One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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Blackie you bastard. Leaving us with that horrible, downright evil cliffhanger.
The worst part is that's like the only place I can see to put the cliffhanger, and that if I was writing I would put it there too.
Update XD
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AKA it makes you wanna read the next chapter?
i guess he succeeded then!
Noticed two small errors; one when you were talking about Twilight's thought being with Selene, I assumed you meant to type "at the hospital", instead of "at the library."
And then being vain is having inflated self important, while veins are what you need to carry blood.
Also obligatory death threats because of cliff hanger yadda yadda.Wow I wonder how Selena is going to react to this. Wow Tia took some damage in that fight, I do not remember her being that beat up from that fight at the beginning of the story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm loving this story more with each update but the cliffhangers are killing me...
6114489 B-but... if I don't put them in, what will keep you coming back for more?
Is it okay that I cry at the sight of a new chapter and completely ignore the yhay chapter?
YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS YAS YAS YAS YAAAAAASSSSSSSSSAASSSSSSSSSSSSSS IM WAY MORE EXCICTED THAN I SHOULD BE!!!!!!!!!!
*Clicks Link*
...And role credits!
Written by M.M.T. Black
Produced by Guillermo Del Toro
Directed by Clint Eastwood
Kate Beckinsale
Antonio Banderas
Randy Couture
Sean Connery
and featuring Willem DaFoe
as Fluttershy
Lunar Rebirth
Cliffhanger… We meet agian.
I LOVE IT WHEN THIS STORY UPDATES...!
It makes me so happy!
New chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now THAT was an evil place to stop.
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Then the nurse comes in, "okay everypony, visiting hours are over, Selena needs her rest! Doctor's orders!"
Side note, my keyboard just auto corrected TO everypony. What is happening?!?
Keep going! ;)
I really love the story and hope you update again soon been waiting forever for that last one
I was thinking about it, and I kinda wondered if "The End" would be the last line of this chapter.
6116472 Pinkie should have come back with an axe.
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yes she can.
"Luna"
Cliffhanger
-Punches a hole through the wall-
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
-Proceeds to flip the f@ck out-
I figure I should write a comment instead of just clicking the refresh button ( I think I broke the like button too).
First-off wow that was the mother of all places to stop. So far the story is fantastic all characters are properly interpreted. I really do like the direction you are going with Selena. She isn't a carbon copy of Luna and can can stand on her own without Luna's influence. That being said I like the Luna connection. I can't wait to see how frustrated, hopeful, confused, and bat-sh@t crazy Celestia gets.
Now if you'll excuse me I'm gonna go take a cold shower, punch my wall again, and run naked through the streets because it's just that kind of day... I mean night. I read this all day and did nothing else. Sigh these authors will be my undoing.
I've found that for the last two chapters you use the word "frog" instead of hoof. I'd suggest you change that.
6121443 the frog is the fleshy part of the hoof that is located behind the hard, nail-like surface. Kinda like the palm of a hand.
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She wouldn't get a good feel for the object if she used her actual hoof, as it has no real feeling in it.
Excuse me while I proceed to smash my head against a wall at that cliffhanger. lol. Loving the story. Keep it up!!!!
This is not a cliffhanger, this is hanging off the edge of mount Everest
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>replies to 60+ week old comment
Holy shit, I didn't even remember this story was a thing.
Sadly, I don't read anything anymore. Also sadly, I have no idea what you're talking about since I forgot all of this.
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"Properly interpreted", huh? I get what you're saying, but that's a very opinionated remark.
I got the impression that she was supposed to be a reincarnation of sorts. That said, she IS Luna, just not the Luna that she used to be. (Selena, Luna -- the moon) Of course she's different, since her life experience has been different and she's never had any clue what her cutie mark means. By which I mean that duty and responsibility for the moon and Equestria has never been her burden. Perhaps I misunderstand, but so far I'd say it's not really Luna' influence so much as a locked away part of Luna/Selena's mind. It is somewhat nice to see something about Luna that's a bit different than the usual portrayals (even if I do like those and this does bear a vague resemblance).
P.S.
If reading eleven chapters will be your undoing, then their shouldn't be anything left of me. I once read fourty chapters straight in one sitting.
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For what it's worth, there is quite a variety of interpretations of what a pony's hoof is made out of/looks like. It runs the gamut from 'marshmallow hooves' to essentially being like a real horse. I don't see how a horse/pony could even touch anything with it's frog anyway.
Perfect song for this chapter.
*slowly shakes head in disappointment*
You just HAD to sneak that in, didn't you?
So, a small part of Selena recognizes Celestia, but poor Selena has no idea who the big naked alicorn is or why she's here
Also, awwww, Selena/Twilight fluff~♡
6151728 I agree with you on those characters. Unfortunately it means there's a bit of a line for that action. So it's first come first serve on that.
Caught up!
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I remember discussing something with you, once, in great length...
Can't remember what and when tho.
How long till next update?
6119479 In the distance, somepony listening carefully might be able to faintly hear a voice yelling:
6185371 Thanks for the finds.
6182603 It's currently in the works. I have a progress meter on my homepage for my readers' convenience.
Officially caught up and oh my gods I want that next chapter soooooo badly now!
I want them to hug awkwardly...is that okay?
I love this story hope to read a new chapter soon
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She would get better/She was getting better
It
extra word
Oh, I so hope Celestia learns that Rainbow beat up her little sister in the next chapter. And I look forward to when the rod up Rainbow's ass is bent until she screams.
PS: I still can't believe I missed two years of chapter updates!
Hold on Lulu.. big sis is comming
And this, right here, is how you see the signs of a true tyrant.
give him power, and he uses it to execute without trial.
don't give him power, and he takes the "liberty" of "easing a burden" off your shoulders.
You let that shit slide, and he'll glide upon the ranks like a graceful knife.
Ah, that must be the doorbell.
Ah, how heartwarming. I'm beginning to think Luna "resides" in Selena, kind of like a backseat driver.
Now if only she would say those worda..."tia".
Relateable
MadMaxtheBlack
Im so Bipolar on reading you. You are one of my favorite Authors on this site. You have three stories on my top 20 list across the board, not just FIM, but my top 20 of all time. and yet, You have me beating my head on my desk when I listen to your work. You drive me up the wall. You focus on the weirdest things and describe the hell out of it for 20 minutes. Or you have a character be so clueless that he is so dense he shouldn't be able to breath. And yet these are masterful stories worth reading.
I can't wait to see a chapter on one of your guys going to the bathroom. I know you. you make it a 20 minute description like your food or dream sequences, and you'll describe everything, from excerpts from the back of shampoo bottle he is reading, to just how he folds up his toilet paper. Hell, i bet you would even include him playing with empty toilet paper cardboards. Cause you do that, you grab some sequence that has zero important to the plot or the story, and you'll just run with it...for a solid half chapter.
Shine on you crazy diamond
The Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller
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I will admit... I love lore building, even if said lore is the back of a shampoo bottle. There was a moment in my writing where I was doing a lot of it, but recently I've been trying to get better about it. Alas, though, sometimes you just got to spend 20+ paragraphs describing that perfect taco, brah.
Slag