One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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dunno, probably try to restore her.
and how would that work anyway? Will Luna be blind forever? How will she have her body back?
All these question will not be answered, on Lunar rebirth.
Only mistake i noticed was I think Prayeth should be prithee, or, maybe pray thee if you wanted it to be contemptuous.
enough initiative for Selena → enough incentive for Selena
Realized.
5571118 5571297 5571703 Thanks for the finds
You know, Pinkie was never one of my favorite characters, but this story is slowly changing that. You go, Pinkie! Help that poor filly out!
Characteristically Pinkie to have a bizarre solution. Still I'd like to think that she'd realize that said pony probably should be living inside.
How long has it been since she ran away from the orphanage anyway?
After eons of waiting, the next HALF chapter is out.
That sucks, an entire day spent with no food or drink....
Twilight isn't as observant as we'd hoped she'd be, I think even I would discover someone's blindness after conversing with them all day. Though not at first (we had an embarrassing moment with a kid playing his DS and were accidentally quite rude, oops!). It should have been noted as strange that the mare always keeps her cloak as low as possible, to the point of not being able to see, even while walking...
The micro voice things remain very interesting and hint at some neat possibilities....
Keep going! ;)
So nice to see an update.
This is quite a different type of story for me compared to my other subscriptions, but its quite refreshing. Slice of life rather than the usual.
So she goes hungry. Pinkie to the rescue. And Spike goes hungry too. Thats ok, he can be left to catch mice in the basement I guess. And Twilight never quizzed her about this magical shadowing even though thats what she wanted the whole time... Or is she just more subtle than to pry secret spells from a unicorn on the first date?
5579759 Thank you for the find.
So Twilight's bringing Selena with her to a picnic with her new friends. . . all of whom are Ponyville natives and likely know (or know of) Selena quite well.
We already know Pinkie is likely to react.
The other four will be very interesting to see.
5579796 do try using this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhEU3EF4jvM to help selen remember that she is luna and this for a lesson she will learn https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZfGTL2PY3E and maybe this if someone from ulnas past found out that luna is rebirth https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZfGTL2PY3E
i applaud your writing ability, Selena is beautify characterised
Max
5612471 'Ello
Oh Pinkie your so nice
I think I prefer and update of this instead of YHaY. This is damn good.
5675820 Goddammit Solaire, I didn't call you for jolly cooperation.
I like this story....alot....
Not the quickest with updates. But seeing how it isn't the most popular, that's understandable.
Looking forward to more updates! Which story, doesn't matter.
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Apologies brother... Embrace the abyss.
5691874 I much prefer the gray. Despite the obvious dragon problem. Off I hide like the dragon in ash lake, I should be good.
More. Please. My brain can't take the suspense... I'm probably gonna die from lack of explanations... Help....
5717964 agreed moar please
And the rest of us can't wait for that friday either.
Pinkie has done this a lot hasn't see...?
*sniff* That's why you're my favorite party pony!?!
Jeez, I hate it when that happens.
5928930 she probably ate something toxic. You can eat dandelions and hen bit, as well as various other plants, but some, like buttercup and field mint, are quite poisonous.
Awesome story very good take on the nightmare moon situation wish people would do more stories like it.
In my opinion, Pinkie is best pony in this story.
I hope you realise how HARD it is to read all of this so far in one go. There's just so much sadness...
“Aren’t you already supposed to clean the library?”
A large part of her half-expected a bunch of guards to be waiting for her outside. There weren't any, however.
Holy hell, Pinkie Pie is a saint. You have made her Best Pony for this story, so far.
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No i call foul, there is no way Pinkie would stand for anyone living like that if she know of it. She would spend all her money if that's what i took to see her feed daily she would never have to steal anything if pinkie know how bad her conditions where, hell i would not be surprised if she even built a small house for her.
I can't imagine Pinkie Pie not waking up the poor filly and taking her home like a stray dog. She's just too nice and caring to let anypony sleep outside in the rain. Seems out of character that Pinkie is allowing her to be homeless.
This story makes me sad and happy I love it pinkie your the best
Rrally, Spike?really?
Madmax! Raise thee thy red flag! For we have spied a great plot point!
I've seen a few comments saying Pinkie wouldn't just leave her out there. I would like to raise a counter to those. Pinkie is much smarter then she lets on. She's most likely figured out that Selena must have had a reason to hide in the alley. She may not know the exact reason, but Pinkie might feel like forcing Selena to shelter within Sugarcube Corner would not make Selena happy. Pinkie doesn't like making ponies feel sad, nor does she like seeing sad ponies. She's probably conflicted because of this, because she doesn't know how to make Selena happy, but doesn't want to force Selena into doing anything, as that would increase Selena's unhappiness. Which is why Pinkie is going out of her way to at least sneak her some food, and even went as far as setting up that rather clever umbrella holster. It's all she feels she can currently do, that wouldn't scare Selena away. Well, that's my take on it, anyway.