her Ascension?
Ooh, Selena is going to be Pissed! Y'all thought canon Luna had a hard time, by gosh Selene has it forty-two times worse!
Keep going! ;)
This has so much hype.
Also, black Spark is officially an asshole.
That would be hilarious.
She gonna be pissed off later.
I didn't know that the moon has a sense of humor.
I kid thee not oh Sir Cross. He he. Blue Cross, blue shield. Just like that annoying insurance company.
6533091 I agree with you completely Fine Sir.
Someone think of some thing funny and think of it fast.
*Sips Coffee*
That's a good cup of coffee.
So sad i knew a blind friend
Damn cliffhangers, always killing the story till the next update.
Anyway great chapter.
Awesome, and well worth the wait. Please continue.
AHHHHH dam you cliff-hangers
Oh so worth the wait for this chapter. That last bit was the best.
nothing more to say
Well that was interesting! So lovers not sisters and a dirt poor commoner is a Princess. Yup Black Spark will be wanting some hard booze right about now.
Luna not bring her sister is a friggen twist and a half... But also an amazing story idea I haven't seen before. I hope we get to delve a bit into there courtship.
Also yay update!!!!! Thanks for continuing this amazing tale.
While Luna being Celestia's mate here is... odd on many levels this was a very noce chapter. Also:
I had so many Inferno vibes from this.
6533462 If you're going to make a statement like that, the least you could do is use proper wording. It is your cue to leave, not que to leave. A queue is a waiting line. #themoreyouknow
It was a bit of a shock, since I was honestly expecting this to turn into a TwiLuna, but I'll be patient and see where it goes. It's still too early to tell how things are going to develop, after all.
I'm sorry—I see what you're trying to accomplish, but… no. This is terrible to actually read. If you want to give a character an ‘demonic echo,’ just describe it in the narration.
Also, I don't have anything against Luna being Celestia's lover instead of sister… but she's not stupid enough to make it the first thing she tells Selena about her previous life. Overall, I just felt that this chapter was rather forced
6533831 It isn't a demonic echo, it's part of her speach, she is physically repeating herself whenever she speaks.
It's actually a reference to one of the Redwall books, although I can't remember specifically which one.
I love it.
LOL LOVE IT hope to read more soon
Eh, not really a fan of the ship, even if they're not related in this story, but oh well.
That was an interesting curve ball, had to stop reading for a few minutes due to the laughing.
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If that's so, then I take back my statement that “I see what [the author is] trying to accomplish.” That just makes it even worse, though, because it makes absolutely no sense.
6533831 If I had that particular verbal tic, I think I would develop the habit of packing more information into fewer, longer sentences, longer sentences.
6533831 I don't know, I prefer it over the over-the-top southern accents some people seem compelled to give the Apple family. Besides, if it bothers you that much, you just don't read the last three words of every sentence she speaks.
6533952 kinda obvious if you pay attention, and I know I've seen that tic in other places as well.
Another chapter that had me giddy, max. GJ
6534364 I'm fine with it so long as it's kept consistent, either as a tic that character has, or as a cultural thing for batponies. I feel that it helps to create a more memorable character by giving her a slight quirk sort of like Zecora's rhyming, but doesn't do so in such a way as to make the character annoying.
What more concerns me is that she drops it midway through the chapter, that annoyed me more than anything else here. Why did she drop something she does seemingly unconsciously? It just doesn't make sense.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
This chapter pleases me.
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Considering how much intermingled situwtions we have now I can't wait what future chapters will hold. But I am quite sure it will contain blood ceremonies where ponies of all 3 tribes rip their forelegs off in order to magicly rasie Selena's wings. Because it's satanic as fak.
loved it sooo much cant wait for the next one
but what no, why is there no more chapters. I'm so confused why is my friend Mr. Next not there
Please can you help me find him
Loved the new chapter, was hoping it would update soon, and itdid!
I look forward to more.
I do hope she meets Care again.
Finally got around to reading this story freaking awesome!
Fuck you, how dare you end it there? Now I need to wait again for another chapter!
When's next chapter?!
The mate fact surprised me a little and..
HOKYFUCKANEWCHAPTERFINALLYIWAITEDANEONYASSSS
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Never Be Royal
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Eh, not a fan of the whole 'Celestia and Luna are mates' thing, but whatever, I'm sure you don't care about that.
Everything else is fine tho.
Another great update. Took quite a while, but I'm not one to be impatient.
Quite a shock there for everypony at the end. I'm curious to see how Selena takes the sudden change of status. Somthing tells me she is going to hate it as she's still quite bitter about her past; and will most likely be firmly against everything that will happen.
We'll see.
Until then
-x223blackwolf
Super happy to see the update; thank you for getting back to this.
And---make no apologies for the Celestia/Luna pairing; it works great for the story you're telling, and that's all that matters here. Making them not be actual sisters as well... well, that's surely the politically wise move, though I see any objections there as being similar to the lingering objections to gay and lesbian couples--something we'll grow out of in due course, accepting any and all loving relationships as valid so long as everyone is both adult and consenting.
The thing that genuinely bothers me about this story is Celestia's maiming--to be both immortal and so powerful, and to be crippled like that, it's difficult to watch as my favorite goddess of the sun deals with that day after day after day.
I imagine your angle here is to show the lingering pain and sense of being crippled that resulted from Luna's death, manifest in physical form to drive it home for the reader. I suppose it WOULD lessen the impact if her centuries of grief were spent as a shining and immaculate personification of perfection, with all her pain on the inside, where it would doubtless be hidden so well as to be nigh invisible.
So, okay, I get it... I just hope you have a card up your sleeve to deal with it at some point; say, having such things as Celestia's maiming (and Selena's blindness) only be curable via Alicorn magic, so that in the end they can heal each other physically, just as being reunited heals their inner pain and loneliness.
I hope you're heading in that direction; I'll definitely be watching anxiously to see.
Again, thank you for sharing your work with us.
Please tell me there isn't going to be another time skip right here, as there was between the last two parts. I'd love to see what happens directly following this.
Hope to read more soon
Been a month now must be big chapter