One-thousand years after her death, Luna is reincarnated into the body of a blind unicorn mare.
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Shouldn't that be While? It seems off to me but I ain't no not an editor.
I'm a little confused about the wing thing? What's the deal with that?
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Warm Care is finally starting to figure it out... talking to certain bullies doesn't do a thing to them. They don't care. Honeysuckle certainly doesn't. She has a penchant for cruelty and because she's probably bigger and stronger then the other foals, they'll follow along with her like a herd.
No, she needs a special sort of punishment. Have her visit a prison where all the bad ponies go. Have her hear stories from ponies who started out like her and wound up behind bars. Let her see the scars, the broken spirits of those who could not show kindness and compassion to their fellow ponies.
Or just have a horrible accident happen to her. This seems the sort of story where bad things happen to bullies. Getting clobbered by Selena was a good start.
Sanguinelli will perish delivering Applebloom, won't she?
Selena's adventure begins! Or maybe not...
Keep going!
Is this perhaps meant to be "Snugly"?
5296954 Warm Care is finally starting to figure it out... talking to certain bullies doesn't do a thing to them. They don't care. Honeysuckle certainly doesn't. She has a penchant for cruelty and because she's probably bigger and stronger then the other foals, they'll follow along with her like a herd.
As someone with first hand experience, I agree. Talking with certain bullies does jack to help. Then again, what does?
Shit man, now I'm all sad and stuff, I guess that was the point though.
I'm kind of surprised this hasn't come up yet, but... did you edit this chapter? Or did you predict the future when you put Starlight Glimmer on the list of ponies participating in the entrance exams?
Oh im sure it will. It will also be Hella painful on its own.