One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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UPDATE!!!!!! YYEEESSS!!!
…and the Element of Impetuousness strikes again! I honestly want to see a story where Rainbow’s hot‐headedness gets her killed. You don’t do stupid impulsive shit like that without eventually managing to piss off the wrong person but she always manages to dodge karma.
This story is amazing. Sad, but amazing. Also, you spelled "idiot" Idjit at one point.
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No words can describe how amazing this story you have created is. I can't wait for the next chapter!
5900003 Is that honestly the definition of Idjit? I always thought it was a more severe form of idiot!
No wonder I still have friends
Oh my god so awsome
You're just teasing, Blackie. You're just teasing. WHEN IS TWILIGHT GONNA WRITE THAT REPORT TO CELESTIA?!
5900003 oh. I did not know.
5900140 It's okay. Most people don't know that it's an actual word, those filthy idjit.
Thank you for pointing out what you thought was an error though.
5900155 So that really is a real word? Wow Ive been callign people idjit for years since i watch the show supernatural.
5900155 Hay! Don't call me an Idjit! I don't actually care. Besides, you learn something new every day, right?
Ya know... I was almost certain she had a cutie mark ... so how come that wasn't noticed ... hmm ...
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She's covered in so much dirt that it's not visible at the moment. Hopefully she'll be able to get a nice washing at the hospital.
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You know, I was thinking that was the case but apparently I was far too lazy to look again. Doh!
I just hope you can pump these out faster, it's an amazing story.
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idjit is a word it's a cawntryism. Bobby Singer (rest his soul) used it in Supernatural all the time.....
Oh, the emotions. Very cute story. Better than this parade of slavery and mazohistic xenophilia you have.
Oh, jesus, Twilight, the fuck?
Great! She's been captured, but the road to recovery is a long one.
Wouldn't that be a joke, calling for the guards! You know you're desperate when you threaten to call upon your neutral enemies...
Keep going! ;)
Oh yay! You're already working on the rough draft of the next chapter! I can't wait!
I'm been waiting for something honestly happy to happen since chapter prologue and YEEESSSS. Twilight ftw. Healing must begin!
Don't you dare make things worse for her! Not for Sel cause it is destroying me how miserable she has been since the prologue.
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Good example of the word imo.
Rainbow is kind mare. She wouldn't punch her. Catch her yes but she wouldn't hurt her. Lots of authors don't know how to write Rainbow Dash. Even from the show we can see she isn't agressive but kind.
Rainbow needs her ass whupped.
While I suppose you could look at it as her body having been recently emancipated (freed) from the cloak, I believe the word you're actually looking for is emaciated (thin from malnourishment).
I think you mean that she had forgotten to look for food
Why. The buck. Is. This. So. Uneventful?! I've waited decades! Ugh!
Also I cried. Good chapter.
ive been waiting ages! still worth it
I'm not sure whose return from the dead is more impressive: Selenas/Luna's or yours.
Yea! New chapter!
5900868 She is aggressive, she attacked a fucking dragon ! However, it's still a show for children, so violence between ponies is not a good thing.But I can see you're point, her agressivity is exaggerated, and I agree with you on this.
Alright, very interesting concept.
I also see that you're using the name that Lauren originally gave to Luna
And now! Onwards to read!
Finallydecided to catch up from the second chapter. . . NOW YOU HAVE ME HOOKED! I NEED MY CONSTANT FIX MAX!!
5908668 Currently, yes. But I had the blank pic when I posted it.
oh my...
The story is left with this suspense, wow.... Talk about a cliffhanger
Yet another story of yours I love... I just love your writing, dude.
Sweet Celestial, some pony get that mare a buffet on the double!
Hey, I know this scene! Heheheh, *sigh* gooood times.
5923709 No no no. A buffet would be a baaad idea with that degree of malnutrition. She needs small but frequent, easily digested, high nutrition meals.
Nitpicks:
delete "could result", or rewrite the part of the sentence after it.
"don't look good,"?
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Killed would be overdoing it. Frankly I'm surprised she isn't crippled yet from the number of times she crashed into something or other (at least in the show).
Finally Selena is getting the help she so desperately needs.
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK TWILIGHT! YOU DO NOT PICK UP A BLIND PONY BY A LEVETATION SPELL! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA OF HOW SCARED AND DISORIENTED SHE MUST BE! Like what the actual hell Twilight, she's not going to be able to trust you after making her that disoriented.
Might wanna check your cooking license, Twi, before you give your poor guest food poisoning.
I don't even think spike likes your food, and he eats like a fucking goat.
What the actual fuck, Twi? You would lift a probe and blind mare off her hooves with no regard for her comfort? Damn, gurl. You hard.
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That's because she has +20 awesomeness
+20 speed
+10 strength
and the Element of Harmony Packagae, which comes with BS Karma, 'fucking bawler laser beams', an cool necklace and +50 to universal reputation.
In short, she is the Mary Sue of professional Wrestlers, only a universal celebrity with unchecked anger issues and a dangerous impulse that Princess Sunbtt most likely silently deals with behind the scenes.