One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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You forgot to add "ing" in the last paragraph: "Not know that......." Other than that amazing work!
5295577 5295587 Zank you.
That seems a bit of an odd place to end part 1, but I suppose you know what you're doing. I love how you're giving us little glimpses of stuff from the show as well. It's a great way to show when the story is taking place. I don't think I've said this yet, but I really enjoy this fic. There's not enough handicapped pony stories out there IMO.
5295836 Wing thing?
I'm really interested with how The whole prophecy thing will happen in this universe:
Not only is Luna not sealed in the moon (I think), this Celestia will probably ingrain Twilight with a lot of subtly different ideas than her canon self. After all, this Celestia seems more strict and jaded, who know how that'll transfer? And how will Twilight and Celestia play off Selena if she's probably Luna?
There is one thing I absolutely hate about this story...
It isn't finished so I can binge read it. Fffffuuuuck, I hate when this happens. "Oh look, there is an awesome story! Let's start reading it right away!" *finishes till the latest chapter* "But... What do I do now?"
Great Chapter.
Saddly, its time to wait.
5296277 5296137 Zank you.
5295836 During Celestia's battle with The Nightmare her wing was crippled and now hangs limply at her side. The harness keeps it from dragging on the ground.
This was explained like two chapters ago, we're you not paying ANY attention?
Hmm, well if she's by the flower shop..... I don't know, there was going to be something witty here, but we forgot.
Even in a town as big as Ponyville, I would think someone would have noticed an out-of-school filly wandering aimlessly through the town, or ponies are just that oblivious.....
I'd like to think Big Mac let her take the apples, but I'm not quite certain due to the expected mental state, but since we haven't officially met him I can't really judge character, can I?
Keep going! ;)
Amazing chapter! Eagerly waiting for more!
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End of part 1?
Woah...
Bruh. She's hearing her mother sing.
how long until her dream powers catch up to her?
That last sentence reminds me of Harry Potter, I think the end of the very first chapter.